The Golden Master of Heaven's Way in Mortal Cultivation

I really can't help but post this. A person wearing the skin of a mortal, written by Long Aotian and Xiaobai. Book friends who came here for the gimmick of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality fandom, please go back. Reading it will make you have a mouthful of stuff and you won't know which one to spit out first. To give a brief introduction to the specific plot, the IQ descriptions of all the characters in the book are on the same level as the characters in Long Aotian-style novels that were popular 10 years ago. There is no sign of the mortal flow in which each character has his or her own thoughts. Moreover, in Chapter 9, the combat power of the foundation-building period is established, and killing other foundation-building monks is like slaughtering dogs. In addition, there are a lot of typos in each chapter, typographical errors and omissions, and there are a lot of problems in the first three golden chapters of the book. Not to mention all kinds of bugs. Overall the quality is just that. So take your leave.

What's the point of marrying several women from the Mo family at once? I've never met a woman, so is there something wrong with marrying a bunch of messy women? There are still a bunch of mortals, can you strengthen them more than you can use up? Or do you think you are invincible and can bring a bunch of tow bottles with you without any problem?

Don't show your cards, it's best not to tell other people's secrets. There are too few resources for cultivating immortals, and the bottle secrets are too big.

I have never understood people who write books. You said that you have been focusing on the protagonist in the early stage, and your popularity has been exhausted. Who else will read your book? Although I understand that you want to write more words, but you can't survive, do you still want to write?

What do you think of a mortal father running a harem with the help of a time traveler protagonist? Author, I don't think you should start the book hastily. First, let's take a look at the exciting aspects of online novels. You are not an ordinary poisonous person. You are too poisonous. You really need to think about it carefully.

There are many poisonous points, I have only read more than twenty chapters, First, Golden Finger is quite confusing, Second, I bought this physical training method in the market for no apparent reason, and it took more than a year to practice the physical training method alone to build the foundation. Third, I traveled through time, recognized a father, and opened a harem for his father. If you open it yourself, I won't say poison. I'll wait for you to fill in the rest.

I can't stand it anymore. There are so many bugs and typos. I killed a lot of people when I was building the pill. I also killed Wu Chou before entering the city. Will I not get the spiritual stone to rent the cave? Those people's magic weapons alone can be sold for a lot of money.

As far as the resources in the mortal world are concerned, if you don't kill Han Li and grab the little green bottle, there is no chance of ascending to the spiritual world. Look at the gods in the original book. Those who are not geniuses, have great qualifications, great opportunities, have a large sect, and enjoy the resources of a world, can't ascend. How do you have the confidence to ascend with the resources of the mortal world? Not to mention the spirit world ascending to the fairy world. In the original work, apart from the old demon, among the surrounding world groups, only the spirit king has the ability to ascend. What other elders of the large group, including the ancestor of the devil world, ascended to the fairy world and the devil world? Don't talk nonsense. The biggest opportunity among mortals is the little green bottle. What the hell are you going to do if the time traveler doesn't take your time?

I clicked in and took a look, and I died of poison. Let me add to you: the protagonist has parents, and the protagonist's mother actually agreed to open a harem for the protagonist's father, and immediately admitted four women, all of whom were wives of Dr. Mo. The euphemistic saying is, if you can't be the protagonist's woman, then you can be the little mother of the protagonist, the fairy master. This plot is something that 250 years of cerebral hemorrhage could not write.

In the first few chapters, I thought it was okay, but refusing to communicate is boring. You judge people by their appearance, and those who look obscene are bad people. If you talk about it, you will offend others. Do you think it is still a legal society? Even in a legal society, people will not be rude based on their appearance. You don't even have basic courtesy towards people.

