Witch's Feast

I don't know why, but it seems so messy and incoherent. But it obviously happened one by one

It's just one chapter a day, how dare you take such a break?

I feel the creativity is good, but there is something wrong with the writing style

The writing style cannot keep up with the creativity, and the writing is very messy

It's a phonetic code character, but the writing is not as common as usual.

I couldn't stand it after reading two chapters because it wasn't interesting enough and the logic didn't make sense. First of all, as a reader, I know that the protagonist will not die, so a desperate situation is not beautiful, especially when the story just begins and there is no foreshadowing. Secondly, the protagonist's desperate situation is caused by bad luck. In this case, unless there is absolute help, no matter how the protagonist gets through it, I feel it is not satisfactory. After all, bad luck is different from a glimmer of hope. A glimmer of hope is the greatest luck.

Let's just write fan fiction! Obedient! 🤫

It is a good idea to use good luck to promote the development of events. But if the protagonist wants to conquer without any source or means, and he can conquer the source of good luck, my impression of the ability of this source of good luck is false. After all, thunder can't kill anyone. It is suggested that if you really want to conquer, kill your sister first. It doesn't feel real at all. I'll run away first