Atlas of Divine Weapons

After reading this book, I felt that this book was a hodgepodge, so messed up, with various systems, starting with martial arts, now starting to cultivate immortality, and then the demon world. Many things are more irrational than Xingye's movies. When I first arrived in the demon world, there was a green tea delivered to the door, and it was the heroine's grandmother. It was a coincidence that his mother opened the door for coincidence, and it was a coincidence! Let's just watch it, it is not very poisonous, but it is not exciting, and it is something that will be forgotten after reading it! It can be used for leisure and entertainment after dinner.

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After reading dozens of chapters, I got the general impression that a squad leader found a talented person under his command, and instead of trying to win over people, he tried to squeeze out all the benefits. The subordinate was attracted by the princess and the head of the department. Instead of trying to ease the conflict, he directly supported the princess. When the princess wants to open a new department, she does not try to find ways to cooperate with the performance, but tries desperately to stumble. The subject matter is good, but the characters should not be too silly.

How did the protagonist's feelings for Daxia come about? The protagonist is a time traveler, not an indigenous person. Even if the protagonist's body is from Daxia, three generations of his predecessor's ancestors and grandsons died of exhaustion due to the cruel oppression of the Army Recruitment Department. Who would have feelings for a sweatshop that exhausted three generations of themselves? Even if these are matters of the past and the protagonist doesn't care about them, the protagonist has made a lot of contributions after time travel, but he doesn't receive much attention from Daxia, and he still faces difficulties at every turn.

A low-ranking 9th-grade official of the Forging Department, a minor official who frequently kills and kills, describes an ancient environment with strict hierarchies. The protagonist is Wei Nuo Nuo and cautious. Within five chapters, the protagonist invites the Chief Sikong of the Forging Department to cast new weapons. The one you love is given to the one with real power. As a result, the princess said a word, the boss responded with a few words, an order, and several questions. The protagonist even threw the weapon casually, like treating a maid... It is very unreasonable, and it is completely inconsistent with the world background of your client. Later, when you meet the imperial general, he is also in this posture. He is submissive to others, but punches hard to others? In short, the more you watch, the more awkward it becomes. The characters' behavior is completely inconsistent with the world background, the logic is inconsistent, and it is extremely poisonous!

I've invested, but I'll write less pretentious stuff, it's very boring to watch, you know? The key is to build weapons well and develop yourself. Don't play some pretentious and slap-in-the-face stuff that's boring as hell.

When I saw Da Qin, I felt that the protagonist was a lunatic. He knew that there would be problems if he didn't help, but he didn't help. As a result, he didn't know how many people were going to die. He was still making a fuss over the death of a few people in Da Xia. I stopped reading it and gave up the book! ! !

Make three weapons in one day. When the protagonist is still an ordinary person, do you have any misunderstandings about making weapons? How many hits with a hammer can it be done?

The writing is quite good, but there is a section in the middle where a general who has just entered the ninth level of martial arts is together with a general who has reached the third level of martial arts. The general is not even the ninth level. It is too low. In a mature system, unless the country has just been founded, this situation will not happen. After all, this is a world of high martial arts!

The author at least knows a little bit about the process of making weapons in ancient times. Apart from anything else, at least you have an assistant to pull the bellows for you. How can you heat it if there is not enough temperature? You think it is modern society and the switch is turned on. It can be heated directly using electricity. You just want the protagonist to live alone, don't want assistants, and are afraid of being exposed, so you can make up a reason that can be justified. Anyway, in the fantasy world, you can also make up some formations and spiritual stone heating. At least it can be logical and self-consistent.

I specially set up 100 fan points just to say a few sentences in the article that I didn't understand! A general who has just entered the ninth rank is still a general of the Imperial Guard. This is outrageous. Those who have just entered the rank are only seeking the seventh rank! The son of the Minister of War went to work as an undercover agent. Unless he had never been out to see outsiders, there was no way he would not be recognized!

