Panlong: In the Beginning, In the Name of the Father

I read ten chapters, and the whole thing is rambling and disjointed. The second chapter clearly showed the protagonist reaching the peak of the Saint Realm, but after ten chapters of this nonsense, they're back to square one. It even dangled in references to the Desolate Era and Swallowed Star.

The author rambles on about how awesome he was before his rebirth, and how hopelessly addicted he was to his past life. What's the point of watching that?

#Panlong#👈👈2024.10.08, Updated, enter the topic to view. Date: August 8, 2024 Serialized in 22 books, mostly new titles. Date: March 6, 2024 A collection of 23 serialized books. More than 200,000, 11 copies. There are 12 seedlings with less than 200,000 words each. Date: February 8, 2024 Several books have been abandoned.

The protagonist starts by killing some king, stealing his storage ring, and even becoming a peak Saint-level expert—that really piqued my interest, and I was eager to keep reading. But then he abruptly abandons all of that and starts writing from scratch about his awakened memories before becoming a Saint, going on for dozens of chapters in a very verbose way, which immediately killed any desire to continue.

The first dozen or so chapters were filled with boasting and nonsense about his past life as a reincarnator who had traveled through countless worlds and witnessed countless civilizations. I tolerated it, considering it as adding depth to the protagonist's backstory.

Let's change the name. "Panlong: The Stone Carving Master's Mainland Travelogue" would be a good one.

After ten chapters, I couldn't take it anymore. What could have been explained in one or two chapters was stretched into ten. This made it feel verbose and tedious to read. The author made a big mistake. Most fans of fanfiction know some plot details and basic information; there's no need for so much explanation. It just makes the reading experience uncomfortable.

After reading ten chapters, the main plot consisted of a few words exchanged with the owner of the Dawson Trading Company; the rest was just rambling and the author's monologues. I'm truly speechless.

You have to give up something to gain something. Your rambling is full of nonsense, rambling on and on, with no main point, no logic, you're just a slacker. Just by looking at the book title, you should know what kind of old lady-like nagging style the author has; I was too simplistic.

180,000 Words, but at most 80,000 words of actual content. 😑 What kind of fountain pen is this?