America, Starting as a Trainee Police Officer

I don't understand. You write about American police officers and just write about cases. Why do you keep bringing up the Inglourious Basterds family? It's off-putting.

All the skill books are ready. If you don't get an accounting and tax law in Amei, you can make money. If you get into stock trading, you Chinese are really going to be angels.

You added Fiona, Thousand Killer, to the list of supporting female characters, do you want to write the protagonist to take this bus? Many beautiful girls in American TV series have to spend time on a bus?

I was bored and attracted by the female protagonist. After watching it, all I did was catch criminals and do tasks and bullshit the Gallagher family. Moreover, women in Europe and the United States are so playful and sexy that they can have sex with strangers. The protagonist is so busy and there are so many female protagonists. Is it because the protagonist is fighting crime outside for the peace of the United States? ? ?

The saber-toothed tigers are dead, and if you're not Wolverine, don't worry.

After reading the beginning, I had no desire to continue. There is actually a police chief in the United States who cares more about the casualties of criminals than his subordinates? Crazy

Indeed, the thugs looked weird every time. Other policemen were sent to the morgue. It was as if they saw Ye Ge's light behind you, and then both sides of the face were swollen.

Didn't the author just write a book and didn't read what he had written? The logic of the protagonist's actions is flawed. The protagonist has no reason to act. He is purely a tool to push forward the system's tasks.

Fiona

Amanda

There is a problem with the rhythm. In addition to facing guns, the grassroots patrol police have to compete with the domestic auxiliary police. It's outrageous to encounter big cases every day. Is this a patrol officer or an FBI ace agent?

Chapter 7 The author is kidding! The police have nothing to do with this kind of insurance fraud! Don't write randomly!

I'm not in Chicago, why are you in Los Angeles?

I can't stand it after reading some of the comments. Have you watched too much of the theme a? The protagonist is a policeman, and the police arrest people, not kill them. Also complaining about the characters in Shameless being too retarded, then wouldn't the original show already be retarded. There are some other complaints that I won't go into. Evaluation: The protagonist is very normal and the writing is also very normal. It is written as a very normal story about a working man, who plans a way out due to injury and is willing to survive. But I feel that the majority of abnormal readers are not here to read novels, but to read their own stereotyped prison stories.

Karen Jackson

Good water, vast sea of ​​water, in just a few dozen chapters, the Gallagher family has been caught hard. The old man Frank even lost one of his legs by the protagonist🥲The protagonist is not like a normal person, like a game player. Every day he patrols the streets and does tasks, eats, drinks, has fun and picks up girls. He knows that his legs are in trouble at work. With such a strong task and storage space, he still doesn't make money and insists on living in a dog house. The point is to arrange for a big boss to be a non-killer. Damn it, this is completely unreasonable. What is the current situation? Don't you know how dangerous it is? And if you don't kill, you lose the fun point.

Is the comment section so violent? I think the writing is okay and quite to my liking.

I keep going on missions and become a slave.

There is a strong AI flavor in the back, with a lot of repeated paragraphs and a lot of words describing the environment and the characters' demeanor. The early stage is medium and heavy, and the later stage is a mess💩

Rosalind was in the water for too long, bad review

The further you go to the back, the more you pull it, until it almost becomes a lump.

If you want to review the TV series "The Rookie and the Old Cop" in words, and if you want to experience the sense of torn between white leftists and extreme personal egoism, I highly recommend this book.

It's a system again. Without this, wouldn't you be able to write?

The new dungeon is just like shit. The protagonist might as well go over there and cool down. It's none of his business. Why are you still following him and spending money to watch the original drama?

Gone again. I might as well watch an American TV series. Pure money fraud

Administrative leave is just gone? Don't you have to fill out a bunch of forms every time you shoot, and then go to the doctor, and the doctor says there is no problem, then you can continue to work?

The writing is pretty good, isn't it good to think about the plot yourself? Is it okay to copy the plot of the American TV series Rookie like this?

The writing is too verbose, and the number of words in the chapters is getting smaller and smaller. Obviously these two chapters are the number of words in one chapter, so they have to be split into two chapters. If you insist on writing like this, I would rather you stop updating