The subject matter of this book is quite good. It's okay to read without thinking, but I really can't stand it 😐😐

You saw that many people died fighting to protect you, and you asked for an explanation. What did you do? If you don't want to kill anyone who blocks the road, don't kill them! You saved their people, you said it carelessly, but you still saved the enemy. If nothing else, you defeated them, but you didn't kill the murderer! Are you polite?

It is said to be a fantasy novel. After reading more than 50 chapters, it feels like a palace battle novel covered in fantasy. It is about upgrading, practicing, and being invincible. There is no such feeling. The important content is to highlight something. It is suggested that it can be condensed to speed up the protagonist's early and middle growth process. Really, it doesn't look like a fantasy. The golden finger settings are pretty good

How many million words have been written and only a few dozen comments posted? Can any Shen Nong tell me what this book is like?

My feeling is that the protagonist is too cowardly. It is understandable that there are strong men who suppress the cowardice. You are stronger than the national master of a country. When you see that you may be exposed, the first thing you think of is to run away. In the newly created team, the protagonist's strength is basically improved in Daxia. Even if you are a straight man and can't see the princess's thoughts, you won't run away, right? As for work, do you call improving your own strength work? I don't know why, but the more I read, the more frustrated I am. I am also a bookworm for ten years. The writing style of this book seems to be acceptable, otherwise I would not read it here. But if you just keep writing it like this, and other people don't know, I may not see you finish the book. I hope the author can read this comment I wrote. It is not easy to find a book you like.

I won't go into the first chapter, but the second chapter is really logically confusing. I feel like the author didn't write an outline at all? Where do you remember to write? Although the online article does not focus on logic and emphasis on fun, it can stand up to the most basic scrutiny, right? The setting of the source world is really taken for granted, including going back to the Eternal Era. From beginning to end, I don't know who the top three of the Hundred Clans are. If you don't want to write, then don't write the rankings at all. If you don't have enough writing skills, don't write grand narratives. The Hundred Clans write the same as Hundred Villages. The arrival of Heavenly Fire into the world is even more inexplicable and unexpected. And I don't know how long the protagonist has lived in eternity, but he went back and said that it has been more than a hundred years. Including the previous level setting, it is said that it is a world of high martial arts, but from the beginning to the end, there is no high martial arts. In addition to the first-grade Xiao Guoshi, he also has a magic hand, which looks a bit awesome. Later, the first-grade warrior can only use a knife to kill people. The martial arts show of the Ten Kingdoms was a good opportunity to show off. It could have been written according to the farming style, but the result was inexplicably written as a defeated army. From the martial arts at the beginning, it jumps directly to the immortal warrior. The earth immortal still uses a knife to kill people. When you reach the cave, you can directly refine the world. At first it was said that the cave heaven was transformed from the Dantian of the warrior, but later on it was said that the cave was plundered from the heaven and earth. I wanted to write a tragic epic about the invasion of the demon world, but I didn't feel like it at all! Also, if there are many story backgrounds that you don't want to explain, or haven't thought about yet, then try to avoid them appearing in the dialogue. Every dialogue is pretending to be mysterious and half-talked. Can you think about the logic yourself? There is also the so-called Tianji Villa. Some suggestions for the author, 1. Don't use the excuse that you don't have enough time to support your family part-time. The most basic story outline and plot direction must be written in advance. Readers can see whether you hit something with a hammer or a stick and write whatever comes to your mind at the last moment. 2. Try to keep as few things as possible that you are not good at writing, and make use of your strengths and avoid weaknesses. If grand narratives are not enough, then write based on gags and jokes. Don't deliberately write the protagonist as cold and ruthless. It's really not cold at all, it just looks a bit awkward. 3. More background can be explained. The grand narrative is not reflected by the dialogue between a few people. 4. You can go through the dialogue logic and character motivations in your mind before writing, and bring in the characters, instead of just thinking about how you want to write. This will make it easier to create drama. 5. Of course, if you just want to write a book and earn a salary, then just think of it as my fart.

