Douluo: the Beginning Ruined Yu Xiaogang's Reputation

Hmm... Send yourself tasks, it's super simple. The system is an all-purpose nanny... Gives you everything! The main character is superfluous and feels useless. Also, while condemning the original character, could you please write the protagonist better? Don't make it more disgusting than him...

This book is a bit interesting at the beginning. In the middle and later stages, your protagonist is just an enhanced version of Tang San. If you write like this, I can only say that you really don't deserve to accuse Tang San. After all, the person who is more disgusting than Tang San is none other than you, the protagonist. Tang San is here to kill himself. You are just pretending to be sanctimonious in the way of death.

I don't know why I've read a lot of Douluo fanfics, but I don't feel like you. The adult world is full of fighting and loyalty. If you really hate someone, you will just stab them in the back!

Tang San deceived his master and destroyed his ancestors in his previous life. He doesn't look like a person who respects his master. It's too hypocritical to be a master for one day and a father for the rest of his life.

Little kittens

Tang San was tortured so badly. It felt so comfortable to watch. As expected, he was still happy to torture Tang San.

(ᐡ o̴̶̷̤ ﻌ o̴̶̷̤ ᐡ)

Not bad. It's basically not poisonous. I just don't know if it has some Cao thief elements (Bibi Dong, A Yin, Liu Erlong and Tang Yuehua are considered half), and whether there will be wives of soul beasts like the Silver Dragon King and Snow Emperor. Besides, the effects of soul skills are almost the same now. Next, let's stack up all the attribute bonuses. One hundred thousand years of soul skill attribute increase, one attack soul skill, dark gold terror claw bear, titan giant ape, azure bull python. You can create your own full elemental gem-like soul beast with additional attributes to enchant the soul skill. Just stack the buffs and you're done. That's it, the seventh ring of Azure, a 200,000 year old (like 120,000?) Soul beast with top dragon blood, the martial spirit avatar can be directly activated without any side effects, and the attribute bonus is outrageous. The original combination of soul rings is outrageous, and the seventy-level indiscriminate killing of everyone except the three peerless ones is enough. With the title, let alone the problem of the collapse of combat power, the configuration of the soul ring is not normal in the first place. What's more, it is estimated that the road to hell has been completed by that time, and the soul ring can complete the mission for more than ten thousand years. It can be said to be a high-quality product, after all, those who follow the trend now. . It's brainless and awkward, without any logic. I just write down whatever shortcomings come to mind, and then just say one sentence and it's over. It's so disgusting

A bit poisonous This protagonist is even more double-standard than Tang San 🤫

Not to mention that Bibi Dong killed Xiao Wu's mother, as mentioned in the third young master's side story, there are too many private settings for fan fiction. The settings we write later are not the same as those of our predecessors. I followed the settings of the original work. 😭

I've read more than 100 chapters and I'm a little angry. As a time traveler, you've done everything Tang San should do. It's too much to bully these people at Shrek. Is it interesting? If you don't go your own way and become stronger, how can you protect these women who treat you well? Isn't it interesting that these women are always scheming and scheming and turning into eunuchs? Besides, you are a super genius, how can you survive without the Spirit Hall and some powerful forces to protect you? Not to mention you have Gu Yuena, it took more than 100 chapters to publish this.

Xueer

I found that Douluo leading the system to deal with Yu Xiaogang was like a thief shouting to catch a thief, even worse than Yu Xiaogang! The only difference is that Yu Xiaogang plagiarized and borrowed from Wuhun Palace, while the protagonist got everything from the system! Everyone hates Yu Xiaogang but everyone is Yu Xiaogang!

To be honest, I was a little speechless at the beginning, and he was adopted by Old Jack. It's not that this setting is bad, but the main reason is that in many Douluo fanfics, the protagonists who are adopted by Old Jack forget about Old Jack who raised him for six years as soon as they leave the Holy Soul Village. I don't know what the authors mean by making this setting. It's quite disgusting, and I don't know if this book will follow this old path again!

Why do some people always regard Douluo Continent as a hydrogen planet? It's just a joke, but there are always people who take it seriously, saying that people on earth used to directly blast it. The geographical setting of the novel is not rigorous in the first place, and it is forced to be interpreted. If it is really true, there are some fantasy novels with rigorous geography. . . . . .

