Days Spent Blending into Hogwarts

It's nice to look at, but I have some shortcomings. There are too many supporting roles. I think the interaction between the protagonist and Hermione should be increased, and it would be best to have a love story from time to time. Harry, Ron and other characters can cut more than half of their scenes. The main reason is that the updates are too slow. It doesn't matter if you update 10,000 words a day to write these supporting characters.

I really couldn't bear to see the end of Goblet of Fire. The protagonist was the audience the whole time. All the plots were not changed at all, and I didn't participate in it. Isn't this bad for me to watch the original work? You might as well just copy everything from the original work to save yourself the trouble of writing! I'm really convinced, can this be considered a fan?

Why do modern time-travelers like to fly around on broomsticks and play Quidditch? Isn't it much more interesting to like flying carpets, Weasley's flying car, Sirius's flying motorcycle, and Snape and Voldemort's flying spells?

Is Loren the protagonist or Hermione the protagonist? After watching it for so long, I have always wondered how powerful Hermione is, and how incompetent some of the boys are, and the real protagonist is written like a fw, and the cheating training for so long is still a fw If you want to write a heroine story about Hermione, please tell me in advance, don't waste our readers' time, and if you write a female channel article, please submit it to the female channel, okay? Also, the daily life of gangsters also needs to be more enjoyable. The premise of gangsters is that the protagonist has the ability to control the overall situation. He usually fishes for fun, but he will always let the development of the situation be under his control, eliminate hidden dangers in advance, and will not cause trouble for himself Or usually fish and turn the tide at critical moments Instead of fishing in ordinary times, it is useless at critical moments. If you have no ability at all, you are just a bastard and a marginal observer who has no decisive influence on the plot. If the author wants to write about the life of a fw, he can write a personal biography of the author instead of writing a female fan novel and posting it to a male channel to waste readers' time.

The writing is very good, and it's one of the few fics that portrays the look of a child. But it's a bit funny, it's the Book of Abraham, and I'm talented enough to practice opening the door into a blasting spell a month before school starts, and then I'm very busy at the beginning of school and often go to the library to practice fighting with Nicolés Flamel's clone. Then he and the trio were seriously injured by a troll and went to the hospital. Of course, the author patched it up and said that it was unreasonable to hit the head with a big stick for the original floating spell. It's quite funny. I'm very busy but I don't know what I'm busy with. Although there are patches, my magic power hasn't grown. Now I'm still young and haven't practiced any powerful magic. I just learn alchemy. It's very reasonable and logical, and there's nothing wrong with it, but the protagonist seems very humorous. Even if you put aside this paragraph, there's nothing that shows the progress of the protagonist. He usually says he doesn't want to be in the limelight in class. Learning potions with Snape, learning alchemy and fighting with Nicoléme, it felt like learning, was it really learning? It felt like learning. Of course, regardless of the growth aspect, it is excellent as a daily novel, the characters are very vivid, and the characters are not deliberately black. Just ignore the fact that the protagonist is reborn. The childish behavior of many characters will make people smile. This book is more in line with the positioning of the original fairy tale.

After reading 500 chapters, I can only say that the first 200 chapters are okay. The protagonist becomes more and more confused later on. He basically flirts with Hermione or rapes Harry. It makes me feel like I am watching the original novel. The protagonist is like a transparent person. It makes me feel that the protagonist is Harry. No matter what the protagonist knows or what Dumbledore knows, it will develop according to the original plot. The protagonist is like a narrator who says a few words from time to time and then watches. There is another poisonous point. Originally, I thought there would be a different plot when a school was added to the competition, but the result is still the same as the background board. I called out an additional name for each project, which has no effect on the plot. The project has not changed, the process has not changed, and the results have not changed. It can only be said that there is no difference whether this school is added or not. Maybe the author also wants to do something original. I have almost forgotten the previous content. There is nothing that I can remember. It is just a simple addition of an audience based on the original work. Harry appears in more pages than the main character.

This book gives people a feeling that it can be read, but it feels boring while reading.

I have a question. The protagonist's parents were affected and died because Sirius wanted to kill Peter. From the chapters where Peter was discovered, it can be seen that the protagonist may recover his memory. So, will he take revenge?

First of all, my answer is: good-looking, readable This is a good daily article, not too OOC, and does not deviate from the main line. The structure of the writing is also good, the writing is smooth, and it will not make you tired just reading it. There are always some scenes that make you smile, which is very warm. After reading the comments left by everyone, I actually think that Loren's performance in this story can be said to be remarkable. He can be said to be one of the best representatives of HP's daily male protagonists. He has IQ, emotional intelligence, and can be naughty from time to time. In other words, in your daily life, it is not an exaggeration to say that he is a little expert in adjusting the atmosphere. With him, you will never be left alone. This kind of daily male protagonist also often appears in Japanese animation. Whether you like HP's daily writing is hard to define. Everyone has their own direction and what they want. The following words are just my thoughts. I like this book very much. ——⊙▽⊙—— I also started to read HP articles in the past few months, and I have read a lot of them. I read this book through QQ for free for ten days as a new user. I like this book very much, so I am here to leave a comment and share the surprise of discovering the treasure. First of all, I understand that there are only two main categories of HP articles now: 1. It is a self-original series, which may deviate more or less from the main line. 2. Follow the main line and fill in some side stories, which usually appear in the form of daily novels. After famous series such as Professor's and Bloodline Wizard, most people actually have a certain understanding of the story that follows the main line flow, so that a large part of HP articles are the same. If you look at the beginning, you will actually know the thread of the entire story. Another very embarrassing issue is involved here. HP novels are actually more like semi-propositions. They need to make use of the relevant characters given in the original work, as well as the character's personality and the context of the main line to create. Moreover, most HP novel authors are not strong enough to support the original plot stories they create. If they write too much, they will disappoint fans and audiences. Under this situation, daily novels become more interesting. Since you already know the plot of the original work, you must want to see more different endings, different stories, and whether the person in your heart has a different life. I haven't read too many similar daily novels, but I can feel that every character written by the author of this book has grown to varying degrees. Without OOC, their growth or change does not happen overnight, but grows with the unfolding of the plot and the transition of time. It makes me sigh, yes, he (she) is like this, he (she) is like this. Finally, let me talk about my viewing style and experience When reading this book, you can bring in some funny conversational tones from some dramas that you see in daily life. To put it bluntly, you are a fun person, and some happy tones of someone who makes jokes, and read it. In this way, your perception will be greatly improved. Speaking of the viewing experience, I won't say much, and I will share a scene with you: Lying on the bed, rolling left and right, letting out some laughter from time to time 😄 This book is not perfect, I personally think it is very beautiful, it also has its own shortcomings, and it is large and full, and the author is very stable in updating. This book is quite good, everyone is welcome to come together and discover the treasure

I have only read a few dozen chapters, but I still want to say it. This is a novel that expresses its own soul. It is not just a fan of the original work, but has many thoughtful ideas.