This Calamity Text Game Feels Off

I finished watching it for free, and it's pretty much what most people in the comments said. Authors often dig holes and then forget about them. The biggest cheat for the protagonist earlier was the exclusive talent of Morning Star, which he spent a life to refresh. Later, when he met Seabird, he introduced the concept of fragment upgrade and the setting that a super strong person might have Morning Star fragments or spend a life to refresh his talent. But this setting is about 50-60 chapters, and now there are more than 300 chapters. The protagonist's exclusive talent basically has no other description other than being a search locator. The protagonist's biggest cheat is no longer useful and has been changed to an exclusive black domain power. I have also forgotten the blade stone disease set in the early stage, and the setting of the Candle Witch dying soon. The early chat group, the organization of the group leader and the deputy group leader are also not described. . . . . In short, there are too many pitfalls. The author has basically forgotten what he wrote before, causing the plot of this book to be extremely confusing. There is also a problem with the power setting. The previous description was in terms of levels. The concept of a special player was suddenly introduced in the early stage, but there were no specific criteria for judging special players. In the middle period, we met the Rat Man again. The Rat Man introduced four stages of mastering the forbidden book. The protagonist is the peak of the first period, the Rat Man is the peak of the third period, and the prison lord is the fourth period. Later, the levels of disasters were described, but there are also several types of disasters in the author's description, and a disaster power system was introduced to the protagonist. In fact, just use the 1-100 level system from the beginning to the end. A level above 20 is enough, and 40.60.80 Can be divided into power stages. However, power systems with different names and standards have been introduced. The protagonist is level 24, the second issue of the Forbidden Book, and the disaster level, but he is not a special author, so you don't feel something is wrong There are too many pitfalls in the level system. On the one hand, the author describes that the strongest person like the prison master of the death group is very high, but the protagonist seems to be almost at the level of the prison master in the chaotic level system. There are also big problems with the description of some body movements. The protagonist holds his chin at all times. Of course, there is no problem with holding his chin. Even if the author uses the word "cheek hold" to describe every action of the protagonist, I can't bear it. Look at the options of holding your cheek, holding your cheek while thinking, holding your cheek while standing and talking to others. Anyway, the protagonist only has two body movements, one is holding the cheek, and the other is the more important hand rubbing. In the early stage, I always wrote about rubbing hands, which can be understood as a fly rubbing its hands. Some readers may think it is cute, but your protagonist keeps rubbing his hands, why do all the supporting characters do the same? She rubbed her hands every day when she met the Flower Witch in the early stage, she also rubbed her hands every day when she met the Candle Witch in the middle stage, and she also rubbed her hands every day when she met the Book Witch in the later stage. The author seems to have no other words for the protagonist's actions except holding his chin and rubbing his hands. For other supporting characters, the flower witch is a bit new and interesting. After all, the silly Baitian described can express his mood with flowers. Even many passers-by have their own interesting personalities, except for the protagonist who always holds his chin and rubs his hands. This book has too many problems, but it is limited to free and there are no strict requirements after reading it for free. The many pitfalls and shortcomings of this book really need to be corrected as soon as possible, otherwise it is better to finish it quickly. My advice to the author is to stop updating for a few days, take a good look back, and correct a large number of typos. I still can't bear to correct the typos a hundred chapters ago. Then reorganize the protagonist's abilities and paths and reorganize the power system. I have to fill in so many pitfalls in the past, first the upgrade of the exclusive talent, and then the debt collector's contract (the debt collector's knife is given to the protagonist to complete the contract. The protagonist has already learned that the rat man should go back to lift the curse of the contract before he is dead), his own blade stone disease, the story line of the dog owner, Gao Tian's completion, the story line of the early supporting characters, the pitfalls of the chat group, there are too many pitfalls that have not been filled. If you have time, continue to build a house in the air, instead of going back and patching up the foundation that was cut corners.

I have to say, it's amazing. In recent times, word game-themed novels generally follow the layman mode, that is, unlimited resurrection, and trading lives for exploration. There is no doubt that Shu Shuhao has written something new and has almost escaped the shadow of the secular master. And the plot is also quite interesting. But I feel that the power system is not particularly perfect. Of course, there are only more than 30 pictures, and I can't tell what the power system is, but it feels that way from the writing. I feel that although this book cannot reach the height of its host, it is still a rare masterpiece. The most important thing is new ideas, new ideas, new ideas. Say important things three times.

I really don't believe that another newcomer in the organization can keep up with the protagonist, even if she is a woman, unless the author gives her a cheat.

The author writes a wave of comparison data every time a game starts, but the attribute points for upgrades are not added. In the early stage, the protagonist has a hard time beating anyone. In the later stage, he simply upgrades without adding attribute points. Awesome author, there is no need to look at attributes now, the protagonist can beat anyone, right?

Luo Qing, looks like this, AI drawing

To be honest, it makes the thief feel uncomfortable reading this book. He knows so much information and doesn't reveal it without exchanging resources. He blinds the eyes of the organization that has helped him. If he is extremely selfish, he can also exchange resources for development! But he didn't say anything. He still had strength to develop, but also suffered all kinds of discomforts. He knew a little bit of this, a little bit of that, and in what other field, was he speechless, a field that would hurt himself? Isn't it just a large-scale indiscriminate attack skill? Does the author have any misunderstandings about the field? Other people's fields are extended by oneself, suppressing or attacking people covered by the field, and here it becomes an undifferentiated range attack skill. It is really different from Samsara Paradise. If you want to see this kind of thing, you should watch Samsara Paradise! Recommend.

The protagonist's most important talent is given by others. Why is it written like this? ? ? What are the benefits of writing about a mysterious old man? All of a sudden I felt like I had changed...

It's a little weird and the sentences don't make sense, just a small part of it. The problem is that the protagonist realizes that this game is life-threatening, so why does he still save it without adding attribute points? Also, those clothes can obviously hide the appearance. Why don't you wear them all the time and only wear them when you have to use them?

I feel like the following scene is a bit typical. Also, is it possible that the top executives are all women? They are basically all witches. . .

What is this written on the back? The more I read, the more bored I become. In the end, I just click on the directory without even wanting to subscribe. It's typical of starting high and then going low.