Lord of Mysteries: Assassin on the Wrong Path

After reading the first part, and then reading the comments section, I feel that the biggest controversy in this book is that the main character changes back to a man The problem is not the path of change, but the change of tone caused by gender change. This feeling is like going out to eat and you use particularly sweet sugar to make a chili-shaped snack. Because the taste is too sweet, some people don't like it so they don't eat it. The remaining people who liked it thought the shape of the pepper was just for fun, but they were happily eating it when they suddenly ate the pepper... It's not that you can't eat spicy food, but it was so sweet before, so those who like spicy food left, and the remaining people who like sweet food mostly don't like spicy food, or they only want to eat sweet food now, so everyone is unhappy.

1. I read this book because I wanted to fall in love with Xiaoke, but you sued me and ended up being single? What's the point of writing about falling in love with Xiao Ke? 2. If you have time, post the changes one by one in the comment area, why not post an introduction? Just for that traffic? 3. Have you inhaled too much occult smelling salts and refused to listen to advice and insisted on holding it in? What's the point of having a bigger life after driving away those who like to watch the male protagonist and those who like to watch the change of marriage?

At first, I was quite surprised. I felt that there were no obvious flaws in the author's writing and plot. Why didn't he even get 10,000 collections after writing 200 chapters? When I read it later, I realized that this was not the protagonist of the online novel at all. The first time I saw the protagonist of the online novel, he was almost beaten to death with one move. After he killed him, he felt extremely guilty. He even hugged the opponent's body and cried. What was the reason? Because the protagonist thinks that the other person is not a bad guy →_→ If it were another protagonist, if you didn't mess with me, I wouldn't take the initiative to attack the good guy, and I would even help him for free. But if you come to kill me, you can still kill me even if you are a saint. This kind of outlook on life is very correct for the protagonist, I didn't expect there to be a book like this. So the protagonist should have given up resisting and being beaten to death would be in line with his moral values, right?

The author just doesn't believe it, and he's just following the witch route to entertain people, but he hasn't followed through to the lowest level… He jumped halfway, just to change back to a man, and he doesn't even know how to write it later. Isn't this just half of it and holding it back… Your protagonist is on the road to becoming a god, brother, if you don't have a heroine, you don't care about gender, and if you have a heroine, you can fuck Lily. Why do you have to change back to a man? In terms of persistence and gender, why did you write the "original" line in the first place? It is not difficult to understand that many readers can't stand it. The story timeline chosen by the author will end in two years. At this time, he does not want to become a god quickly to save himself, or simply marry Xiao Ke (Secret) and hug the thickest thigh. Just to change back to a man, do you jump the path? 🤔 What should you do if you are crazy? There are more people who don't go crazy 😅 To put it another way, let alone changing into a girl, the novels that turn into inhuman monsters all have a path to blackness. When I was reading, I remember I posted a chapter saying that if the male protagonist is Xiao Ke, it is not impossible.

I made dozens of pictures in AI but nothing particularly suited me, so I picked two relatively good ones and lightly modified them with PS. (I am an average painter, not as good as AI except for common sense) The position of p2's hat still looks weird hahaha but I really don't want to change it. Personally, I feel more like the female protagonist (male protagonist). The male protagonist gave me the impression that he is a bit handsome and stubborn young man than he seems to be gloomy, withdrawn and not good at words. It seems that my personality has changed after my transition ()

Either don't write about the transformation in the first place, and since you've already transformed, don't change back again. Transforming and marrying Klein may be able to catch some readers with special XP systems, and the results may be okay. If you change back again, half of the readers you filtered may have to leave.