To be honest, if you put aside your prejudices and think about it objectively, you will know that ordinary people do not cheat, and if they travel to Douluo without a system and want to become a god, they have only two options, one is to join Shrek, and the other is to join the Spirit Hall. Because only these two places can get fairy grass, after all, it really allows you to travel back in time. Normal people can't always remember what fairy grass looks like and how to use it, so they can only rely on Douluo, the only two people who know fairy grass, Tang San or Ju Douluo. In this case, you can analyze it. The probability of getting the fairy grass is higher if you join there. In the Wuhun Palace, let's not talk about how to find out the information about the fairy grass without leaving any trace. If you don't have the golden talent, even if you provide the information about the fairy grass. Bibi Dong, Qian Renxue, Ju Gui, Enshrinement Hall, and the Golden Generation are the three of them. There are too many people who want to share the fairy grass, so if you don't have golden talent, Wuhun Palace will never give you the fairy grass. It would be nice to give you a soul bone. Then let's look at the other side, Shrek, who is under thirteen years old and above level twenty. This is a clear threshold. In the original work, besides Tang San and the others, there are several other supporting actors who have reached this threshold. The reason why they did not enter is probably because they were removed later. In other words, as long as your talent is Just be a little better than these people, but such a talent may be called a genius outside, but it is still far behind the golden generation of Wuhun Palace. Let alone this kind of threshold talent, even among the Shrek Seven Devils, how many people can get the talent of the golden generation before they eat the fairy grass? So just in terms of talent tolerance, Shrek is much greater than Wuhun Palace, and the probability of successfully getting the fairy grass is also much greater than that of Wuhun Palace. Moreover, Shrek has the endorsement of the original work, which has been clearly stated. As long as you join Shrek with Tang San, you can get fairy grass. You don't need to put all your efforts into planning, just let it take its course and wait for the plot to happen. As for licking Tang San, if you think Ning Rongrong and Dai Mubai's attitude towards Tang San in the original work is licking, I have nothing to say except that I hope you can continue to maintain this aloofness in society. The last two remaining situations are cheating. This situation is completely meaningless to discuss. It all depends on your personal preference. You can play how you want. The other is one with poor talent or no talent. In this case, besides licking Tang San, what other more efficient way can you think of to develop?

As soon as md started charging, the plot became like a stupid b. Is it disgusting or not? You can write whatever you want after you start charging, right?

I feel like this book is rubbing my IQ down to the ground.

It's not uncommon for authors to be miserable, but this is the first time I've seen someone like the author of this book who sells every chapter... No, it's okay for you to be miserable, then you should write a good book! The article is full of nonsense and the word count is too low, especially the part about the city of killing. After reading it for a long time, there is nothing useful at all. It feels like I have not read it at all! Moreover, the author's attitude is extremely perfunctory, the article is full of typos and omissions, he frequently gets people's names wrong, and he frequently eats the book. I have written before that Yu Tianheng is dead and Twenty-Four Bridges on the Bright Moon Night has been given away. Later, Yu Tianheng jumps out to pretend to be dead. The soul guide Tang San used in the killing city is still the Twenty-Four Bridges on the Bright Moon Night... Only for your perfunctory attitude to fool readers, only fools will vote for you!

The author gives himself a halo of wisdom while writing, right? By the way, I also want to infect readers.

It's interesting. I keep saying that Tang Buddha is disgusting and the master is a waste, but it turns out that some of the protagonists in the author's works are more disgusting than the original ones. It's really interesting.

Whether Xiao Wu's rabbit has given birth or not depends on whether she is a spirit beast or a poultry. The original work itself said that low-life spirit beasts only have instincts. In this case, it is not wrong to say that they are poultry with high strength. Rabbits are not born as soul beasts of 100,000 years. They also come through it year by year. They must have gone through the stage of only instinct, so everyone understands it.

Suddenly I was curious to see how many heroines there were. Hey guys, you've discovered something incredible.

It's really disgusting that you can write this to such an extent. You are also a disgusting person.

The emotional scenes are too oily, a bit greasy and a bit nauseating.

Why is there no Tang San on the way to Poseidon Island, but there is Tang San's name?

Is the author Bibi Dong's setting in this novel clean?

You use the word "also" in almost every sentence. It seems so strange.