Warhammer: in the Name of Nirvana

Xiancao, I would like to call the author Nuwa, and the plot makes up for many plots which can be said to be a great move, and it is also very reasonable. For example, Angron, the original work of GW is incomprehensible, but the author came back abruptly, and can only say that he is awesome and kowtows. We are still in the plot of just finishing the expedition and preparing for the rebellion. I don't think the pace of this plot is sluggish. The author has created the images of many primarchs very carefully, so that their characters no longer remain stereotypes. For example, Jonson, you will see the cold and ruthless lion, and you will also see the big cat who is at a loss after irritating Morgan. The plot is layered and in-depth, and it can be said that it is flesh and blood.

The Great Crusade is like this. The Primarchs only need to fight at the front, but I have more to think about. When to steal the power of the Four Gods, when to deceive the Eternals, and when to sit on the golden toilet, all need to be carefully considered.

I've read about the helmsman. It's outrageous that all the comments I posted were deleted 😅 There are not many long comments in the comment area, so you can't say that I am also a scumbag. Moreover, the plot is too slow. Among the few successful Warhammer fans who started out, you are considered early. In the end, you have written 4 million words, but the plot is the slowest one.

It's so popular that eight out of ten chapters are about minor characters or non-main story. It's often said that the main plot instantly switches to the minor character's self-narration. The main plot doesn't want to advance at all. Deleting all these chapters will not affect the viewing of the main content.

The writing is very good, and the story is also very good. Reality and 40K are already cruel enough, so let's leave a little warmth in 30K now. At least ten thousand years from now, when all the originals think about it, they will want to strangle themselves to death.

I watched the Battle of the Death Star again. The siege of Heydrich was truly the most impactful scene in the game. I hope that the subsequent plot of the Great Rebellion can surpass this scene.

I have read this book from beginning to end twice since it was updated. I like the content written by the author very much. The writing is gorgeous and the plot is interesting and eye-catching. But now there is a problem with this book. The author is probably not very good at writing "fighting dramas", so although this book is about Warhammer 40k, it has a lot of "literary dramas". Up to now, the plot has been advancing slowly. I don't know when it will start. Each chapter update has one thing in common. First, there is a short core plot, and then the "gorgeous writing" is wasted on large paragraphs of related notes, memories or related explanations. There is a strong sense of "ai" in sight. This kind of description is not so obvious as you read it chapter by chapter as it is updated, but if you read it coherently, it will feel very dragging and uncomfortable. I still hope that this novel that I keep reading will get better and better. I still hope that the author can consolidate the plot or write it coherently according to your outline. This feels too torn.

One of the best-looking Warhammer novels, with excellent settings and writing. I would like to ask the author, now that we have the Second Primarch, is there any chance that the "missing" Eleventh Primarch will appear?

Alpharius|Omega: Reversed: The Lord of the Divine Snake who lost one head wanders in the ruins of ideals, struggling in repeated failed attempts at redemption. Symbolizes making unfavorable decisions, doubts about calling, and being forced to end.

Suddenly I remembered that there is a Warhammer novel that states that all the hives of the empire are built of adamantine. I will look for that book to see if there is any other fun. I will post it in this post.

Warhammer co-IP founder Bryan ansell passed away on December 30, 2023. May his soul return to the Golden Throne. He has not left us, but has gone to enjoy life in the Warhammer world.

: Do you have magic hair? Morgan: Has long hair. : Are there hands full of magic? Morgan: Psychic. Q: Do you like to communicate with small animals? Morgan: I have a cat and many small animal brothers (golden layer, fruit bat, hamster, etc.). : Have you ever been poisoned? Morgan: Does warp corruption count? : Have you been cursed? Morgan: Many enemies have cursed me. : Kidnapped or imprisoned? Morgan: There was an Eldar attempt to assassinate me, and I have been harassed by a warp evil god. : Then you must have signed a contract with the evil witch? Morgan: My father put an insurance policy in my head. : The following is the most critical question. Does everyone think that all your problems are solved with the appearance of a strong man? Morgan: My father helped me resist the corruption of the Warp. Ah, great, you are a real princess!

