Prehistoric: Interception of the Disciples

The author writes well, it's wonderful

This protagonist is really becoming more and more hypocritical. Zhuang Zhou Mengdie has been reincarnated so many times, but he has not regained the Dao Fruit, but his horizons have been opened somehow. He is still entangled in the plot of the dream and even has inner demons because of it. He doesn't know how to become an immortal Dao Fruit with this kind of character. His reincarnations have been in vain, and he runs to confirm the one who is sure about this. Is the future generation so open-minded that even the simplest fears come from the fire deficiency syndrome? The cannon goes up and blasts his mother! As long as the firepower is enough, all monsters and monsters will be crushed. If you have time to think about things, it is better to think about where to go and try hard to practice. Naturally, all disasters can be overcome. If the future cannot be changed, it will be useless even if you think about flowers. The unfounded worries are not as good as you.

The protagonist is really both responsible and upright. He says that he doesn't want to seize the position of the master of the Jie Jiao for the sake of fame, but at the same time he sets up an outer sect to restrain Jie Jiao's disciples. Isn't this taking away Duobao's job? Invisibly split the Jiejiao and form factions. If you are so capable and have ideas, you should strive to be a senior brother, and you should be able to educate and teach in a legitimate way. Otherwise, just be alone, be a carefree person, and don't worry about anything. Awkward, pretentious, and smelly.

Little dream butterfly, dare to dream of a saint? Do you still dare to "reason" about the direction of prehistoric times? I pfft, hehehehehehe

I can't watch it. Since I know that dreams are different from reality, why do I still use the knowledge in dreams to show off?

It's really annoying to have things happen, to be and to be, but to not be able to see clearly one's own position. The protagonist wants to have a hand in everything, wants everything, has no goals, and doesn't face himself. He has no idea about his suitability. The Jie Jiao Shan Formation is also the embodiment of the rules. Who is the protagonist to me? Where does it come from? Where to go? I haven't thought clearly about it. To be honest, it's too confusing. I really suggest that the author re-plan the main outline of this work. It's really not pleasant to write like this, and it's easy for eunuchs. The more I write, the less people will read it. It will make me feel uncomfortable if my mentality collapses.

This title... Immediately reminded me of the book I read back then! How many years has it been?

Some of the previous ideas are rare and good, but the more I write, the more poisonous and disgusting they become. It's really weird.

It's really Dese Half a bucket of water is floating around

The author acted cunningly. First, the Dinghai Divine Pearl was half-forced by the Dragon Clan to replace it with a mirror formed by the first ray of sunlight in the sky and a space spiritual root. Then, Xihe's posthumous projection and Taiyin Xingjun also half-forced him to replace the mirror with a small branch of a hibiscus tree and a laurel tree plus a so-called deduction to help the protagonist block Haotian or something. So awesome.

I don't understand why everyone likes to intercept the teachings, a group of monsters, reinvent the earth, fire, water, wind, and bullshit settings. I had no intention of 10 years ago.

There have been a lot of changes from the previous prehistoric novels. The author does not blindly follow the past. The author's changes are even more refreshing. He does not follow the old ways and writes the author's own prehistoric novels. It feels good.

Overall feeling. Pretentious b.

The first chapter felt a bit awkward without that silky feeling. I guess it would be a eunuch if it didn't collapse later, but the setting was okay.

When I saw Jie Jiao's Little Disciple, I thought the main character was Li Ji. I had read a book Jie Jiao's Little Disciple a long time ago.

This novel is considered a breath of fresh air among the ancient novels. The author's writing style is also good. At least it is the fairy novel I want to read. There are just a lot of typos. I need to correct them. If I write it at this level, it will at least be excellent. Come on.

The writing is a bit messy. Jie Jiao is something that happens in the protagonist's dream. You keep talking about Jie Jiao in reality. Aren't you talking in your sleep?

I just read the introduction, and I simply feel that the author has not read the list of gods. You, a Jiejiao person, can be reincarnated after the death of the gods. Shouldn't we be made gods?