Uh-huh, I was deceived by the witch. Now you tell me that you want to become a hunter. Isn't it a good idea to deceive readers like this? Nowadays, those negative book reviews are all the same. They were attracted by the gender change in the beginning. Now you tell me, it has not changed? ? ? It's like halfway through The Marriage, you told me that the protagonist has turned back into a man, and that there is only a pure friendship between the male and female protagonists? ? ? This is a misplaced expectation. The author did not say at the beginning that he would turn back to a hunter. So now that the book is being scolded/abandoned, the author himself has some problem. (I have politely refrained from saying the word "deserved")

One thing that makes me very strange is that the protagonist has not even passed Sequence 6, but a bunch of people in the comment area are arguing about whether he should change back to Sequence 2 and Sequence 3. The author has delayed almost 200 chapters in a sequence 6. I am grateful to God for being able to write sequence 3 (the other witch is directly in sequence 3tj). In addition, there are questions about the rationality of changing the path. From the setting point of view, the protagonist is not like the other one who has a lot of hugs when he comes out. Continuing on the witch path is definitely seeking death, so changing the path is basically certain. Finally, I don't expect the author to reveal the subsequent sequence transfer so early, but I hope that he won't delay it any longer. The speed of passing sequence 6 is not as fast as the average Tarot Club. Such a lack of skills will really discourage many people.

I also made an original sequence at random 😂 Sequence name: matrix. Features: Bringing virtuality to reality, everything you see can be turned into 0 and 1 data and modified, eventually becoming a matrix of all data. Any sequence of the Audience Path and the Wrong Path Sequence 2 can be converted to the Matrix Path, but the Matrix Path cannot be converted to other paths. Sequence 9 - Mathematician, greatly increases his own calculation power and spiritual control ability. At the same time, he will not be able to use any ritual magic normally, but after digitization, he can use it normally and it will be enhanced. Sequence 8 - Logic genius, capable of diverging thinking to form various virtual personalities, performing multi-threaded operations (multi-tasking), and at the same time pulling enemies into a logic cycle. Sequence 7 - Keyboard Warrior (eloquence expert), who can criticize the enemy from the moral high ground. The effect is similar to instigation, but the advantage is that he does not need to be responsible. Sequence 6 - Two-dimensional, the first qualitative change stage of this sequence, can transform itself into a two-dimensional creature, making it unable to receive damage in the three-dimensional and difficult to harm others (conceptual attacks are not immune), and can digitize itself and move instantaneously. But at this stage, gender reassignment will occur, men will turn into women, and women will turn into men. Series 5 - Programmer, the promotion ritual is to create your own programming language, which can affect the outside world and is equivalent to the language of mysticism, such as Giant Language or Ancient Hermes. At this stage, you will be extremely creative. You can use your own programming language to create various secrets and ritual magic. You can also edit the internal program of the sealed object to a limited extent to increase or decrease the ability to achieve certain effects. Sequence 4 - Big data, you can bury data terminals in the minds of enemies or teammates. Data can be transferred between terminals. Your own terminal will have higher permissions. Although you cannot directly program others, you can realize data interaction and even the ability to freely use sub-terminals. Sequence 3 - Intelligent Brain (also known as artificial intelligence or network elf), can process large amounts of data, and can even program sub-terminals at will, using the computing power of the person carrying the sub-terminal. In this state, it has ultimate rationality and cannot be contaminated by any knowledge, whether it is uniqueness or origin. Sequence 2 - Void, the data interaction is gradually completed. It can share its own capabilities with sub-terminal carriers and disperse lower-level permissions. It can upload its own data to the network. As long as the data in the network still exists, the Void will never die. Sequence 1 - World Tree, linked to the overall subconscious of a certain race in the world, can modify reality to a certain extent, but it cannot change the real history. Sequence 0 - Administrator, maintain the digital world created by himself, and will be omnipotent in the digital world. The only way is a packaged chip. Old days - the matrix, gradually penetrates into reality from its own digital world, and finally regards the entire world as its own matrix, which can be modified and edited at will. Essence: The deep network world at the back of the world is called the "Root Server". The completely binary world has the same strong anti-pollution ability as other Sefirot, but it does not have any personality, because there is no concept of "god" in the "Root Server", and the counterpart of "Personality" is "authority". If you initially control the root server, you can program in your own brain, such as editing a certain Amon's killing program.

The witch has a sense of substitution. It would be great if she had always been a witch Are there any book friends who came to read the witch but switched to The Hunter and stopped reading?

