Family Cultivation: Climbing Mountains and Rivers in the Palm of Your Hand

It's a pretty good book. It's better than most of Qidian's books so far. It should be a high-quality book. This is one of the few settings I have seen that is more in line with my idea of ​​a powerful force. In this holy land that has been passed down for so many years, various systems must have become perfect. There are some dirty things, but they should all be within the rules. Don't show any signs of mental retardation in the future. They are all cultivating immortals. They are hundreds or thousands of years old, and their IQs are so low that they are almost dead. The author needs to think carefully about the plot. Also, it's best not to collapse the combat power system too quickly. To be honest, it's best not to have battles beyond a few levels occur in the later stages. If it can be done, it should be fully booked. Finally, there is a problem with your update. There were two updates on the day it was put on the shelves. Of course, the more important thing is stability, and you should also mention it in advance when asking for leave.

Having read so many fantasy novels about cultivating immortals, it is possible that this is truly the only novel in the entire online literature world that relies on a powerful force to rise from a weak position! The holy land here can be brought into any holy land in novels, extraordinary giants. Rather than being filled with internal contradictions and fighting as casually described by other authors, as if it cannot stop until everyone dies. Without such an atmosphere and resources, or even relative internal peace and development within certain rules, how could it become a giant in the extraordinary world?

A good family flow, with competition and a bottom line, unlike those underworld, where the same family fights to the death. The description of the atmosphere of cultivating immortals is in line with my imagination. It is not like some novels about cultivating immortals. Life is worse than ours. What does it sound like?

I came here for Fenglinggen, but after building the foundation, I changed it to a skill that looked great but was actually incomprehensible. It was a classic protagonist's skill. It was difficult to practice, consumed a lot of resources, and evened out all the advantages of Fenglinggen.

It's a good book, but I think it's a good book to keep a family from killing each other and talking about trivial things.

The author is probably a novice and the writing leaves a lot to be desired. To put it simply, first of all, there is a problem with the name of the protagonist. The name An Mufeng seems nondescript in online novels. In fact, the name of the protagonist in the novel is easy to understand. For example, the names of the protagonists of several popular novels such as Han Li, Xiao Yan, and Lin Dong are just fine. Secondly, I have read almost 30 chapters, and the author has not introduced the basic background of the family clearly. He has not mentioned the names of the golden elixirs of the Yulan An family, nor has he mentioned the important figures of those peak leaders. What is the relationship within the family is also vague. I feel that I am tired of reading. Also, don't write too much about the cultivation sessions and the protagonist's personal cultivation insights. If you write too much, readers won't have the patience to read. Finally, let me say that the author's writing is not bad, but I always feel that there is something wrong with the writing style and the reading experience is not smooth. The most important thing in online novels is to tell the story well. I hope the author will continue to work hard around this goal.

The rhetoric is gorgeous, a bit putting the cart before the horse, the writing style is a bit deliberate, and the sense of substitution is general.

I'm surprised that the annual income is so huge, but just a few hundred foundation building exercises consume so many resources. If in other family novels, there would be at least one golden elixir force. Or maybe I didn't look carefully? It's only the realm of foundation building, and then several forces join forces to invest hundreds of millions of spiritual stones in a Dan Tower? Your writing style is okay, but when writing about your family, you need to be more rigorous in terms of data.

Once the contract is signed, I will write it carefully.

Able to write novel ideas in articles about cultivating immortals. Really good. As a bookworm, it suits my taste. The protagonist's IQ is online and the world view is quite grand. There are adventures, there is business, and with one's own business and luck, one can catch up with the favored man of heaven.

Chapter 9: The protagonist has seen too many situations where land gods plummet into ordinary warriors when they encounter emotional trauma! Why can't I understand it? If a powerful person can live for eighteen hundred years, but he can't compare to a martial arts practitioner, is his life in vain? If martial arts are so good, why don't they practice it? Is it because their IQ is not enough? Not all land gods can be said to be smart people, it's too puzzling.

When I read Chapter 44, the protagonist is always gambling and fighting with others. It is okay to have gambling and fighting within the family, but it is completely unreasonable to continue gambling and fighting when going out.

