Fairy, Please Help Me Live Forever

The first part is pretty good, but the second part is really hard to read. I also suspect that the author is not a man.

Let's see if you feel it Or this one

When I saw it on the shelf, I wanted to reward it a little, and I just wanted to say that your book is really amazing. I just want to ask what is the best part about this book? When I saw a bunch of supporting characters, I thought they were a harem, but you managed to run away. I really didn't understand, so it was set up that the protagonist couldn't die after being harvested. What's more, considering the one who absorbs spiritual power later, it's not good in the Demonic Sect? And how do you set up your world view? You rebelled against the devil because the devil is full of bad people. As a result, your setting of the righteous path is not very good. What is the meaning of your rebellion? A good hand hides in the demon sect and slowly develops, and finally turns against the guest. I believe this is what most people who read the title want to read. It is really amazing to make it look like this. If you have to make it full of bitterness and hatred, let me tell you the truth. If you don't know how to write, just learn from your seniors, okay? I really recommend that you watch "I Just Want to Be a True Man" and see how people deal with it. This person was once at the top of the monthly voting list, but you jumped on the street, which really made people mad. You held your breath when it was put on the shelves, thinking that you could do something good, but this is the result? Please change the title of the book. This title really doesn't suit you. Moreover, you really want to be more relaxed. As for the setting you gave the protagonist, the abnormal recovery power, you just ask the witch to collect supplements no matter what you do. In the end, the protagonist turns around and chases the witch for supplements. Then you only need to give the protagonist a dual cultivation to speed up his cultivation. Isn't it better than you who suffer and have deep hatred? If you don't have that writing power, don't write about suffering and hatred. The character creation is not good or bad, and it will leave people speechless. After looking at the chapter names at the end, I can only say that I won't read it. It's not worth looking forward to at all. It's a very unique book, but it has to follow the ordinary and clichéd plots. Goodbye, and I'll never see you again.

In the front, he was used as a human-shaped comfort stick, but in the back, he started to guard himself like a jade. This is anticlimactic, and subscriptions will drop out quickly.

This book doesn't look very serious

Don't be honest, there are no good people here

The editing is very boring and the plot is very cliché. Why do you write such a simple content if you criticize me for being superficial? I am speechless.

"Fairy, please listen to my explanation. I... Just want to help the fairy practice. I have no other intention... Just obey me." "Fairy, please help me live forever. I want to serve you forever and help you practice. Just agree to it."

I don't understand. The main character used to be like a stallion, even though it was forced, and now he's a eunuch. It's outrageous. No wonder he has poor grades.

Go to Zhengyang Palace to be a dog, not a casual cultivator

Forehead. . . I saw it the day before yesterday, finished it yesterday, and today I found out that the later version is free. . .

This kind of subject matter is not suitable for a female protagonist. It is recommended to mess around directly. 😍

The book is called Fairy, please help me live forever, and the content is: Witch, don't come here, I want revenge.

The writing is okay, but the subject matter is so disgusting that I can't stand it. It wouldn't matter if it was a duck.

It's nearly 70 chapters, and the world view has not been introduced. The characters are all evil. The protagonist has never been out of the novice village. He has been in the evil cultivator sect. He doesn't curse the opponent even if he has the chance to die. He doesn't know what he is waiting for. The main plot at the moment is to escape and survive, but the protagonist doesn't seem to want to get out that much. Instead, he feels a little bit happy in it. He has no trouble or any emotional fluctuations for the people who killed him by collecting supplements for n times. If it weren't for a system cheat, he would have died a long time ago. The characters have weird personalities,

So far, it's pretty good, but there's a worry, that is, we must not wash it out in the future. At present, there is no good person to play the protagonist.

I really regret that I subscribed to more than 200 chapters at once. The plot after the escape is really not interesting.

Wan Miao, this sect, is too disgusting if not all of them are killed. They are all women with scorpion-hearted hearts. They are even more disgusting than the Demon Sect. Don't kill them. Feeling very disappointed

Is 188 and 75 kilograms too thin? ! !

The title of the book has little to do with the actual content, it's a bit of a trick 😅

If the protagonist later has the strength, he will not kill this sect and leave. After all, the three views are more important than the five senses. The people of this sect have no humanity.

It's obvious that you learned how to start the game, and then you were attacked by a group of losers and then killed you. But the problem is that they quickly killed you, and you kept holding back until it was released. In other words, you spent dozens of chapters watching the protagonist and a bunch of losers. What's so exciting about this? Didn't you forget that you were writing about a large harem? ? ? The male protagonist with this kind of furnace physique is usually from a clean sect who is dissatisfied with his desires due to his martial arts. The master, uncle, junior sister, and senior sister are all members of the family. Write about daily life. Counter-killing is also the kind of m-person plot. It is inevitable to write a whole lot of stories about real eunuchs in a big way.

Come on, keep an eye on you

At the beginning, several female protagonists in this sect were probably not virgins. I only saw Chapter 11 and it said that Qiu Ying'er was not a virgin.