A Different Gaming Male God

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Speaking of which, my daughter obviously wants to be a ghost girl, but it's actually quite fake for her to be so powerful. I have an idea. It would be fun if my daughter was a reborn person. With the thoughts of an adult and the body of a lolita, she is still a lolita and eats Yiyin tofu. Yiyin doesn't know yet. It would be best to describe more about her daughter's ideological activities. It would definitely be interesting 😃

This book is the key to becoming a god😈

This is written. . . I can't help it anymore. My career is just like a joke. If I can't write games, I suggest I change the title of my book and work in other industries 😅. The more I read in many places, the more I feel that the author is using his own personal stuff to vent his dissatisfaction in life. Some writing styles are obviously good. I hope you can at least be logical? What do you mean, otherwise it would be a waste of time? This reason is too outrageous. You are here to open a company to live, not to build socialism. This protagonist is not like a 30-year-old man, but childish like a student who has not graduated from high school. The author is attracted by your writing style. I have no other requirements. I just hope you can smooth out the logic. Please write well and want to read it.

Let's talk about my personal opinion. I fully ordered the author's last book, Japan War, and followed the latest progress. I didn't skip a chapter. I personally feel that the look and feel of this new book is not as good as the previous one, and it is inferior in all aspects. First of all, the setting. The biggest label of the two books is that the heroine is superior, but male audiences will definitely not like the real female superiority and male inferiority. Therefore, the heroine in the novel actually means that women are stronger than men, but the male protagonist is stronger than everyone else. The golden finger of the male protagonist in the Japanese War perfectly fits this point, and the male protagonist in this book is actually relatively weak in ability (currently). Then there are the characters. The characters in Japanese War have prototypes, and their life experiences, images and personalities are all referenced. Therefore, even though the male protagonist in Japanese War has so many female characters, many characters are still eye-catching, such as Kenshin, Mitsuhide, etc. There are characters with various personalities, and they are also well written. But as for this new book, to be honest, I have read more than 100 chapters, and I don't think any of the characters have been written. The impression is that I wrote two strokes of this character, and two strokes of that character. And to take a step back, are any of these female characters cute? The author seems to be obsessed with writing about their weird points, or in other words, they are female perverts. I think the difference between the characters in the two books is bigger than the plot. Then there is the rhythm. I don't know the author's outline. I can't comment on the big picture. I can only express my more intuitive feelings. Many book friends criticize the Japanese War for having too much political analysis. In fact, I think that clearly explaining the interest relationships, behavioral motivations, etc. To readers will pave the way for the climax of each volume at the end. After all, a novel can't be happy everywhere, and such a novel won't be good to read either. But I really don't understand the meaning of many plots in this book, and what about the climax of the plot? My personal feeling is that every ten or so chapters seem to be quite independent, without too much foreshadowing, resulting in a fairly flat rhythm. The last point is the subject matter. There is not much to say about this. I feel that the author's writing skills on urban affairs are far inferior to those on ancient war and politics. After writing so many summaries, the most important thing is the shaping of the female characters. There is really a certain gap between the two books. I like the book "Japanese War" very much, so when the author first promoted the new book, I read it with high expectations, but the more I read, the more boring it became. Especially for the "game" career, it was really not written well. I really don't want to criticize the author's book by saying this, but just some of my true personal feelings. To use an inappropriate analogy, I feel that I hate iron but not steel. It is difficult to write about female protagonists. If the author reads the comments and can help a little bit, that would be great. Come on!

It's pretty good-looking, but it doesn't matter if it's a girl. When I saw Uemoto, my brain was messed up. I just like Oda. You can focus on a few characters appropriately, and you don't need to write too many supporting characters.

To be honest, Sengoku Japan still looks good. .

The author is also too courageous. Fortunately, there are not many people watching, otherwise the small black room will be rectified in minutes.

To be honest, I am still looking forward to the story of Xingyue version

It's really exciting, take your time and don't be in a hurry, persistence is the most important thing*^o^*

I don't like Yiyin's description of himself in Chapter 105. If the author hadn't written it, I would still have felt it after reading it. After writing it, I felt a little nauseous.

Although it can save a lot of trouble by opening book friend points to speak, but it is a bit too early to open it 🤭

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The author is a mature woman. The protagonist is surrounded by people in their 30s, and they even eat those in their 36s. Let's order some in the 20s 🙂

Very good, cheers for the author＾0＾~

The author originally wanted to update this book twice a day. Isn't it very bold? As for this book, all the content is updated twice a day! When the author first wrote the book, he told everyone to update it twice a day, wow! Everyone is very excited, and the readers are very excited. They have been saying that there will be two updates a day. The readers have also been preparing to read the book and are busy preparing for monthly tickets. When I talked about it at that time, the author said that as long as you can give me 30 minutes or 25 minutes, double updates in one day will be enough. Readers ask why? The author said it was very simple. I wrote two chapters every day. I wrote one chapter in the first 10 minutes, and another chapter in the next 10 minutes. Double updates a day and it was over. Then in the last 10 minutes, I checked like crazy. The author said that in 30 minutes, I would have double updates a day. Wow! Everyone thought it was too awesome and too challenging, and they couldn't stop it for a day, but. . . Later the author gave up, do you know why? The author himself has studied a large number of books written by online authors, some written with water characters, and some written with AI. He has studied them all, but he has never been able to make up his mind. Do you know what the biggest problem is? Simply put, the biggest problem is that there is no idea. For an ordinary person who has been writing for a long time, he will know that he cannot achieve it without a writer, because you can't just say it, your idea will get stuck from here to there! It's over. The first idea can't keep up. The health of the second tendon sheath will be lost by more than half. It will be difficult to explain to the second one. Later, when he said to give up, it is a person's decision and one person's thinking. The author told his friend in a text message, ah? ! I couldn't accept it. My friend was completely immersed in double updates a day and liked it very much. Then he hurried over to fool the author. The author said you don't need to tell me, it can't be done anyway. Then I told the operations officer that I gave up, and the operations officer was like, I posted all the updates one by one (the operations officer started to show his teeth). The most interesting thing is that when I told my family that I would give up double updates a day, I suddenly felt unmotivated (the author couldn't help but laugh). I told the readers that I can't update twice a day. Oops... Ah... I feel like I don't want to read it. I'm joking, joking (waving hands). Everyone is frustrated and disappointed. Seeing everyone's reactions, the author is also very disappointed, hahahahaha. So double updates a day is destructive for an online novel that pursues high quality. He highlighted double updates a day, so what? You lost the story and sacrificed the characters, whichever is more important. Therefore, the author is also learning to think like a writer. This may be his regret, but it may be his sobriety or writing experience.

It's really well written, I will support it all

It's quite good-looking, much better than what I wrote on the street, come on (° ∀ .) If possible, I hope the author can write more interactions with the heroine. It doesn't have to be erotic, vegetarian is also acceptable, just some daily interactions, etc., Of course it's just a trivial suggestion (° ∀ .)

Raised to death. . . You can't control the water depth in zz. Try to have a foreign background next time

Understand?

So when will it be updated every day?

The writing is really good. Come on.

Additional refinement

Has the author considered developing in a certain Luobao?