Suleiman Khan, the Desert Eagle

The biggest flaw is that it imitates the Ming Dynasty's system and Sinicizes itself. Even the title "I" (朕) doesn't have a large Han Chinese base, so what's the point of copying it? It's incredibly irritating.

The subject matter itself isn't problematic; it depends on whether you implement the Qing Dynasty's system, the Mongol system, or the Xianbei system after entering the Central Plains. Most people can't accept the forced hair-shaving and clothing-changing practices, and the Mongol system is also quite jarring, but still tolerable. The idea of ​​learning from the Xianbei, adopting Han customs, and then reforming is what most people find appealing in this kind of subject matter.

The Oirat tribes were the most difficult to write about. All five tribes made terrible decisions during the modern era, suffering humiliation, massacres, and a sharp decline in population. To this day, they haven't even recovered to a third of their original size. I've read a bit of our nation's history and I'm afraid to continue; it's too much of a failure.

Author, please, stop acting like a pig who's never seen a woman before! Those nuns from that temple really disgusted me. Are you writing this to make money or just indulging in wishful thinking? It's so disgusting! You almost got killed by them, and now you're back here... Sigh, thank goodness there aren't any books with similar themes, otherwise, with your toxic writing, all your readers would have left.

The subject matter is novel, but I'm so tired of seeing anything about the Ming Dynasty now. The site next door even has that Central Plains dynasty story about Nurhaci; I'm really fed up with it.

I support this! I'm from the Torghut tribe of the Oirat. We have too little history; we should promote it more.

Reforming the official system was a mistake. Without a sufficient number of officials, what was the point of changing it to the Ming system? It was only after centuries of accumulation during the Western Han Dynasty that the Eastern Han Dynasty was able to transform the country from a military aristocracy to a civil service system.

This book, especially the part about the protagonist, reads like a naive and sweet romance novel. It's best suited for writing when online novels first came out; its audience is limited to newcomers to the genre. Anyone with a longer reading experience wouldn't read this kind of book. Back in my middle school years, around 2014 or 2015... Aside from some materials and research, this book offers little in terms of character development and plot.

The first hundred chapters were truly awful and terrible. It wasn't written from the protagonist's perspective; several chapters were filled with macro-narratives, jumping from one topic to another. This is a novel, not a history book! Whole chapters of macro-narratives—what are you trying to do? Do I need your history book? The protagonist had absolutely no presence in the first hundred chapters.

This story claims to be a time-travel novel, but up to chapter 124, there is absolutely no indication that the protagonist, as a time traveler, has made any contribution to developing productivity. Based on the first few chapters of the novel, the time traveler is probably at least an undergraduate student.