The big cat fell asleep for some reason, and the little cats were left alone to face the cold and ghostly universe. They turned into tearful cats. At this time, the old cat Luther stood up and said, I will take you to find your mother. The tearful cats thought about the descriptions of their mothers over the years, and they all nodded and said yes. So everyone packed up and set off (on an expedition). Meeting Sangelius on the road, the cat heads asked Luther, so gentle and kind, is he his mother? Luther shook his head and said, "Mom, she doesn't have wings." So he continued to move forward and met Guilliman again on the road. The cats asked Luther, is this his mother who is so good at administration and operations? Luther thought for a moment, then struck Guilliman with a sword and fell to the ground. "Your mother is not that good." The cats understood and continued to set off. I met the alien Trazin on the road. Trazin said, I have a bottle of wine made by your mother using the ancient method. I can also tell you where your mother is, but you have to give me something in exchange. So the cats put together a plan and gave Azmodai to the figure king. The figure king thought it was a bit outrageous but it was okay, so he gave the wine to Luther and pointed the direction to the cats. The kittens and cats changed from crying cats to happy cats. The cats passed by an icy and snowy planet and felt uncomfortable looking at them. They suspected that there was some abominable alien, so they landed on the planet. After staying for a long time, they only saw a bunch of silly dogs. It was cold, so they gave each silly dog ​​two paws and left, continuing to look for their mother. Finally, I met my mother's family on a planet. The family received the kittens grandly, but told the cats that my mother had gone out to eat and buy groceries. Although it was a bit regretful, the kittens were still very happy, so Luther took out the wine he got from the Figure King, hoping to live here. The Second Legion looked evil and wanted to torture the cats, but in order to recycle the bottle of wine, they agreed to let the cats stay temporarily until their mother came back. After some time, Morgan came back from home for a walk to eat. He saw a bunch of cat heads. He heard that the big cat was asleep, so he took all the kittens home to live. As time went by, Maomao felt more and more that his mother was better than his father, so every time he went out he said it was because of Morgan, and gradually forgot about Big Maomao. 41K Lion King woke up and looked at the dark room around him, and shouted twice, where is the person? Where is my first legion?

Well written, the author accurately captures the core elements of Warhammer. Many fan authors write Warhammer for war, glory, sacrifice, etc. Only the author truly captures the essence of Warhammer - family ethics.

Does the author have to write this humorous father-daughter comedy? He also always writes Morgan as the one who has high expectations and suffers the loss. Let's not mention that Morgan will eventually confront Lao Deng and ST in order to be free. How many readers would like to see the protagonist suffer the loss? Takuma doesn't like this anymore.

Gorgeous writing should be used in the most critical places, such as the main front of Commorragh, the power of the Emperor, the Battle of the Blood Hall of Minerva, Randan facing the Controller and the Emperor Randan, or the end of which Primarch, the fateful showdown between the two Primarchs. Write as much as you want about these places If the environment allows, fill in the joyful daily life and make a living. Although many people are unwilling to watch it, there are also many people who like it, and it is not worthless to liven up the atmosphere. But the real problem is the large amount of side descriptions and perspective changes in the branch plots and trivia. In my impression, it is similar to the section between Bayar and Salamander in the Battle of Comoros and the section where Morgan brings a team back. There is nothing worth writing here, and there are no interesting jokes or baggage. No one wants to read it, and no one is willing to pay for it I can feel that the author is working hard. For example, Commorr turned back to the Imperial Fist, and Cutthroat Castle was fleeting. The work here was good, but then there was a lengthy description of the Imperial Fist's withdrawal I think the key is not how much plot the author removes or how many branches are cut off, but before writing each plot, ask yourself whether it should be written here, and what is the use of writing it here? Can it advance the plot, leave foreshadowing, or amuse the audience? Is it possible to describe the transformation of a certain key character (such as the part where Brother Dun is captured), or to waste ink on a group of people who will never appear again (such as a certain soldier commander, or a certain passerby Salamander), or to waste ink on a relatively familiar character (Bayar). In addition to being able to fight, are there any other notable features? Then what are you doing writing paragraph after paragraph in Comoros? ) If not, let him go This book is long enough. If you are not waiting for the ending, you are also waiting for the funny part of 40k or the final battle of Terra. Don't write it anymore. No one cares. A certain passer-by, or a useless dialogue between a certain character, I would rather you do more funny daily routines I am not a follower of updates. Last time I stopped following about 600 chapters, but this time I read a thousand chapters in one go. I don't know how much better the experience is than a book friend who follows updates, but I Now I have a strong urge to abandon books, or only subscribe to the main chapters By the way, I would like to ask if the author can allow me time to make a dehydrated version of this book. I really like this book, but the later part is really too exaggerated🙂

I suspect that the corruption of Chaos is approaching Terra. My cousin is secretly worshiping Nurgle in his college dormitory. After a month of not throwing away takeout boxes and stacking them in the corner, the blessing of a loving father has crawled onto his quilt. While one of his roommates, a cultist of Slaanesh, was too busy worshiping Slaanesh on his computer to pay attention to him, a cultist of Khorne was already preparing a blood sacrifice to the Blood God. However, during the melee, a Tzeentch follower leaked the news to the Inquisition, and I had to fish him out.

Hello. I am Magnus. I have discovered the Horus Heresy. I want to inform the Emperor, but there is only one person left to make the psychic call. As long as you can lend a helping hand and let me make this call, you will definitely be the hero. After the counter-rebellion is over, you will be rewarded generously.

