Panlong: In the Beginning, In the Name of the Father

After reading ten chapters, the whole text was rambling. It was clear that the second chapter was at the peak of the holy realm, but after ten chapters it was back to the original point. It also involves the Wild Age and Devouring the Starry Sky. The only thing I can remember about Chapter 10 is one sentence (I traveled to Hogg and Baruch reached the pinnacle of the Holy Realm), and the content after Chapter 11 (I recall my life experiences in the past ten years). It can probably last a hundred chapters.

What was written about how awesome and awesome Luo Liba Suo was before he was reborn. How could he not be able to extricate himself when he was living before rebirth? Tell us, the audience, to watch a hammer

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At the beginning, the protagonist killed the king and snatched his storage ring. He was still at the peak of the holy realm, which whetted his appetite. Anyway, I had the desire to read more when I saw this. But I turned around and put all these aside and started from the beginning to write about the things that had just awakened the memory and had not become the holy realm. It was written in dozens of chapters, and it was also very long-winded. I had no desire to read it at once. . .

I have been bragging about it for more than a dozen chapters in my past life as a reincarnation person, traveling through countless worlds and witnessing countless civilizations, so I just tolerated it and just treated it as adding more background to the protagonist. As a result, now that the human form has reached the Holy Realm, after the transformation, it is basically the pinnacle of the Holy Realm, and it has also understood the rules of life. As a result, the reason for losing to Xisai in a head-on battle is that he lacks combat experience and is not decisive enough to kill? Do you want to take a look at what you are writing in the first ten chapters, brother?

Let's change the name. It would be better to call it Panlong Stone Sculptor's Travel Notes on the Mainland.

I couldn't stand it anymore after ten chapters. What could be explained in one or two chapters was forced to go into ten chapters. This made people feel long-winded, and then it became a bit boring to read. The author made a big mistake. I basically know the plot and basic things from reading the fanfic. I don't need so much popular science at all. It will make people feel uncomfortable after reading it.

After reading ten chapters, the main plot consisted of chatting with the boss of the Dawson Chamber of Commerce for a few words, and the rest was all about lying around. The author's soliloquy was really convincing.

Be willing to give up. Only when you give up can you gain something. You are a nonsense person with no main line and no logic. You are simply a bastard. You should know what kind of old lady nagging style the author has by looking at the title of the book. I am superficial.

180,000 Words of substantive content, up to 80,000 words, 😑What kind of pen