For me, the biggest controversy in this book may be the question of whether to change the approach. In fact, the final analysis is that the author's early theme attracted many readers who wanted to see more curious things in this area, but the author was unable to meet the needs of these readers, so there was so much controversy. But for me, these things are not important. What is important is whether the author can continue writing, maintain the character of the protagonist, and truly write a story about "people" under the structure of mystery. I think this is what is really important. By the way, a small request. I personally like to study mysterious power systems, so I hope the author can describe things about abilities, such as the relationship between the fusion and mutation between the original "Assassin" path characteristics and the new "Hunter" path characteristics and abilities when changing paths in the future, as well as the connection between the original path and its own extraordinary characteristics, etc. Hope it can be adopted.

🙂 Alas, I feel that the reason why this book is so controversial is that the author made an outline in this direction from the beginning. In fact, from the title of the book and the content of the first few chapters, it can be seen that it is about a boy changing into a girl and then back into a boy, but this is the whole problem, because most people (probably) come here for the witch, which determines the taste of these readers. It is easy to tear them apart if they change the text to the text. What's more, no matter what kind of marriage, they cannot accept the protagonist changing back to a man. , And most people who simply want to read mysterious fan fiction think that the protagonist turning into a witch is a poisonous point, so both sides are not pleased. This situation is destined to happen from the conception of the book. I don't know if the author has considered it before opening the book, or he still opened the book knowing that this situation would happen, because such a design is really unflattering.

I quite understand. The first time I wrote a book, I held it in for more than ten hours and only came up with 1,000 words. I really thought about how to choose words and sentences for more than ten hours. The key is to go back and read it again. I feel that the 1,000 words I have suppressed are still like a pile of history. I might as well delete them all and rewrite them. This kind of frustration is really strong.

I just want to say one thing, since the author is sure that the protagonist wants to become a hunter, why is the title of the book not called Hunter Path but Assassin Path? If you want to use a witch to divert sex, just admit it, it's normal. . . Some readers raised the issue and the author denied it, so let him go. . . I suggest the author change the introduction, otherwise people will complain in the future. Anyway, when I saw that I was going to jump to Hunter, I immediately went 88.

The author insists on writing a Dog Madonna protagonist, and also assigns a sinful job to the Dog Madonna. Isn't this forcing an upright gentleman to force a good girl into prostitution?

