The Lord of Taihuan Who Devours the Starry Sky

There are only a few Devouring Starry Sky fanfics that you can read, so be tolerant to novice writers. The beginning of their writing is not based on the earth line. The original plot in the early stage, except for the description of the practice, is a bit long-winded. There are no big problems. It is almost enough to pretend to be Shen Nong. What is the point of Devouring Fans with such little poison resistance?

Damn it, this place is swallowing the stars, not covering the sky. Why do I feel like I'm watching the sky over here? The protagonist is enemies of everyone in the world. Not only foreigners, but also a lot of people from the same race want to kill you. There are all kinds of conspiracies and tricks.

It's getting more and more poisonous. It's okay if the Territory Lord is released without Immortal accompanying him. Even if you don't have a teacher and are alone, you can give blood Luo Crystal to your clan members casually and return blood to your own clan. You are awesome. According to you, Devouring Starry Sky is all about blood. Immortal kills the protagonist's hometown casually. If I remember correctly, the hometowns of many original geniuses have been transformed by the company. Two geniuses of the same generation have been living together for decades and they still follow the way of the beast god. Do the top management no longer care? I haven't discovered that the clone is treating the higher-ups as fools. They are all direct disciples of Chaos. They go out and get the same treatment as the immortal disciples. . . You are so awesome. It would be great to retreat to the true God for more than ten epochs. If the logic is incoherent, it is better not to write, and subscribe to it in vain.

The increase rate of all the increase secret techniques is fixed. Why does the author think that it will decrease? Even rubbish techniques like the Nine Layers Thunder Sword will increase seven times if you use them for the realm masters.

It seems that it is gone, which is a bit of a pity. In fact, it was quite surprising from the beginning. It does not follow the original route and has a lot of original content. Unfortunately, it is a bit off-kilter. Something has been wrong since the first time the protagonist had to escape death because of a cheating technique. In fact, this cheating technique controls the time to start practicing, which is completely avoidable, but it is also understandable. But then the clone was deliberately arranged to be a troublesome clone just for the sake of plot conflict. He also forced the clone to be unable to break through immortality and had to rely on treasures from alien races. Territory Lord dares to venture into other people's territory and take risks. Where does he have the courage? Who says a clone must acquire an identity? Luo Feng only has the identity of a human when facing humans. He can practice as a clone and gain experience. He usually practices quietly. Why must he have a separate identity? Obviously the cheat is very strong, he can reach the true god even while lying down, and he can also cause life and death incidents at every turn. Luo Feng has not experienced as many dangers as you. Start forcing conflicts for the sake of plot conflicts.

It's weird that Devouring fandom uses innate magical powers. It's obvious that the original novel has innate secrets and uses magical powers.

To be honest, I don't understand the meaning of this Akiryo clone. It has no meaning at all except to increase the twists and turns of the plot and increase the risks experienced by the protagonist. The so-called finding an identity for the clone is also nonsense. No matter how special your will clone is, in the final analysis, it is still a clone. The consciousness is clear, and the understanding of the law is the same. When the clone faces a death crisis, it will also affect the protagonist. In the original work, Luo Feng has several clones, does each clone have an identity? It doesn't make any difference whether your will clone takes any life. Creating such a clone is just to cause trouble for the protagonist. If you want to find the secret book for the clone, you can find it. The protagonist has faced several life-and-death crises so far, and he has always relied on cheating to survive. To be honest, Luo Feng in the original novel was not as thrilling as you. Except for the Star Tower, which he had to carry on his own, there was no risk of death in other crises. If you write a cheating fan story and still have so many narrow escapes, even if you still have a doppelgänger, I admire you. The several death crises that the protagonist has experienced so far clearly could not have happened, and were completely forced by the plot.

Robbery and murder? It doesn't take even a second to send a message in the virtual world 😅

I also think it's weird to always rely on conspiracy to push the plot. It's different from the original feeling of Devouring this book. The plot of killing geniuses and grabbing treasures shouldn't be mainstream.

Too many people stop writing the Star Swallowing Sky fan fiction halfway through. If you want to write it, just keep writing it. Don't stop writing it halfway through.

I regret subscribing. It's getting more and more nonsense. Ordinary immortals try to seize the core ancestral land of the disciples of the Lord of Chaos City, and damn near succeed. The protagonist doesn't even have a feudal guard in front of him. He writes traditional fantasy novels in Devouring Skin, completely ignoring the main theme of Devouring. Disciples who are 100% the overlord of the universe are not as high-status as disciples who may not necessarily become venerables. They have to be called "sir" when they see a prince. There are more and more poisonous points. They are waiting for eunuchs.

There should be less internal fighting. At least when you go to Chaos City, you won't have to write so much internal fighting. We understand that this is to increase the plot conflict, but in fact, Virtual Universe Company or several other major forces must have restricted internal fighting and internal friction. In the original book, the old lover of King Zhenyan wanted to kill a universe-level person but did not dare to do it openly for fear of being caught. What does this mean? It means that the Virtual Universe Company and the Giant Ax Arena have restrictions on all immortals and venerables. For example, you cannot kill geniuses of your own race for no reason, etc. Finally, if you don't suppress the protagonist, it is foreseeable that the slowest domain lord in the universe will be able to become famous in tens of millions of epochs. At this time, you will find that everyone's attitude will be extremely good, and even the flowers will smile at you (except for aliens) As long as a genius of this level dies, he will definitely be investigated to the end. Those who are enemies of this level have only two choices, one is to reconcile, the other is to run away, and the third is to expect to be killed by the aliens. Ahem, I am off topic. Having said so much, I just hope that infighting will not be written as the main plot conflict in the future. First of all, it will not be comfortable to watch, and secondly, it is not consistent with common sense.

