The Beauty Life Starting from the Godfather

How should I put it? I feel like the author is a novice and can't grasp the key points. He always describes nobility, power and the like. He has mentioned this stuff in one stroke and there is no need to mention it again and again. After reading Chapter 7, I felt a little embarrassed.

I'd like to read some Godfather fics, any recommendations?

I hope the author will reduce the amount of emotional drama. Readers who like to watch The Godfather do not come here for the emotional drama. Flirting with those insignificant supporting characters is a long chapter. It really feels like writing nonsense. It has no effect on the plot and seems long-winded and cumbersome.

In the first chapter, I tried to persuade him to quit. What the hell was he writing? While talking, he complained about the character he possessed. Rory is acting like a psychopath.

It's good to read. I've read a few chapters so far. Since the protagonist chooses to be the godfather's son-in-law, there is no need to have a harem. He can have a one-night stand, but there is no need to be merciful. Looking at the label, he is decisive and decisive. I hope the focus is not on the humanoid self-propelled cannon. It is not in line with Corleone's character at all. Instead, it is development, which readers like to read. Come on!

It's so embarrassing to call Chinese people Longyi Town

Kavin? That's because the hole you opened is hard to fill. Didn't you want to have special male sex in the protagonist's previous life? Don't use too much imagination. It was difficult to write in those days.

Why do you still want to write about Chinese people when you are already in the American variety show world? Isn't it patriotic if you don't write?

Are you a eunuch? I feel like the writing is pretty good.

I giao, will it be cut when it is put on the shelves? Real or fake?

The writing is quite good, and I think it would be perfect if it didn't make jokes that would be a bit embarrassing for me.

The only focus of this novel. This is gangster. Carry forward.

When I started reading, I saw that this book had already been cut 😂

Isn't this very obvious? A person who has failed to seize the body feels like a novice. He has no experience writing fan stories and has no success at all.

Is the author suffering from yang? Updates were discontinued as soon as they were released.

The writing is quite good (≧∇≦*)

Chapter Six: Forcibly Feeding Poison The author may not have read The Godfather Farewell!

It's been four days and you still can't write a novel? You are lazy! ! ! !

You are not Yang 😰

What has the author written before, would you like to read it?

This is a romance novel, please read with caution.

I've been wanting to read a Godfather fanfic for a long time, but I don't know how it's going to be.

It has been added to the collection. It has great ideas and the author's writing is very good. This book title makes people want to click on it. I visited with my work "The Witcher Begins in America". Thank you!

Will the author continue? If you continue, spend money to catch up.

Are there any novels about the underworld? Brothers, please recommend them.