Beginning with Maleficent to Dominate Dreams

After reading Chapter 80, I will share my opinion. Let's talk about the advantages first: the writing is smooth, and the characters' actions and actions have their own stances and motivations, and are not stiff. But the problem is that now it looks too bland and lacks conflict. The protagonist is attached to the Duke, and the previous protagonist and highlights are even robbed by the Duke. This shows that the protagonist is not proactive enough, and the golden finger is not golden enough, and it is impossible to see where it exceeds the standard. The heroine has too few roles, and the only impression she has on her is the label of beauty, which cannot be remembered. Both the male and female protagonists are not bright enough and their supporting roles take away a lot of their highlights. If the protagonist did not choose to rely entirely on the Duke, but instead danced on the tip of a knife between the church and the Duke, it might be better to gain recognition from both parties. The lack of a strong enough crisis or villain is the main reason for the dullness of the story.

Personally, when I saw the author not using common vocabulary on the grounds that "there are no relevant allusions to another world", I didn't think the author was very rigorous, but felt very awkward. After all, this online article is written for Chinese readers, and it is also written in Chinese. Essentially, all words are "translated." I have never heard of anyone translating father in law as "father in law" instead of father-in-law in daily usage scenarios, even if these three English words have nothing to do with "yue". Author, if you really want to talk about your cultural setting of another world, just mention it at the beginning.

Should the dictionary be written to the end of the chapter and would it be better to use the sequential coding system specified in GB/T 7714?

This book is not popular, it would swallow three kilograms of feces🤓🤓🤓

When I saw the beginning, I was a little speechless. Especially when the Duke asks about the protagonist's life experience, it's not like he is out and about, the identity is given by himself. The protagonist lives under the rule of a duke. Is it difficult for the duke to know the protagonist's life experience? Wouldn't it be better to send someone to investigate?

In my personal opinion, the two highlights of this book are the smooth and interesting writing and the idea of ​​marrying Sleeping Beauty, but apart from these two items, it can only be said to be lackluster. 1. The presence of the main plot is almost zero, either it is a vague and broad background like tides, or it is an established content such as a wedding that can be seen at a glance 2. The protagonist is extremely empty inside, dreams are golden fingers, knowledge/art/culture is stolen... Throw away these protagonists, what is left? Even his good looks can be attributed to the inheritance from cheap parents in another world. The protagonist's own characteristics and charm are really not apparent. Even the actions revolve around others. Today if the Duke wants to rebel, he will help with advice, and tomorrow if his fiancée wants to go to school, he will arrange to accompany her... Does the protagonist have any specific plans? It is unimaginable that a male protagonist with such low subjective initiative can appear in an online novel 3. The heroine still has some mystery and benign perception at the beginning, but the more she reveals, the more unpleasant she becomes. Especially the choice of permanent sleep directly puts people on a lower level. She thinks this is reciprocal revenge, but have you ever considered that the cause of all this is that she forced herself to die by drinking the potion and falling asleep? She was wronged because her family was facing the risk of extermination. As for how this risk came about, you don't have to ask. When fighting each other, one has to consider the fact that the one who flirted first is a bitch, and when it is her turn, she simply ignores that it was her who stabbed Lou. Is this retaliation really equal? You can still perform the Sleeping Dream Arhat Fist even if you're asleep, right?

Single female protagonist After signing the engagement contract in the early stage, the protagonist first improves her family, and then improves her favorability in the dream world. The rhythm is gentle, and there is less of a bright feeling. It is too stable 😒

Why does it feel a bit like the one I co-authored next door with a female protagonist? Yours has a male protagonist, right?

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The writing is very average. Why do you write so many daily routines like the Lord of Mysteries?

Investigation report: "Number" - 696 Investigation target: "Dominating Dreams from the Maleficent" - Male Protagonist - [Liszt von Gneisenau Gracia] Investigation Result: [Reincarnation] (Personal Speculation) Judgment Basis: Abnormal Characteristics: A time-travel investigator, as the name suggests, is a profession that investigates and records the time-travel situations of time-travelers. It aims to let observers (that is, readers) in all worlds know in advance the time-travel situations of people traveling in this world, and volunteers to provide observers with fast time-travel information query services If there are any fallacies, I hope to correct them ——All Souls Feast Zhenjun Stay on July 6, 2026

There are too many literary dramas. What I mean is that I could write more extraordinary content.

I found a treasure in this book. The writing is smooth and the plot is very interesting. Come on, the author, please update soon 😆

The daily guide finally gave me something good to recommend (tears) It's cool to read, it's very comfortable to read, but it's not enough Come on, author, meow

Support, come on author

What I wrote above sounds like a science fiction movie. . .

The heroine has communicated with the protagonist several times in the dream, and the most critical information of one year to wake up is not told to the protagonist, so it is very abstract, making the Riddler

The author's writing is very good. The female protagonist only pursues the extraordinary, and the male protagonist also mainly pursues the extraordinary. Compared with a couple who rely on each other, support each other and love each other, I feel more like a fellow couple pursuing the extraordinary. The relationship that is not indispensable to each other is not shown. The male protagonist can still develop without the female protagonist. The female protagonist does not need a male protagonist, and it doesn't matter who she marries, as long as she leaves a bloodline inheritance, or even gives up all relationships in reality. Then here comes the problem. Looking at it this way, the male protagonist is more like a tool man on the way forward for the female protagonist's family. The more you look at it, the more awkward it becomes. It becomes even more obvious when the female protagonist decides to give up her body. In addition, the article has always emphasized the male protagonist's elf bloodline. The question you gave the male protagonist's background is that of a down-and-out nobleman. His father's ancestors can be traced back. Can a duke even only judge the origin of the male protagonist's bloodline through his own performance? I think it is illogical and emphasized too many times. Moreover, the title of the book, Maleficent, currently only has a beautiful label of "Sleep". There is too little introduction to the other dreamland, and little representation of the power system. After dozens of chapters, the world view has only expanded a little. If it is a very long story, it is worth looking forward to, but looking at this situation, I am afraid that the author will not be able to write it and run away.

Why don't you call it Pig's Knuckle Moon Night Maple? Ginger walks in the white night, and the dark night is king.

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Let's just say, everyone has their own preferences, he is not my favorite, listen, listen, I want to pull this author's brains out and beat him up

Generally speaking, the writing is okay. The protagonist's cautiousness and arrogance are well combined, and the character of a beginner is established. The writing about the fiancée is interesting but a bit sparse.

The cover looks good, but there seems to be no one in the comment section

The main plot is weak, but the writing is super good

It feels good, but the name feels a little weak.

Borrowed downstairs, the new book "Fist and Method", big brother and big sister will support it

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