Clan Cultivation: Mountains and Rivers in the Palm of My Hand

Having read so many fantasy novels about cultivating immortals, it is possible that this is truly the only novel in the entire online literature world that relies on a powerful force to rise from a weak position! The holy land here can be brought into any holy land in novels, extraordinary giants. Rather than being filled with internal contradictions and fighting as casually described by other authors, as if it cannot stop until everyone dies. Without such an atmosphere and resources, or even relative internal peace and development within certain rules, how could it become a giant in the extraordinary world?

A good family flow, with competition and a bottom line, unlike those underworld, where the same family fights to the death. The description of the atmosphere of cultivating immortals is in line with my imagination. It is not like some novels about cultivating immortals. Life is worse than ours. What does it sound like?

I came here for Fenglinggen, but after building the foundation, I changed it to a skill that looked great but was actually incomprehensible. It was a classic protagonist's skill. It was difficult to practice, consumed a lot of resources, and evened out all the advantages of Fenglinggen.

It's a good book, but I think it's a good book to keep a family from killing each other and talking about trivial things.

The author is probably a novice and the writing leaves a lot to be desired. To put it simply, first of all, there is a problem with the name of the protagonist. The name An Mufeng seems nondescript in online novels. In fact, the name of the protagonist in the novel is easy to understand. For example, the names of the protagonists of several popular novels such as Han Li, Xiao Yan, and Lin Dong are just fine. Secondly, I have read almost 30 chapters, and the author has not introduced the basic background of the family clearly. He has not mentioned the names of the golden elixirs of the Yulan An family, nor has he mentioned the important figures of those peak leaders. What is the relationship within the family is also vague. I feel that I am tired of reading. Also, don't write too much about the cultivation sessions and the protagonist's personal cultivation insights. If you write too much, readers won't have the patience to read. Finally, let me say that the author's writing is not bad, but I always feel that there is something wrong with the writing style and the reading experience is not smooth. The most important thing in online novels is to tell the story well. I hope the author will continue to work hard around this goal.

The rhetoric is gorgeous, a bit putting the cart before the horse, the writing style is a bit deliberate, and the sense of substitution is general.

I'm surprised that the annual income is so huge, but just a few hundred foundation building exercises consume so many resources. If in other family novels, there would be at least one golden elixir force. Or maybe I didn't look carefully? It's only the realm of foundation building, and then several forces join forces to invest hundreds of millions of spiritual stones in a Dan Tower? Your writing style is okay, but when writing about your family, you need to be more rigorous in terms of data.

Once the contract is signed, I will write it carefully.

Able to write novel ideas in articles about cultivating immortals. Really good. As a bookworm, it suits my taste. The protagonist's IQ is online and the world view is quite grand. There are adventures, there is business, and with one's own business and luck, one can catch up with the favored man of heaven.

It's a pretty good book. It's better than most of Qidian's books so far. It should be a high-quality book. This is one of the few settings I have seen that is more in line with my idea of ​​a powerful force. In this holy land that has been passed down for so many years, various systems must have become perfect. There are some dirty things, but they should all be within the rules. Don't show any signs of mental retardation in the future. They are all cultivating immortals. They are hundreds or thousands of years old, and their IQs are so low that they are almost dead. The author needs to think carefully about the plot. Also, it's best not to collapse the combat power system too quickly. To be honest, it's best not to have battles beyond a few levels occur in the later stages. If it can be done, it should be fully booked. Finally, there is a problem with your update. There were two updates on the day it was put on the shelves. Of course, the more important thing is stability, and you should also mention it in advance when asking for leave.