As an article about the path of a witch, it's really interesting, but I don't know why from the time I entered the trap to the time I caught up with the update, I'm still arguing about whether to go back or not. Although I feel free to make fair and fair comments, I first acknowledge that I am on target and don't make any noise at my place🙏. I will only kneel down and apologize. Let's talk about the advantages first. Sure enough, a man is a man who understands men. If he can just change into a sh male protagonist, he will undoubtedly be able to fall into the trap. The confrontation with the witch on the assassin path and the ambiguity between the witch and Yuan Ke are the two peaks of this book so far. The exchanges between the chicken and Xiao Ke later are also quite cute. It can be said that the author's writing is not good and the plot structure is poor, but who said that his emotional line is not good? I simply disagree. And the author's writing is not bad. As for the shortcomings, there are many. Because it was the shortcomings that led us to meet in the book circle, I just wanted to find some resonance after commenting and scolding the author. This book took me an hour to review, eight o'clock in the morning on a beautiful Sunday, so if you want to argue, please finish it first! ! ! (qd What the hell kind of design is this? Why can't the interface continue to scroll after writing one page.) 1. The plot has no priority. It describes a lot of irrelevant things, which delays the development for too long. This resulted in some supporting characters being written but not fully written. It was obvious that they wanted to have deeper content and richer characters, but they couldn't control it. Generally speaking, there is a lot of ink in the front to introduce the self-made or marginal supporting characters in the original work, and then suddenly there is no follow-up, and then they suddenly appear again. But the author also likes to show his multi-line development, and he will put together a lot of original character reactions that exist in the original plot. This can often fill a chapter or two. The few times that impressed me deeply were the assassination of the ambassador and this time Lanerwus! 2. The plot before and after is separated. More than two hundred chapters! My Xiaowa is still the witch of joy! You are still arguing so much that you will come back unchanged in the end, whether you can see this day or not is a good thing! He is really good at promotion. A few chapters ago, he said that he wanted to ask Xiao Ke Fool to divine his promotion. In the next three chapters, the Tarot meeting was completed, and it seemed that he had not asked yet. Can you really describe the protagonist more? I feel like there should be a difference in narrative priorities. Everyone's interest in reading is also about Sheng Sheng and Xiao Ke. The daily update is that after reading it, it still means that you haven't read it. I'm really sorry that I'm not very curious about the fate of the supporting characters who were heavily described in the original work. 3. The author and protagonist follow the original plot type. It mentions many times that it doesn't want to change the plot of the original work. I think it's okay, but some people may think it's a red flag, so I put it here. Moreover, the first hundred or so chapters contain zero grams. In fact, it can be seen that the author still insists on writing his own novel and his own plot. In short! Before I started reading it, I read the author's explanation in the book review. Assassin Qitu, the protagonist will eventually take a different path from that of the assassin. Moreover, the protagonist has been following this route from the beginning of the plot. Her character makes her unwilling to play tricks on others. She is not a fun protagonist! So I can accept it no matter what happens in the end! Anyway, it's still a year before this book is finished, so there's no telling if the author will change his mind, so it's better to enjoy the plot now! This book review is a botched one. It originated from the fact that I scolded the author because the comments at the end of the article were not enough, so I opened a new page. I don't know why QD suddenly can't find the notification button. You can scold me here. I can't see anything about the plot or things that have changed, hahahaha. Alas, the author will hate me to death anyway. If the comment causes the author to take leave again, other readers will also hate me to death, so please feel free to do so.

After changing and then changing back, the perfection offended everyone (probably)

The image of Valeera is very fleshed out, which makes a lot of people not want to see her change her gender 😁, and they always feel that their favorite character has been taken away by the author NTR 😡

I want to ask, if the protagonist becomes a witch, will she change back? If you want to change, change it completely. If you want to change it back, it will be boring.

The protagonist is somewhat of a virgin, which is the biggest flaw, but the other enemies are all well written. It's like throwing a bug into a bowl of good soup. If you don't care about the bug, it won't affect the taste, but if you do, it will be very disgusting. The protagonist acted very sad after killing three homeless people by mistake, which showed signs of the Virgin. In Chapter 74, the protagonist was very sad and remorseful after accidentally killing Corvo. Even the extraordinary items dropped by Corvo after his death were named Bottom Line. This made it clear that the protagonist was the Virgin, which directly caused the impression points of the protagonist to be halved. The biggest failure of the whole book. The character of the protagonist before Chapter 74 has already been well portrayed, and there is no need to go through the process of changing the character of the protagonist. The protagonist's courage and calmness can be seen from the protagonist's courage to steal money from the dock gang in the early stage. The protagonist's calmness and decisiveness can also be seen in the provocative confrontation with the witch boss. For such a person, it would be too childish for you to suddenly portray him as someone who cannot see a good person die because of his own death, and who is devastated and full of emotions when a good person dies. It is very contradictory to the calm, bold and decisive character of the previous protagonist. Everyone must have a good impression of a person who is active, bold, and decisive in doing things, but if one day he suddenly tramples to death a good frog that eats pests and maintains justice in the countryside, and bursts into tears, is grief-stricken, and even builds a monument to the frog, what impression will everyone have of him after seeing this behavior of the protagonist? This is how the protagonist feels.

So far, I feel okay. As long as I don't come back, even if I don't get married, at least the intimate daily life with Xiao Ke is quite interesting to me. I like it quite a bit. Anyway, can you please not change back into a man?