Challenging the way of heaven without even having a golden elixir is really awesome 🙂🙂🙂

I don't know what the rest of the story is about, but the part about killing the gryphon is really an exaggeration. The protagonist obviously has no advantages at all, yet he can easily kill a gryphon with two levels based on his so-called mundane combat experience. One of the protagonist's speed advantages is the ordinary skills. It feels like nonsense. Do you have to make people believe that the ordinary skills are so much better than the immortal skills? The other one is Wind Spirit Root. As for letting people just break through the speed and crush the Griffin who is also good at speed in the later stage of foundation building? Another advantage of the protagonist is decades of combat experience. First of all, I think the protagonist will not live longer than the griffin. Of course, the protagonist is smarter and more talented, but the protagonist has never fought a monster before. This is the first time, and the griffin has a lot of experience fighting humans. So, this battle seems fake. Are ordinary martial arts so powerful? Can ordinary weapons break defenses? When the protagonist faced the monster for the first time, he felt as if everything was under control, easily surpassing two levels of beheading. Actually, I quite like this kind of genius-type protagonist, but I am afraid that the protagonist can easily kill the late-stage foundation building in his weakest state, and then go to the mid-stage foundation-building and still have some back-and-forth. Because, after the protagonist's weapons have been improved, his skills and spells have been improved, and his combat experience (against monster cultivators) has been improved. Even if the protagonist's cultivation level has not improved at all, he can still be considered invincible by building a foundation, right?

Let's look at the beginning. In this dojo management, every time one more person in the family successfully manages the dojo, there is a high probability of an enemy. First of all, let's not talk about this mess of millions of dollars in funding. It will be repaid in 10 years. There are still a lot of relatives on the mountain. I don't know if I am greedy. If I succeed, others think I should. Although this mountain belongs to the family, I have built it and run it with great effort. In addition to loan sharking, the family is also holding back for personal gain. Would you be grateful to you? Needless to say, if you fail, even the people and the mountains belong to others. I will work all my life to pay off debts. Even if I don't hate you, I will remember you in my heart. No one will care about you if any family has trouble in the future. I owe you a lot of debt. I wish your family would repay it and get rid of it early. When you meet a narrow-minded genius, it is easy for an external force to instigate rebellion. Your family has become a big creditor, and the blood and family ties are so weak. If I don't stab you a few times, you will think that you have forgotten your love.

Why didn't I understand it? Does this mean that I opened a factory in our village, the city approved the land, the bank loaned money, and I spent money to build the factory and buy the equipment. Do I want people from this village to come to my place to make money (for fear of them causing trouble)? I will give them half of my factory's equipment. After three years of research and development, the output of half of my factory can just break even. Next year's output will double and I can still make money. I have paid off the loan, and now the villagers want me to give them the cash to invest. If I give them the money and I can't repay the loan, my factory will be taken away by the bank. If I don't give them the money to invest, I'm afraid they will cause trouble. Is that what you mean? If your protagonist is afraid of this, then I want to ask, aren't you afraid of the men you trust, who or his family will be threatened to surrender to the enemy? After all, no one else is hurting you, so the protagonist is afraid of being like that. If there is a cheat, he is still there, this cheat is not working, that is not working, etc...

After cultivating as an immortal, he kept talking about martial arts🤔. The upper echelons of this family are asking for elixirs, scheming against the protagonist, and scheming for the sake of the younger generation. The spiritual stones in them are worth millions. Seeing that the protagonist's cultivation direction is Dongtianfudi style, he still leads others to practice? I heard that the author is preparing a female protagonist for the protagonist? Well written, the taste is not suitable for me, I can't take it in

Anlan Immortal Clan? Judging from the name, this immortal clan has a way to kill people 😏

I'm used to seeing it, basically to the golden elixir. It feels so awkward to suddenly have an extra person in Zifu.

It's all a support, right? After reading 60 chapters, I always feel that the writing is not as good as a short article, it just feels like the donkey's head is wrong and the horse's mouth is wrong.

I thought this book would be a long one, but it ended up being a eunuch with about 400 chapters. It ended so hastily that all my daily recommendation votes and monthly votes were wasted!

In fact, if you get more recommendations and promote it to more readers, it will become popular. The writing is very good. I could have written more, but it would be a pity to finish it early.

The more I read, the more uncomfortable I feel. Am I here to see the protagonist suffer? The novel you wrote is not as good as the pretentious and brainless novel 10 years ago. I feel like the author doesn't want to achieve results.

I feel like the writing is a bit weird, but I can't pinpoint what's wrong with it.

I even deleted the comment without saying anything outrageous. I just said that the hasty ending was a waste of expectations and a waste of daily recommendation votes and monthly votes!

I can't sign the contract. I'm so jealous every time I see these contract papers that I pee blood. Come and look at me, why can't I sign? Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

After reading the first few chapters, it was pretty good. There weren't so many show-offs and weak-minded supporting characters.

The best thing about this book is that the protagonist is very qualified

This novel seems a bit vague

Mortals practice martial arts and spend their whole lives spinning around in skills. Cultivation of immortality, law and Taoism is directly a matter of high latitude and low latitude. Can the author understand?