I've been keeping it for a long time, and I'm about to watch it. It's gone. Looking at the comments, it seems that Xue Luo Jing has been trolled. Hey, fans can cheat but don't violate the normal plot logic of the original work. You must know that the genius battle plot written by Zhan Dao is not acceptable.

Seeing the departure of Poisonous Hair in Chapter 5, the protagonist's Lingtong tribe has geniuses from hundreds of planets working together to determine their talents. They are all on the planet level. The test is divided into three parts: control, strength, and will. The control is tested first. Before the test, I specially wrote a genius who came from the same planet as the protagonist who cannot deal with it. It said that the two people were the same before. As a result, the control is first, the protagonist is last, then the power is top three, the protagonist is average, and the will is finally tested. The protagonist actually cheated to get the first place, a pure clown.

It relies too much on conspiracy to promote the plot. The assassination of the enemy genius at the beginning feels a bit blatant, and then the routine of obtaining a treasure and being coveted by the strong continues to be used, which is suspected of laziness. The plot of the novel does not necessarily have to be all big actions. It does not have to be a strong person who is several floors above you to bully the small one every time. Once or twice is fine, but it is too fake to do it all the time. The aura of the protagonist is too conspicuous, and it is similar to the plot of running water. I have read all the first 20 or 30 chapters, but when the author showed signs of using a routine that was bad, I couldn't stand it anymore. After a while, I ordered a few chapters to read, and the feeling is still the same as before. I don't have the desire to order all of them. I suggest the author think more about other types of plots. A novel cannot be written with one routine 😥

I really don't understand the meaning of writing about this Red Ting Grass clone. The secret method of cultivating a clone to a perfect genetic level is not the only one, but it is also widely circulated. Is there any mistake? Do you understand the value of perfect genes?

The author writes too much about internal fighting, and the method of relying on conflict to advance the plot is a bit low. In fact, Devouring Fans does not need to write too much about it. The beginning of the genius war is the time when the Devouring Fans take off.

Regarding this book, if you can accept that this is just a story about an upgraded monster-fighting novel that wears the skin of Devour, but is actually as universal an enemy as Zhe Tian, ​​and all the villains have incomplete cerebellum development. It has the same plot as Devour, such as the release of the domain lord, but the difference is that the three ministers actually look down on the protagonist who is the disciple of the Lord of Chaos City, and want to kill the protagonist if he doesn't give face to the protagonist.

The plot of this book is driven almost entirely by conflict, suppression, and internal fighting.

The writing is quite good, why did he enter the palace to serve the emperor?

I have a bold idea. Either the author was enslaved by the beast, or the pig's feet were enslaved by the beast. Otherwise, I really can't think of the reason why the pig's feet were targeted by the original universe.

Guys, are there any good-looking Devouring fans? I don't have high requirements. It doesn't matter if you are a little poisonous. Just don't keep poisoning. I really can't find them.

If you don't work hard, you can't even be a licking dog.

One of the best Devouring Starry Sky fanfics, and definitely one of the top three Devouring Starry Sky fanfics. I hope the author can come back to complete the work.

Recommend a fan novel "The Eternal God Brain of the Swallowing Star Sky" [Single heroine·Ai Chen] The protagonist travels through the Swallowing Star Sky and obtains the Eternal God Brain. The Eternal God Brain can integrate all things and turn into its own clone. It has its own innate abilities and can evolve infinitely! Integrate with computers, gain computing talent, and evolve into the most powerful brain in the universe, capable of performing calculations tens of trillions of times in an instant. Integrate the immortal-class spacecraft of the mechanical race, obtain the talent of mechanical creation, follow the path of mechanical style, and create mechanical treasures that are better than those of mountain riders. Integrate with the Zerg Mother Queen, gain the talent of genetic analysis, and integrate various powerful bloodline genes in the universe to create a perfect divine body. ...................... Zerg: Damn it, how did this human Li Xin create warriors that were so much stronger than my Zerg? Mechanical Tribe: We are the worst off. Originally, we had the most advanced technology in the universe, but now human technology is even stronger than our Mechanical Tribe! Yaozu: Let's not talk about other things first. Why is the gene multiplier of human beings now higher than that of our royal family? Human: We don't know these questions of yours, you can ask him yourself. Each alien tribe: We sent people to ask, but every tribe member who went to ask died and could not even be resurrected! Li Xin: Why didn't I find anyone asking me?

I recommend a book called "Swallowing the Starry Sky: My Comprehension Has No Limits", it's really good~

This book is well written, why was it cut? What a pity!

The best fanfic of Devouring the Starry Sky, the more you go to the back, the more exciting it becomes

Books that are obviously good will be cut.

When Luo Feng appeared, you were granted the title of Invincible. There was a feather duster for you. . . . .