How about separating Yu Yue as a witch to Xiao Ke, and separating Varsa to accompany Qili [dog head. Jpg] I don't agree with the saying that there shouldn't be feelings in Secret. Who stipulates that if a story has a romance element, it must be a fanfic that writes about romance, and it cannot contain both plot and romance? Isn't the purpose of fandom to change the original plot, change the tragedy, fall in love with your favorite character, or match up your favorite CP? After reading fan fiction for more than ten years, I have never seen anyone write a fan fiction that departs from these themes. And readers who choose to read fan fiction do it to realize their dreams. If you take the original worldview as an example, what kind of fan fiction should I read? The original work is already well written and can be read over and over again. There is also a second part. Wouldn't it be great to just read Mr. Cuttlefish's work? Reading this article, I'm very happy to have a cp, Valsa x Qili, Kiri x Valila, Klein x Valila, and the original Klein and Ms. Qili. I even look forward to the wonderful interactions between Klein's other vests and Valeela in the future, and Hermann and others, don't be eunuchs. I would like to praise again. Not only is the emotional line and chemical reaction of this article wonderfully written, but the career line is also very good. The upgrade and role of the protagonist are very interesting, and the collection of subordinates is also exciting. I personally like the two points that others think are poisonous, but the handling is too blunt. The writing is a problem. It would be better if it foreshadows some emotions. There are also some shortcomings that the author has mentioned in one stroke that should be written in detail, such as how the protagonist negotiates and communicates. Maybe the author doesn't know how to write? It's a bit of a pity. In the end, it's really rare to find a kind-hearted protagonist. I like it very much. There are too many trouble-loving protagonists in the chaos camp. There are so many good Miao Miao characters. Keep up the good work!

Whether it collapses or not is not decided by the readers, but by what the author writes. Whether it changes or goes back has no necessary connection with whether it collapses or not. If the quality of the plot and the advancement of the main line are maintained normally, then there will be no collapse. There are also those who accuse you of not falling in love if you want to change back. This book is all about having fun. What's the point of becoming a witch if you don't flirt with men? It would be better to just write the heroine. The author has already stated in the comment area that he wants to change back, and there is no concealment. The book never mentions that the protagonist should completely become a woman. The screening has already been completed, and those who remain know that they will change back. Some people who still have unrealistic expectations of changing marriage are too funny. There are also those who talk about three views and abuse the characters. Are you a fan⭕️thinking that the characters must be carefully cared for? Then you shouldn't read the fanfic, but read the original work. When has the quality of a book been related to whether the characters' views are in line with the mainstream of the world? Isn't it the plot that retains readers? Co-author: Does someone subscribe because transgender conforms to the three views, but abandons the book because breaking up does not conform to the three views?

The emotional line in the early stages of the book is completed very well. Can you not change back to a man and become a woman Don't change back ヽ(≧Д≦)ノ

I finally caught up with the latest chapter, so I made a post to express my excitement. First of all, let me talk about this subject matter. I like it very much, and it hits two of my favorite points. One is that "Lord of Mysteries" is my favorite book, and World of Warcraft is a game I have played for more than ten years, and they are all my favorites. The author's writing style is also very clever. Very level. Whether it's a fanfic or a spin-off of "Lord of Mysteries", it's quite difficult to write. First of all, his combat power system is relatively complicated. The division of occupations is also very cumbersome. The characters and plot reasoning need to be carefully considered. I personally feel that it is difficult to write it well. But the author handles this aspect very well. He gives reasonable explanations in many places and also writes about his own personality and characteristics. For example, when Hugh comes out, she will be described with distinctive features, and the details in the back will show her sitting on the sofa. Two tiny boots. For another example, when Fowles appeared later, it was emphasized that she always came in from the balcony, which perfectly interpreted the distinctive character of the characters in the original work. This is what I like better, and it also made a lot of innovations. For example, at the first Tarot Club meeting, there was no Miss Audrey, and a Pipi shrimp appeared out of thin air, which was very confusing to me, but I chose to believe the author, feeling that such an obvious loophole could not possibly occur. And as far as the original work is concerned. The early operation of the Tarot Society really couldn't work without justice. Maybe in the later period, she was a little marginalized, and she was criticized by many people who were not clear-headed. I don't understand what they complained about? Miss Justice is irreplaceable. One person can revitalize an organization! The author has added his own elements very skillfully. Then he cleverly guided the matter back on track, which made me feel very comfortable. This is something worthy of praise! The author has great imagination and strong brain power, and he also reads the original work carefully and seriously. It reasonably makes up for and infers many things that were not shown in the original work, such as the specific formulas of some potions and the battle scenes of some characters. Some more interesting sealed objects have also been added, thumbs up! "Lord of Mysteries" is better in the early stage, neither the combat nor the plot is complicated, but the extraordinary battle in the later stage. Even when looking at the pictures and watching the commentary, I felt seasick after a fight. I hope the author can grasp the plot as always and arrange each character reasonably. Come on, make this book more perfect!