The most annoying thing is the Five Elements Spiritual Roots. People say that in fan fiction, good spiritual roots cannot be arranged, otherwise the spiritual roots will be destroyed. In the human world, the Five Elements Spiritual Roots are useless spiritual roots. Don't even think about it. The resources in the human world cannot bring them back. Are you saying that you can write about the spiritual world? If it could be written down, wouldn't it be great to arrange a Danlinggen. I have to adjust my feelings, waste materials flow, waste materials counterattack, routine writing, genius flow, and make great progress all the way, isn't it delicious? I always copy the same old articles. I didn't order anything of my own, and I'll get bored if I read too much.

The plot of the male protagonist with such a scheming girl is terrible, it can be cool

The servants all have golden elixirs, but the protagonist has only just reached a small level, and he has already used the golden elixirs by himself.

Another old pervert who can't walk when he sees a woman

Why is this physical training the same as playing? Is this still the one with the most training resources? Is it possible to break through with just one level 2 demon beast blood? Then if every person with a second-level spirit beast is allowed to bleed for physical training and not break through casually, it doesn't look like thousands of spiritual stones are used for physical training. If it's so easy to practice physical training, what kind of foundation-building elixir is needed? Anyway, the elixir is so difficult to obtain. There is a bright road to physical training, so why don't everyone practice physical training?

Rubbish. Really rubbish. Do you think a cultivator marries a mortal? It still depends on the color of mortals. Are you still cultivating immortality in the later stage if you don't have spiritual roots? If you have this ability. Just wait for the soul to be refined! First comment on trash fiction. Brainless novel.

Wow. I have never seen a book that has been criticized so badly. How dare you let the protagonist steal Han Laomo's first love? Why don't you let him parade through the green grassland every day?

I set up Goldfinger and knew that the plot was written like this. It was the most disgusting thing to open Goldfinger and try every means to suppress the protagonist for the sake of the plot. The writing was really ink.

Low-level magic weapons sell for one or two hundred spirit stones 666

I would like to recommend my own mortal fanfic "Mortal Old Man Jin Guang, What's Your Business" He traveled through time and became a money-giving boy, Master Jin Guang (later his skills will make him taller, please feel free to take over), and the Immortal Ascension Order in his hand suddenly became hot to hand. What, you are about to face a life-and-death battle with Old Demon Han when you first come here? ! Fortunately, I have a small golden stone. How can you cultivate immortality without relying on false spiritual roots! What, are you looking for Jin Guang? This is me, what do you do?

There is a problem with the design of the golden finger. It is not necessary to convert spiritual energy. It should be easy to write if both spiritual energy and demonic energy can be converted. Or my imagination is too small. Start writing from the mortal world and convert the demonic energy to purify the human world.

There are still some advantages. The male protagonist's name is well chosen and looks comfortable. If you write about alien spiritual roots and dual-system spiritual roots, instead of writing about wood spiritual roots and Qingyuan Sword Technique like other authors, and instead create your own spiritual roots, more people will read it. As for cultivating immortals, the most taboo is to find random women. You can have Taoist companions, but you have to find a woman who walks the road with you. That is a Taoist companion, and they support each other. Golden Finger is too arranged and cheating, and the male protagonist becomes a background wall. The female characters Yuan Yao and Ling Yuling are good. They have good luck and temperament to become Taoist companions. They are not stupid and sweet, and have their own love brains. The character of the male protagonist can be written. He should be more ruthless. In the world of immortality, people cannot be ruthless. It is better not to be ruthless, but to be tactful. Talk to others and tell ghosts to tell lies. Mature men must understand the pros and cons, but they should be ruthless and never act out of touch. If you write something like this, there will definitely be a lot of people reading it, and they will force you to write it. Most of the people who read novels are old bookworms, harems, and brainless Aotianwen.

The plot is okay, please update it

Invite Taoist friends to test the poison of "Immortal Tribulation One", which has 400,000 words and is free. It has a single female protagonist and is a mortal. She is absolutely brainless. The protagonist has a Tao fruit that can swallow the spiritual roots of heaven and earth. She is reborn but has lost her memory. The road to find her life experience is full of twists and turns, and she finally fights with the immortal half-child.

Now counting me, thirty people have invested in this book. I would like to ask how much they invested and whether they can get their money back.