I Can Enter the Past Lives of All Beings

Personally, I think it's better not to make the dungeon too long. The main reason is that the original purpose is to watch people pretending to be pigs and eating tigers or pretending to be cool. In reality, when the climax is about to come, suddenly such a long dungeon seems like it's gone 🙄

Brother, let me give you some advice. Do you know why the last few plots have been said to be a deception? Because you have been writing and writing without giving any corresponding foreshadowing. As a result, when you write directly later, it is like a deus ex machina.

Is this what Jiang Jiang has on his world-weary face?

Come on, author, if you can write the current idea well, maintain the current level in the mid-term, and be stable in the later stage. If you can't be crowned a god, you can still be crowned a king, hahaha Don't collapse So everyone, please read more and don't keep reading. After coming to Qidian, I read several new books and all of them were spoiled.

The article is quite nice and engaging, but I still have some suggestions. Too much is not enough, a bit too much force. The characters in the book are too pure, as colorless as white paper. It seems attractive at first glance, but if the characters in the book are all like this, it will give people an unreal feeling.

I don't know after reading Chapter 28, but the current protagonist is an arrogant man who opens a dyeing workshop if he is given some paint. He is better than him and kills him directly. He is stronger than him but will put on airs when being polite to him. In fact, he will give up after two slaps. The character of the protagonist is too divided, just like a mud-legged young master.

Watching steadily, staring blankly. How much the author likes this kind of thing, I find it awkward anyway.

This good-for-nothing was cast aside by the Yangshen. He was despised by the whole family, but he had a caring mother. His mother had a story, and it was not the head wife who was being persecuted.

To be honest, the early and middle stages of this book are quite attractive and can really leave an impression, but when it comes to Fengshen... It's a bit confusing. It feels like it was written by someone else. It's okay to be sensational, but let's not make it so frustrating 😥. I didn't subscribe to all of them. I started to subscribe from Fengshen. I can only say that the author should work hard.

After reading the previous chapters, the topic selection was very good, but I was dissuaded from reading this early article about the servant abusing the master. Earlier you said that the protagonist brought shame to the Yang Mansion, but now the protagonist can enter and exit the manor, and is still bullied by the servants.