Become the Second Generation of Aristocrats in the UK

The writing is fine, as is the rhythm and plot, but the author doesn't seem to know much about online writing. In fact, the main line of the story is extremely vague, and it is impossible to tell what the protagonist wants to do. Secondly, the description in the first chapter is too redundant, making it easy for people to abandon the book. Finally, online articles are commodities rather than works. I wish the author a great sale.

The last few posts have been so retarded. Do you think you won't be able to make any money at all?

The surname is Kang Enbei, and his ancestral lineage is Enteritis Ning.

The author's business writing is really too simple, thinking that giving inventors more income will make them highly motivated. In fact, it harms others and yourself. If you don't recruit enough people to join the team, your own life will be difficult to protect. How can you get so much benefit to the inventor? The status of the inventor is very low, and you cannot protect your industry at all.

Ah, it's poorly written. I'm really speechless. Even modern America doesn't have any good anti-guerrilla tactics. How should I put it? There are basically no good anti-guerrilla tactics. Moreover, the protagonist is not enough to lead all this. Generally speaking, it is more fruitful. Organic tactics require political commitment, which means giving them official positions and independent rights. The protagonist cannot promise. Ah, it is useless to talk about mobile guerrilla warfare and confrontation. The essence of guerrilla tactics is to exchange human lives for the results of victory. That is to say, 10 soldiers or 10 militiamen. In exchange for an ordinary soldier, they make money. If he dies, 10 militiamen or, well, how should I put it, can pull up 100 at any time, but you can't. You can only mobilize another army from the mainland all the way, and the words of this army are very precious. If one person dies or the other person dies, you cannot afford to lose, whether it is the cost of training, the cost of transferring people, transporting supplies, etc.

I don't know if you can be Napoleon's nemesis, but I definitely know that you will be tricked to death by a group of noble pig teammates.

After writing this, are you going to lick the motherland's ass again? This is the case at the end of every novel. He became the official of a small village without even a great emperor. I hate it when I see it.

I found it difficult to read. The protagonist in the article is an officer in colonial India. Although he is dealing with Ah San, the methods are very familiar! Is that what the Japanese did back then? What did the folks and soldiers do at that time? There are those who are protected by death, and there are those who stand up on their own! Maybe there is something like the one in the article? Put yourself in their shoes, if you were a fellow villager and a guerrilla, what would you do? The bigger question is whether he can survive the torture that will follow! It's better to kill the protagonist directly, but the one who doesn't persevere is terrible!

Although it is set in a different country, this book does tend to praise the invaders, vilify the guerrillas, and vilify the people.

Looking at the title, I really thought it was about eating, drinking, having fun, and finding a peasant girl. I didn't expect it to be a story about going to a colony to be a soldier. It's a bit hard.

I prefer to watch plots in which the protagonist works more for himself in the Daiying system, and don't like to watch plots in which he contributes to the colonial empire. Although it is Daiying's position, it is not very satisfying to suppress the colonies as a colonist.

I found that I am really not suitable for reading such long and difficult sentences, and the sense of substitution is very weak. When readers read the novel, they will automatically assume the perspective of the protagonist, and then based on the lines, emotions, and actions in the book, pictures will automatically be generated in their minds. When readers enter the story, follow the protagonist's perspective and experience an event completely, they will feel a sense of unfinished content and fullness. I can also understand the first few paragraphs of your opening paragraphs. Although this will increase the difficulty of reading (usually the author will only write a paragraph of long and difficult sentences to foreshadow), it can also add an exotic flavor, with some subtle style in it, which is usually called dazzling skills. But I can't understand the big paragraphs after you at all, and I wonder if you have any experience in reading online articles. Because such long and difficult sentences will greatly increase readers' reading difficulties and lack a sense of substitution. The reason is very simple. There is too much information hidden in one paragraph, and some information is completely useless and repeated information. For example, it is written in a paragraph in Chapter 3: But with the joint efforts of Aldo, Tom, and Dr. Stein, Dugan successfully cut open Ken's fat belly, and then put his hand into the belly protected by the thick layer of fat. After groping for a long time, he still couldn't find the lead bullet. Finally, he took out the fat man's smelly fat intestine! Do I need you to repeat the names of the three people? Wouldn't it be enough with the combined efforts of everyone? What is the significance of writing these three names? Anyway, when I read this, I had no impression of these three people. They were roughly equivalent to passerby A, passerby B, and passerby C. Either you have a problem with the portrayal of the supporting characters, or the amount of information is too complicated and confusing, and the priority is not distinguished. And the ones behind you and then, finally, I am speechless. Is this some jumping action? I also need you to confirm the chronological order? It smells like AI. If you use AI to polish your writing, then I suggest you stop polishing it. Your information content is already sufficient. If you are generated by AI, I suggest you type the novel yourself and revise it before publishing it.

The first chapter at the beginning contains five or six common sense questions, which is very difficult to break down 😒

I clicked on it when I saw the title without reading the specific content, but I just want to say that the second generation is not considered a noble. In their circles, it can only be regarded as a nouveau riche. If you say that your father rose from the poor class to a nobility, then in the eyes of other nobles, he is just a nouveau riche. Unless his power can be maintained for two or three generations, it can only be said to be completely stable after the third generation.

There are two hidden lines in Europe at the end of the 18th century. In terms of production methods, the pre-industrial pastoral order disintegrated under the erosion of capital. Peasants were stripped of their land and transformed into semi-proletarian migrant laborers, which brought many new social conflicts after entering the cities. In terms of political structure, the aristocratic privilege system based on blood theory was disintegrating. The emerging bourgeoisie completed the control of national sovereignty by grasping the economic lifeline and enlightenment discourse, and some conservative aristocrats gradually became lonely. I feel that the content written by the author does not reflect the social changes at that time very well. I hope there can be more content that is closer to the historical facts at that time.

I'm really looking for a farm girl. Looking at the catalog, it doesn't look like there are any girls.

I generally hate the UK, but I feel okay about France.

I can't stand it any longer. Chapter 1: Persuading people to quit. It's too naive.

The author's writing is very good. Can you try harder to update it?

(Ming)'s novels should be added to Xu Miaoyun's (Ming) novels. Most of the reasons for reading (Ming)'s novels are almost all of the TV series Shanhe Yueming.

Didn't you look at the question in detail? I said before that the heroine is a pretty girl.

What I mean is that the author's answer (beautiful woman) will you accept it and why the content sent are all the female protagonist's answers.

I am asking whether all the beauties of the protagonist will be collected. I explained it twice before. What the heroine means is that the collection of beauties has nothing to do with the beauties of important status. Can you answer that?

I mean, what does it mean for a beautiful woman to become the protagonist's wife? Can you answer it?

Will you start reading novels about the Three Kingdoms and Water Margin in the future?

What it means is not very clear.

The writing is okay. Although the main line is vague, the flaws do not hide the advantages. It is already good. It should give newbies confidence. Come on, I am optimistic about you.

Can you answer the previous question?

Can you answer whether the updated novel has multiple female protagonists?

I'm talking about the beautiful lady who has collected it, can you answer it?