Wow, it seems that the trend has indeed changed a lot. There used to be a lot of transformation novels about starting points. The most famous ones are "Two Thousand Years of Pauper" and "Blooming America". Nowadays, when many people see transformation stories, they think they are female videos. It's amazing.

Morgan has always been in mortal form, so he is relatively petite for the Astartes And because Morgan is the genetic mother of the Dawnbreaker And the Astartes of the Dawnbreaker Legion like their original body very much So Morgan is the loli mother of the Dawnbreaker! The Dawnbreaker Legion is full of Char!

No man, why are there so many people who care about male and female porn? It really makes me sweat. Isn't the most important thing about a book whether its plot is good or not?

I have witnessed the completion of Stinky Can, the exhaustion of inspiration for Midnight Blade, and many endings or eunuchs' writings. You are too long-lasting! I thought it was time for you to take a break soon, but the results keep getting updated! You are ridiculously strong!

The Emperor is equal to Porchi-chan. 1. Porchi-chan is a social phobic and seldom talks. He can only have a good conversation with people online. The Emperor is also a social phobia and rarely talks. He can only have a good conversation with people online (he has good psychic conversations with magic ponies but has nothing to say as soon as they meet) 2. When Porchi-chan communicates with people, he will always talk to himself about things that others do not understand at all. There must be someone familiar with him to help him. He hurriedly explained that when the emperor retrieved his heir, he would often talk to himself about things that others did not understand at all, and he had to have the Imperial Guard as his mouthpiece 3. Porchi-chan is a stay-at-home guy who rarely goes out or leaves his room. The emperor He is also a squatter at home and rarely gets up 4. Porchi-chan is very good-looking, and the Emperor is the perfect one for everyone, so he is also very good-looking To sum up, Porchi-chan is the Emperor, and the Emperor is Porchi-chan.

How to say it? I have no interest in the female primal myself, but in the two groups of authors of Hammer articles that I joined, the authors are pushing your article hard, saying that you are the last hope of Hammer articles... So Hammer Circle Village Girl, hold on tight, good days are ahead.

I've watched 30k plots, but I don't care about the family ethics of the emperor and his children? How many so-called Warhammer fans write Primarchs that don't look like the Primarchs at all?

Dorn sharply commented on Guilliman's search for a mother Guilliman: Ah brother, today I discovered the possibility of a new mother in our sister Morgan Guilliman: She came to me wearing a breastplate and a toga, as if Athena and Minerva emerged from the book, she is gorgeous and not Underneath the unsophisticated makeup, there is a hint of naivety and mischief, and the solemn and solemn appearance hides a little devilish nature that is not easy to detect. The most important thing is that I feel the breath of my mother🤤 Donne: smart, gorgeous, able to fight, and a fun-loving person... (Thinking seriously)🤔, isn't this Fulgen? Guilliman: Dorne! If you keep talking nonsense, Macragge's Glory will open fire!

The water bursts, mortal, primarch. Astartes. Dozens of people took turns doing a round of psychological description and thirty chapters passed. Today Morgan talks to Guilliman, and tomorrow Horus gives a monologue. The sight of a warmaster being crowned makes me sick. After raising it for a long time and preparing to slaughter it, this is the result

The Imperial Inquisition arrested a fat cat that has been wandering around the Avalon sector of the Empire all year round. According to well-informed sources, the cat eats a large amount of Ark Eldar souls, Dark Eldar souls and aquatic products produced on the planet T'au every day. Lord Macragge Ji Liman couldn't bear it and called Star Language, and then a strong Caliban big cat forcibly took him away from Avalon. According to Terra's well-known lawyer, the cat will face a fine of 114,514 Imperial Credits and 10,000 years of imprisonment in the toilet

I'm not talking about the heroine, but the female protagonist. The author's Morgan doesn't try to describe how good she is to prove "you should like her." Instead, he describes her as a character that many men are familiar with, such as a warlord, a wizard, a leader, a warrior, a mother, an eldest sister, a sister, and a daughter. Male readers are not familiar with "female protagonists" but are familiar with the above roles. I think this is excellent. Once you describe them, the beauty and charm of the protagonist becomes a bonus and fresh, which I think is an important factor in the popularity of this book At the same time, this also proves my personal point of view, that is, the word "heroine" is incorrect and even disgusting. The main protagonist is the main protagonist. Why should a woman be specially marked when she becomes the main protagonist? If you want to write a strong heroine, first write a strong protagonist, and then add sexuality, beauty (optional), and charm (required) to it.

I think the male protagonist is a male channel and the female protagonist is a female channel just because I haven't read a few books. Generally speaking, male channels emphasize building a successful career, while female channels pay more attention to individual interactions, whether it's love or female channels' danmei, or the "friendship" between a group of men. Then you say danmei is a male channel? Are you kidding me? I haven't read a few books and I don't think about it. When I see the heroine, I start shouting regardless of the writing content.