Mystery: to a New World

It is recommended to read, and I have to say that the author's writing style is absolutely excellent, and his control over the atmosphere creation of small scenes, corner details, character reactions, etc. Is very good 😊 The development of the story line is also very interesting, and it is worth reading slowly! After reading for a period of time, I now like to read mysterious fan fiction that diverges from the original plot line and takes another path (especially those that are friendly to the creator). It is really an unexpected joy to be recommended to read this book! ! 😊 Big boost to the author😇

After reading ten chapters, I thought it was a book about accepting Klein as his younger brother and manipulating the situation. It turns out that Klein just has more subordinates than the original book. The protagonist is still Klein. So what's so interesting about this? Why don't I read the original book?

Come on... Three books of fanfic fairy grass level Secret: Mr. Witch and Miss Hunter... Cut off Secret: City of Mist.. No updates for three days. Secret: The ancient god turned out to be myself... Cut off and reborn. Keep it up, author~~~~

Come on, Xiao Ke's original work is that the awakening time is too late, and he is not with Yuan Zao, and he lacks a sense of layout after reaching the top in a few years. However, its mysterious path characteristics are not the kind that directly shock people. From a long-term perspective, there will be many things to watch like the audience. Yuan Zao's experience as a human pioneer was too tragic in the original work, and the fusion with Adam didn't feel like the original one. The description made him feel divine. Don't worry about what people say about using the original protagonist as the protagonist. Many fandoms, such as Naruto, also have Sasuke, Naruto or Lu Mingfei. It's nothing if you just wake up the timeline in advance. I think this is quite interesting.

Don't write it. It's annoying to see the God of Mystery. It's not cool at all. An old man is like a junior high school student in his heart? Not as mature as Mr. Ke. I don't know how the God of Mystery became a god. He has the personality of Sequence 0 and the brain of Sequence 9. Hurry up, eunuch, and continue writing the third part.

I think the previous book's treatment of the Aurora Society and the second creation of Zhenzao are very good points.

In the original novel, Tarot meetings are held to exchange information and characteristics. In this novel, they still exchange information and characteristics. The protagonist already has two nannies, the secret and the real. How can he hold a Tarot meeting with a group of little shrimps? If you don't understand, just ask the nanny! If you lack characteristics, just work for Mystery and Reality! I picked up the sesame seeds and lost the watermelon. . Just for the sake of Zhuangbi and Zhuangbi

I was disgusted to death by Su Huan😰

It turned out that I read it for Sharon. After watching it, I became obsessed with the plot of the gradual expansion of the Creator camp and couldn't stop at all.

The first was the good news, Klein and Sharon were together, and the next was the tragic news, Klein was crushed by Sharon, who came from the devil's path. But it doesn't matter, the one who feels wronged is Eternal Fierce Sun Complaining: After reading so many books, Klein is always under the influence of the heroine Every aspect of this book is good, the only bad thing is that the author has not updated it enough.

Compared with your collection, your monthly ticket is not low, and the writing of the description is okay. With the results, I feel that the introduction has a big responsibility. Your introduction neither reflects the golden finger nor explains the general content, and it is not the kind of clever content that people have fun with. After reading the introduction, I was confused, and then added your "three golden chapters", how many people just quit.

I don't understand who the protagonist is, the first few chapters are about ha

I'm too tired to read. I haven't read the previous book. There are many things that will be difficult to understand. It would be much better if the pace was slowed down. This is probably the reason for the score. At least there are no problems with the writing and plot. (Rather than being like an online article, the writing is more like the love posts in some niche forums. It is polished and attentive enough, but it does not conform to the reading habits of online articles.)

I just started watching it, is Sharon the heroine?

Messy and feeling polluted🥵🥵🥵

Good, good, very good. Come on, the author. It's really not easy to see fanfics with non-original protagonists at the starting point 😭😭

At that time, Xiao Zhou and Grisha were allies. Grisha shouldn't have to activate another uniqueness, right? Couldn't he just use it as a secret material for Xiao Zhou?

Stop writing. When you write fan fiction, you have to give 50% of the profit to the original author, and you have to pay 10% of the fees to the platform. How much does it cost per month? What are you trying to do? The royalties are not enough to pay the electricity bill, right? Think about how to write the third part

Nowadays, the Internet environment is becoming more and more developed, and all kinds of nonsense can come out to comment 😅 Why are people so violent nowadays?

Should the author consider adding two people to the Tarot Club? The current Tarot Club feels that it has been covered by Xiaoke's own influence. Except for Audrey, the other two Xiaoke subordinates are one believer.

The Klein in your book is really childish. It's much worse than the original one.

What does the author mean by creating the character of Jerry? I feel that Xiao Ke is too innocent and is completely mocking. What are you mocking? The ridicule is not because the author has experienced so many things in shaping Xiao Ke. It seems that Xiao Ke has not grown up. The author has not brought himself into it, but he does not have to suffer so much. The writing is still very good.

According to people who have read it, I don't understand the author's creation. For example, in this fanfic, he has experienced many things more than the original work. Instead, Klein is written as not growing at all, and then repeatedly deflated and failed to grow. In addition, through some superfluous new character creation, it seems that Klein is hypocritical. Generally speaking, if the protagonist of a fanfic is Klein, then you must write it with a Klein center. New characters are okay, but don't be superfluous.

If you don't know how to write the character's growth, then don't write it. Just follow the original work and portray the person so weakly.

When the author writes, don't forget to take a look at the Ring of Fate. When will hunters have a monopoly? Intis, my God, there are hunters everywhere.

After only two days of being together, we immediately developed a relationship that is the most speechless. Is it true that relationships are so unreliable and cheap?

I don't know if the author wants to portray growth or something, but anyway, if he wants to portray growth, it will have no effect at all. I believe that as long as you read it carefully, you will feel that Klein is constantly being educated and ridiculed. It is much worse than the original work. There is basically no growth line. Also, Gunstar has disrupted the pattern of the continent. There is nothing wrong with trying, but the things that are forcibly integrated into this book are a bit messy.

Also Zaratul, the angel carrying the lantern, can you not insult the lantern? Who doesn't know that Squid has answered the lantern bearer or the lantern bearer is the team of Beyonders sitting down in the Secret Church?

The writing is still very good, but it's not as good as compared to the original work, but it's definitely among the best among the fandoms.

Fabuti can still exert half of his old strength with the owner of the dark house, which is many times stronger than the Bound God, and he will have to fight in the resurrection match later.