Secret Immortality

There's a lot of nonsense. Also, even if you make things like printing and papermaking, you probably won't even know how the protagonist died. There's nothing left to think about.

I just saw some hope and started copying books again to pretend to be plotted. Don't use the same tricks from 15.6 Years ago. I regret investing in them.

From a technical point of view, the creativity is too low. Use wireless stations to emit radio waves into the atmosphere. The echoes can cover a large area. Since they are reflected by the atmosphere, this method can be said to be quite safe. There are also suitable identification verification equipment, and it is not necessary to use a code name. The secret repair is so miserable and it is so closed. In fact, including regional networks and other things, such as QR codes can actually be arranged. A little spy like the ghost market will be finished. What kind of meetings have to be held in one place, and things like arranging satellites for Tiangong. Based on this, many plots can be developed, such as how to deceive satellites, how to consume Tiangong's resources, how to make satellites continue to misjudge, and space-based weapons can be arranged for Tiangong and scrapped. Satellites and meteorites hit people, and the cost is low. Both sides should give full play to their strengths and have their own technical advantages. Tiangong develops sophisticated and relatively difficult-to-maintain equipment to prevent it from being captured by secret cultivators. Secret cultivators are good at making things that are relatively rough but easy to maintain. Robots and the like can also be arranged.

I just finished reading Chapter 7 and I'm a little bored. The author should give the protagonist an escape route.

It's rubbish. The protagonist is written like a fool. His good cards are badly played. He has five or six poison points in the opening dozen cards. He likes to show off. He dares to touch things of unknown purpose. He knows that he is a fugitive and dares to go into the city to see that he is wanted. He is not afraid of being caught directly.

I've read seven or eight chapters of Haomoji and haven't started practicing the secret method yet. The main character is also talking to an SB. Yes, it's a street novel 🙄

It's a pity that the book "The Divine Soldier" has a good setting, but there are too many logical problems, and the male protagonist is written like a fool, who plays a good hand of cards. The novel can be bad, but it must not have logical problems, and the male protagonist must not be too stupid. He should learn how to write "get lost"

Didn't the protagonist read the book before traveling through time?

No plan, no idea. A little impatience will mess up a big plan. If you plan and then decide, you are just like a fool.

Partnering up with that Chen Siming to deceive people. What is Chen Siming's identity? What is your identity? Seeking skin from a tiger.

The settings are very good and everything else is just like a newbie.

Let's talk about it after reading the previous dozens of chapters. Killing that rebellious guy in front of you was a failure. You, an ordinary person or even a person who has never experienced killing and the dangers of the world, killed a rebel who was injured but had great martial arts skills? Big brother. They have been through more things than you have ever heard of, and the reason why they are still alive despite being wanted is mostly because they are careful enough. Your plot of rubbing the reader's IQ on the ground is really unnecessary. Even if you make the hook bigger, it would be better than this.

Let me tell you my thoughts: I came here because of the title of the book, "The Secret Technique of Immortality". I mainly wanted to know what the secret technique was, the world setting, etc. Now part of the world has been set, including secret methods, secret treasures, secret medicines and secret techniques, and the role of poetry has also been revealed. Secret Techniques - Physics, Chemistry, Biomathematics, Optical Sculpting or other in-depth subjects. After learning it, you can improve your spiritual power and develop related secret techniques or practice related secret techniques that need to be related to the secret techniques and improve your spiritual power. The setting is like this and there will be no comment; Secret Treasure-Currently Tiangong can make it, looking forward to the follow-up; Secret Medicine-There are no highlights at present; >Secret Technique - It is created based on the understanding of physics, chemistry, biology, mathematics, optics, botany, etc. (Secret Technique). It is innovative, but very rough. It feels like it is just a skin, without the flesh and blood underneath; The key point is, "poetry" - the book says that the Heavenly Palace controls the secret science, so that wealthy people can only use poetry to enhance their spiritual power, and secret cultivators also come to join in the fun, which improves the status of poetry. But these are always scraps. Tiangong may not like it, or leave a hole, or maybe it is to catch the secret cultivator, and put too much ink on the scraps. Maybe the author wanted to express the difficulties and dangers of "secret cultivation", but it couldn't be seen at all in the protagonist. I just felt that the protagonist was either playing again or wandering again. In addition, Tiangong is a powerful force, and the current villain is very domineering, but the secret treasures and secret science are monopolized by them, but there is no corresponding highlight. Based on the book title, you may be a little disappointed.

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The Heavenly Palace can forcibly order the lord of a city and a marquis, so the system of this world is wrong. Is it win-win cooperation or the supremacy of the dynasty? There seems to be no way to force them. If there is a higher world like cultivating immortals, and the dynasty is at the lowest level, then a city lord and a marquis will not have high-quality cultivators. The underlying logic is wrong.

Chapter 43: He was poisoned, and he wrote a poem using the name of Bai Zhantang, who killed people before. What do you think, author? Doesn't this expose him?

Have a good idea but the writing is not strong enough to support it

No matter what you say at the beginning, you can watch it with gusto. From now on, I keep copying poems, copying poems, copying poems, which is really boring.

There is no end to the abuse of the mainstream. Deliberately disgusting people? ? ! Waste of subject matter.

I don't understand. Is it interesting to suppress the protagonist all the time?

An article that mixes literary and wizarding styles, quite standard.

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The address of Xingkong Road is good, I recommend it.

I voted for 2 more monthly votes. I hope I can continue writing.

Recommend a book, a new book by a newcomer, "The Chronicles of Immortals", which is really good, about fairy tales.

I wonder if he is a funny protagonist? I won't watch anymore