Immortality: Starting from Synthesizing the Longevity Pill

Dear author, does what you are writing now have anything to do with the title of your book? You have a synthetic book title and you have nothing to do every day. Why are you exploring the secret place? When I read the title of this book, I thought it would be popular, but it turned out to be completely addictive. You have to grasp the core of synthesis when writing, instead of letting the protagonist run around the world. Even if you go to the secret realm, you still have to synthesize it, otherwise, you can just survive. In addition, if the price is set well, it will definitely become popular. What you wrote is completely off topic. Your buying point is synthesis, but you lost the most important point. Comparing secret realm dungeons with others is equivalent to using your inferior to compete with others' superior. How can you not lose?

Does the author want to make money or practice writing? If it is the former, you need to commit suicide immediately and complete the following three aspects of rectification. First, updates are too slow. The new book issue is at least 6,000 per day, and cannot be less than 4,000. Your current average is 3,000, and the highest is only 4,000. There are too few updates. Second, find the right place to buy. This book is a good place to buy, but it's a pity that it's written to death. Third, sort out the combat power system and currency system. You only have a few words, but it feels a bit broken. If you just practice writing. So why not do some fun and maybe make this book survive? Just use all the writing techniques you know, write everything you want to write, and don't estimate whether it will collapse or not. After you finish writing, organize it carefully. Be an experience next time. The above suggestions should be considered by the author himself.

The author has time to read other synthetic articles. Such a big golden finger is a bit useless.

Originally, the setting of this book seemed to be very enjoyable, but it turned out to be too much intrigue. If the system text is unhappy, it will lose its selling point.

The routine is too cliche. . . , Pig's feet are either on the way to being plotted by others, or on the way to escape and fight. . . Forget about one hole after another, there are still many holes waiting for pig feet to be filled. . . It looks strenuous. . . We all know there are so many pitfalls waiting to be stepped on! ! ! It's boring to watch. . . Reading novels is for leisure and to clear your mind, not for you to fill in holes. . .

If you want to be ruthless, just kill Li Xiaoshan's sister. A mere mortal expressed his desire to take revenge on the protagonist, and why did he try to get her to take revenge? Otherwise, he would have to deal with it completely, make him mute, and directly arrange to not contact other people, put him under house arrest, and not give her a chance to take revenge.

When I look at the synthesized catalog, I can see that the whole thing is wrong. I haven't grasped the key points, and most of the beginning has been ruined.

You can obviously become an immortal in one year, but you insist on giving Sajia some outdated flower arrangements.

If you have a golden finger and don't use it, you just need to practice elixir. After over 50, you are still a little trash at the fifth level of Qi refining. If you really want to make elixir, you can't use the synthesizer to earn more spiritual stones in the early stage, improve your cultivation level, and only think about it when you reach the foundation building and have the power to protect yourself. You are a little trash and still want to refine elixir. Cultivation is the foundation.

I've read so many chapters The plot is too silly, and there are so many supporting characters that are disgusting There are also a lot of dialogues, 80% of one chapter is dialogue The author should write it more neatly, I'm tired of reading it The synthesis settings are quite interesting Dongtian + what to add to the background It's great, why do you have to work so hard

Your writing is getting better and better, keep up the good work

Can talismans be synthesized? Not big enough. Goldfinger is already the biggest opportunity, why should we covet other opportunities?

As a novice author, you have read a lot of novels about cultivating immortals. Learn their strengths. If you are either fighting or fighting, if you don't write a few paragraphs about the process of improving your cultivation level in retreat, your cultivation level will be improved too slowly. The first Qi Refining Level 4, and the 68th one you wrote is still the Qi Refining Level 6. It makes sense to spend more ink in the later stages of the Qi Refining Period. In the middle stage of the Qi Refining Period, it is so difficult to quickly improve your cultivation level and run around.

Why can we only synthesize medicinal materials and elixirs? Can't we do other types? I can understand your synthesis to mean that everything can be synthesized, which is interesting. For example, soil can be synthesized infinitely and eventually become soil.

It is a new book written by a newcomer. The author squeezes in time to write the novel after work. It is inevitable that there will be flaws in the details, and the plot cannot satisfy everyone. I hereby open an opinion forum. If you want to criticize, you can criticize here. If you want to make suggestions, you can also make suggestions here. The author will stand at attention and accept the beating with humility 😢

Brother, you didn't mention this synthesis at all. You're addicted to fighting, right? When I saw Li Xiaomei asking Qingmei if she could contact the immortal cultivator brother, I really couldn't bear it anymore. It highlights a way to die, and the protagonist actually hears Li Xiaomei's loud conspiracy. I was in a hurry. I couldn't see Jie Jie Jie's broken bones and ashes. I felt like there were ants crawling on my body. #Check the protagonist's status, he is still fighting

Self-recommendation: "Sword Slash Ascension": [Immortal Hero] + [Goldfinger (Touch the Corpse)] + [Fairy Birds and Beasts] + [Immortal Realm] + [Ascended Person] + [Sword and Magic Dual Cultivation] "Ascended person? Isn't that the one who comes up on his knees to beg for food?" This is a story about a direct disciple of the Immortal Sect who grew up in the Immortal Realm and became an enemy of the ascended person for various reasons.

The writing of this book is pretty good. Why don't there seem to be many people following it?

For a cultivation novel, the most important thing is to determine its world view and the development direction of the protagonist. For example, the longevity style (a genre that can achieve immortality through a certain golden finger) should be written in Gou Dao. Be as low-key as possible, try not to provoke cause and effect, try not to go to dangerous places, try to use time to exchange everything that can be exchanged for time, and learn to wait patiently. Also, I have always thought that the combination of immortality and marrying and having children is not good. It is easy for future generations or Taoist companions to cause trouble for themselves, and things like bloodline can easily attract curses and the like. This is not a weakness that an immortal person should have. Therefore, I have always thought that it is inappropriate for immortals to establish a large family. They should not gain immortality points by marrying a wife and having children. This is not as good as adding proficiency points. For immortals, finding a Taoist partner and having children should be controllable, not determined by the system.      ，，，，，

Chapter 102: Practicing Qi with Seven Layers of Thai Pants

The protagonist has a system and got such a good opportunity, but he was beaten like a dog by a monk at the eighth level of Qi Refining. He didn't know how to improve himself or hire bodyguards. In the past, enemies on the sixth level of Qi Refining could be killed by smashing them with talismans. Later, in order to create a plot, an eighth-level Qi Refining level was forced to appear where all the talismans and magic weapons could not be broken by throwing them. The combat power system was a mess.