I just remember that there was a witch sword named Qili who impressed me very much. Has she been resurrected? Resurrection, I completed the order

Let's give a brief evaluation From the beginning to the story of promotion to the Happy Witch, I think it has been pretty good in terms of characterization, plot promotion, battle scene description, and setting expansion. It can be seen that the author has his own ideas and understanding in the performance and exploration of paths. In my opinion, this is a plus point. One of the joys of early reading of the original Mystery is the combination of level improvement and life experience. The fireworks of the original work's cultivation in the world of mortals can be seen in this book. In fact, I was quite pleasantly surprised. However, in terms of the performance of the Happy Witch, it is not as natural as the previous one and is more stiff. The early story was quite novel, but since I joined the Tarot Club and switched to multi-perspective narration, I feel that the story has been limited by the original work. It is difficult for me to say whether this is good or bad. I can only say that some of the personal characteristics of the protagonist in the early stage were lost. She had to correct the "wrong" plot development, and the personal growth of the character was put on hold, and the performance stayed in Sequence 6 for too long. As for the transfer route, I don't think it's a big deal. After all, the background of the mysterious worldview is chaos and madness. In fact, I think it's OK to pursue novelty within the set range and ensure that the story and characters stand up. Finally, let me talk about some of my thoughts on fan fiction. I don't think it is necessary to stick closely to the plot of the original work and stick to the interaction of the original protagonists; if the fan fiction expands on the world view of the original work and writes new stories, new characters, and new settings, it is actually not bad,

I'm a fan of this book. I feel a lot of pressure to read the author, so I have to subscribe to the latest version before commenting. First of all, the most popular one is the kingly male protagonist, who is male in gender and loves women. Turning into a witch adjusts the taste, flirts with Xiao Ke, and adds another way to persecute Xiao Ke. In fact, it is still kind to Xiao Ke, for small things. The main plot itself is still an upgrade. He is originally a male, and it is natural to switch to a hunter. The problem is that the male protagonist is not given a girl. According to the outline, the target is too late, and it is recommended to add a night scene. They are all from the original earth, destined to become gods, and their three identities are equal. When combined, they can become the fourth pillar and lift the table, and the apocalypse is solved. Anyway, the protagonist starts off with a soft meal, so it's not a big problem to have another night. The goddess herself is not low in popularity, and the goddess rich woman senior is not very popular in the mainstream... If you really want to satisfy some readers, you can easily create a female clone. The quality of details is the key. You are the author and there are many ways to do it.

I've been reading it in other places these days, and there's actually a plot depicting the original Klein. It's really rare. I like it. When I saw the middle part, I really thought it was a marriage change, but when I got closer to the update, I found out that the protagonist was really determined to change back to a man, and found that it was not... Well... I don't know what the plot will be like later. The most profound point is that Qili becomes the protagonist Bai Yueguang. Just thinking about it makes me heartbroken. Like the protagonist, I didn't believe in Qili at first. After all, the control lies with others. 😭 When I saw the protagonist praying above the gray fog at Klein's funeral, I kept wondering whether the protagonist would become one of the important anchors for Klein to stabilize his humanity, like his brothers, sisters and Leonard. Then I suddenly wanted to change back to a man, but I haven't changed back yet, and I feel like I won't look as good as I do now. It seems to be a very good book so far, I hope it can be finished 🤓

Alive again? I thought I was dead