I Can Enter the Past Lives of All Beings

Personally, I think it's better not to make the dungeon too long. The main reason is that the original purpose is to watch people pretending to be pigs and eating tigers or pretending to be cool. In real life, when the climax is about to come, suddenly such a long dungeon seems like it's gone 🙄

Brother, let me give you some advice. Do you know why the last few plots have been said to be deceptive? Because you have been writing and writing without giving any corresponding foreshadowing. As a result, when you write directly later, it is like a deus ex machina.

Is this what Jiang Jiang has on his world-weary face?

Come on, author, if you can write the current idea well, maintain the current level in the mid-term, and be able to stabilize in the later stage. If you can't become a god, you can still become a king, hahaha Don't collapse So everyone should read more, don't keep books, come to the starting point I've read several new books but they all sucked me up. Alas, some of the books were clearly well written in the early stages, but the data were poor when readers kept reading. Then the author couldn't make a small living and had no motivation. The quality of the plot got worse and worse. In the end, it was either a eunuch or a bad book.

The article is quite nice and attractive, but I still have some suggestions It's too much, it's a bit too hard, the characters in the book are too pure, as colorless as white paper It seems attractive at first glance, but if all the characters in the book are like this, it makes people feel uncomfortable An unreal feeling Everyone goes to extremes, but there is no distinctiveness, and it even feels a little morbid Well, of course if the author writes this is a passionate middle school article, then there is nothing wrong with it. After all, the world of middle school is very... Pure. It looks really cool

I don't know after reading Chapter 28, but the current protagonist is an arrogant man who opens a dyeing workshop if given some paint. He is better than him and kills him directly. He is stronger than him but will put on airs when being polite to him. In fact, he will give up after two slaps. The character of the protagonist is too divided, just like a mud-legged young master.

Watching steadily, staring blankly. How much the author likes this kind of thing, I find it awkward anyway.

This good-for-nothing was cast aside by the Yangshen. He was despised by the whole family, but he had a caring mother. His mother had a story, and it was not the head wife who was being persecuted.

To be honest, the early and middle stages of this book are quite attractive and can really leave an impression, but when it comes to Fengshen... It's a bit confusing. It feels like it was written by another person. It's okay to be sensational, but let's not make it so frustrating 😥. I didn't subscribe to all of them. I started to subscribe from Fengshen. I can only say that the author should work hard.

After reading the previous chapters, the topic selection was very good, but I was dissuaded from reading this early article about the servant abusing the master. Earlier you said that the protagonist brought shame to the Yang Mansion, but now the protagonist can enter and exit the manor, and is still being bullied by the servants. As long as the protagonist tells the outside world that the servants of the Yang Mansion bully the master, won't the Yang Mansion lose more people than if they break the engagement? If you are not taken seriously, you can be bullied by your direct descendants, not by your subordinates.