An's Immortal Industry

I've read more than a dozen chapters, not to mention other things. The writing seems to be okay, but the plot is hard to explain in one sentence. First of all, with your name, I thought it was a family story, but I read more than a dozen chapters and found out that the content is not family-related. I think you are playing tricks on people like us who like to read family stories. Then you become an apprentice because your destiny is so awesome that no one will accept you as an apprentice for fear of suffering karma. Brother, I think your book is hanging, but the writing seems pretty good.

Everyone is welcome to speak enthusiastically. 😊

The idea was wrong. This book was written as a follow-up to the previous book, but it did not attract enough old readers, and the plot was not enough to attract new readers. It's so miserable to see the number of people following this.

Do you book friends have any good recommendations? It is best if the writing is excellent and logical. Such as the Painting Demon Master, Immortal Industry, Under Heaven, Immortal Industry, Yu Sha... Are there any books like this with good writing style but a slightly greenish tone?

It's really gone... I won't scold you anymore. With these bleak data, it's better to stop the loss in time. It's better than to be scorned after it's released. Just learn a lesson. Writing novels is not easy. I hope you really love it and revive it.

There are too many realms of cultivation. It would be just right to delete two.

It's a family story, I hope there will be more family supporting characters and descendants of the protagonist.

It feels like jumping back and forth between classical cultivation and underworld cultivation.

The previous one was too martial arts-y. I hope this one is better, and I want Yu Jie😍😍

You can't stop writing just because of a few people.

Looking at the name, I thought it was a family, but the introduction turned out to be a sect.

I hope you can be more cool and not meddle in other people's business. If you're not good at writing about women, write less. It doesn't matter if you're a little plain occasionally.

If you can't write a little, don't write