If the protagonist doesn't kill the manager in the future, he will be worse than mentally retarded

Let me support it first I feel good about the subject matter, I like it very much But the details are really difficult Forged without annealing Use cold water directly as quenching agent After quenching, there is no need to polish it and the sharpness is straightened I hope it has more depth and will be sharper. It has a sense of immersion It is not a system. It is cool Create a "sharp standard long knife" Then hit it twice casually, and after quenching it, it will cut into iron like mud Unless you are set to have mysterious power like a weapon I hope the later part will be more exciting

The protagonist's cultivation level is too low. Now anyone is better than the protagonist. The protagonist does things all day long but does not improve his strength.

Now that you've read Chapter 99, let's give a brief review. This book is really difficult to evaluate. Normally there is no problem with the structure of the book, and I also like the gameplay of placing streams. However, there are too many detailed problems in the book that make people unhappy. For example, the author will inexplicably rewrite things that have been explained in the previous paragraph every few paragraphs. It can be said that it is blatant and inexplicable. Another example is that the protagonist has done something, but he may have forgotten it after a while. Then the thing the protagonist did has fermented and made the whole world revolve. He still can't figure out how it happened so fast, even though he didn't do anything. (I won't give examples to avoid spoilers.) It's okay if the previous article said that the protagonist has amnesia. The problem is that the protagonist's brain is usually normal and he only becomes forgetful when something big happens. It's obvious that the author didn't think about how to advance the plot, or wanted to overturn the previous plot but failed to overturn it completely. Half of the old plot was left, which made the protagonist's brain memory seem to have been forcibly distorted. I don't know if there will be more problems with these details later on. Anyway, the first ones have already affected the perception a lot. Generally speaking, I like this book very much. I hope there will be fewer problems later on, and I will revise it after finishing it.

The plot is really cliche. In the beginning, I thought he was a big-muscled tyrant who was single-mindedly forging weapons, but later on he still couldn't escape the woman. The princess dedicated herself even older, and the female apprentice could have guessed the ending without even watching.

After reading more than 80 chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. A princess is still so favored that she doesn't dare to let go even though she is being pushed around by her subordinates. The author may have wanted to make the character of the princess likable, but he didn't use force where he should and used too much force where he shouldn't. Based on the various decisions and thoughts of this character, it would be more reasonable to change the identity card to a civilian who climbed up to the position of Da Sikong. There is also the decision to cancel Workshop Zero in the monthly examination. Are these four Sikong official positions bought? Four new standard weapons were released in two or three months and all were deployed in the regular army? Just cancel when you say cancel? Even if these four Sikong didn't know that the protagonist was the emperor, the general wouldn't appreciate it and make such a desperate move, right? Did that princess really agree to the plan of the four Sikong? Are the previous contributions not contributions? The logic is inconsistent and extremely toxic. This plot makes me sick.

I read Chapter 30, it's a good idea, but it's a pity that the author just wants to write it to pretend to be 13 and slap me in the face.

After reading about thirty chapters, I can only say that the author did not do enough homework in the early stage, and he did not understand the real weapons well enough. A combat sword with a length of about 1.2 Meters and a blade width of about 3.5 Centimeters usually weighs two to three kilograms. How wide and thick is your seven or eight kilogram Huanshou sword? And there are very few real warriors who can fight with a sword weighing five kilograms. How many times can an ordinary soldier swing a standard sword weighing seven or eight kilograms? Since the early setting is a standard weapon for the soldiers of the National Defense Army who are ordinary humans, then use Dianxin to check the information to see what the real weapons look like and what the data is, instead of relying on your own imagination.

From the first chapter to the present, author, can your inner drama be more complete? Do you need to write so many narrations? And your little landowner's mind is still wandering around, fearing wolves in front and tigers in the back.

I can't stand it. You can obviously use weapons to improve your strength, but you have to leave it to some rubbish to improve it. Even if you are in dire straits, you are not willing to do it yourself. Is it interesting?

Isn't it the law to go up to the cave sky and then to reach the Tao realm? The law was eaten by the author...

Author, your aunt has been here for 30 days

Excellent book, but only 100+ comments... A silent question, can I read it?