Suleiman Khan, the Desert Eagle

The biggest poisonous point is to imitate the Ming Dynasty system, Chineseize it, and call me "Zhen". There is no huge base of Han people. If you imitate the hammer, it will look too inconvenient.

There is actually nothing wrong with this theme. It depends on whether you follow the Qing Dynasty style of play, the Mongolian style of play, or the Xianbei style of play after entering the customs. Most people can't accept shaving their hair and changing clothes. The Mongolian style is also difficult to adapt to, but it is still tolerable. Learning from Xianbei's Chinese style and then reforming it is what most people can get out of this kind of theme.

The four Oirat tribes are the most difficult to write. All five tribes made wrong decisions under the tide of modern times. They were bullied, massacred, and their population dropped sharply. They have not yet recovered to one-third of the original tribesmen. I didn't dare to read a little bit of our nation's history. It was such a failure. I felt that apart from the Indians, we were the worst off. At least the Turks have more people and heroes like Kemal. We are left with a vast expanse of white land that is really clean.

Author, please, don't think like a pig who has never seen a woman. Which nun in a temple really disgusts me? Are you writing books to make money or for sexual obscenity? It's so disgusting. I was almost killed by the other party, but here I am again... It's a shame there are no books with similar themes. Otherwise, if you were so vicious, all the readers would be gone.

The subject matter is very novel. Now I see the Ming Dynasty text and I am very annoyed. The next station also has the one about Nurhachi. I am really tired of reading the Central Plains Dynasty.

Support, I am from the Torgut tribe of the Oirat tribe. We have too little history and we need to promote it more.

The reform of the official system was a failure. Without sufficient officials, what was the point of changing to the Ming system? With hundreds of years of accumulation in the Western Han Dynasty, the Eastern Han Dynasty was able to change the rule of the country by military aristocrats to the rule of civilian officials.

This book, when it comes to the protagonist, is written like a silly little sweet novel. You can at best write it for a while after the online novel came out. The audience can only be newcomers who are new to the field of novels. Anyone who has been reading for a long time will not read this kind of novel. That is, when I was in junior high school, a few years ago, about 14 or 15 years old. Except for some information and research, the character creation plot of this book is not interesting.

The first hundred chapters are really vicious and bad. They are not written from the perspective of the protagonist. There are several chapters of macro narrative, here and there. You are writing a novel instead of writing a history book. What are you doing with the macro narrative of the whole chapter? If I want to read a history book, do I need to read yours? The protagonist has no sense of existence at all in the first hundred chapters. I don't know why you wrote this book. When he started to have some presence, he lost his temper. He started to be deceived by women. He felt as if he had never seen a woman in eight lifetimes. Moreover, the protagonist had no brains at all and dared to say that he was a time traveler. The most inexplicable thing is that he was deceived and still comforted himself by saying that he had difficulties. Not only the protagonist is stupid but the author is also writing poison in the same writing style ten years ago. This author is unbelievable.

This article claims to be a time-travel article, but as of Chapter 124, there is no trace of the protagonist as a time-traveler developing productivity. According to the previous chapters of the novel, the time traveler is generally at least an undergraduate. Even an ordinary liberal arts student with a second degree should have at least a little foundation in physics, chemistry, politics, history, right? I don't expect you to invent and create on your own, but at least you can provide some guidance, right? How to build farmland water conservancy and how it gradually becomes better than the current era cannot be seen. There is no collection and cultivation of improved varieties. Iron smelting and steel making are completely absent. As a contemporary of Huang Taiji, the Mongolian protagonists located in the Bayingoleng Grassland, animal husbandry is the main business of the tribe, but there is no sight of the breeding of stallions and sheep, the planting of alfalfa, corn and other crops, the silage used as winter feed, and the development of the wool industry. I really don't know why you, a basic undergraduate student, traveled to the past? I felt that the old Mongolian script was inconvenient, so instead of designing it in Latin letters myself, I just waited for more than ten years for the great monk to come and teach Tote Mongolian script in person. But with this Thothmon script, is it really convenient? Is it good for printing? As of Chapter 124, the protagonist has three major ethnic groups in his name: Mongolian, Uighur, and Han. Their languages ​​are very different from each other, and the protagonist has not made any efforts to reduce communication costs. The protagonist obtains the right to be the leader of the tribe at the age of 13. It stands to reason that talents in various fields will be cultivated from this time on. As of Chapter 124, various fields should have begun to emerge, but they are not visible at all. At the level of productivity development, there is no trace of the intervention of time travellers. What did you wear there for? On the other hand, given the current productivity levels of the various forces in the novel, how logical can it be for the protagonist to develop the tribe to the level of Chapter 124? If there is no major leap forward in productivity in the future, can the protagonist who started as a small tribe really eliminate the major forces that existed in history?