
Douluo Dalu: Divine Descendant from the Start
斗罗:我开局神灵后裔
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 640k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 3y ago
- English
- Request a translation
Synopsis
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308Chapters
386Recommendations
29.3kFans
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Furthermore, during the Soul Master Competition, those students from the Elemental Academy all said they wanted to join the Spirit Hall, but then they changed their minds. Wouldn't the Spirit Hall retaliate against them? Frankly, a top-tier power doesn't really care about things like academies. The levels are different.
There are only one or two people with innate full soul power in the Heaven Dou Empire alone, maybe once a year? Isn't it only 19 in the entire continent every hundred years?
I've never seen so many pages written, and the character hasn't even awakened their martial soul yet. It's already over ten pages, a load of nonsense, a bunch of useless pages with no awakening, and they're still out gallivanting in Sunset Forest. It's truly baffling; they've written so much, it's incomprehensible and unclear. It's utterly speechless.
No need to include Liu Erlong, Bibi Dong, Tang Yuehua, etc. Including a few normal young people is far better. The anime modeling is good, but the character design and story are terrible, making it repulsive. The less described in the original text, the more normal the characters seem, like Shui Bing'er, Jin E, the old village chief, etc.
The protagonist, this so-called god Hou Yi, is a complete fraud. He could easily dominate a microcosm like Douluo Continent. Honestly, any ordinary person in Douluo Continent, except for the fraudulent God King, would be utterly crushed.
Chapter 21: Awakening. Who can read a Douluo Continent fanfiction and still not have their Martial Soul awakened by chapter 21? You're practically treating the Martial Soul awakening as a minor climax!
It's pretty boring. I thought they were going to develop Tianshui Academy, a family, or create their own power, but they ended up siding with the Spirit Hall. They could have just quietly developed and improved themselves. Why did they have to drag Qian Renxue into this? Shui Bing'er would have been fine. Goodbye, I can't stand it anymore.
You could have just written about the protagonist cultivating, but instead you had to make him flaunt his abilities at various top-tier levels. Then the author patched it up, and the protagonist didn't seem to care at all. You had a transmigrator pretending to be young, writing dozens of chapters of family drama, espionage, and romance with his parents. The entire plot was driven by coincidences.
I looked at the cover and description and I'm too scared to click. Could someone please tell me if it's safe or not?
I don't like torturing the protagonist.