
I Established a Celestial Dynasty in the Mortal World
我在人间立天朝
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- Completed
- Length
- 1.1M Words
- Genre
- Cultivation
- Subgenre
- Fantasy Cultivation
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Everyone is urging the author to leave the village, but I feel it is unnecessary. You can't do a thunder blow. When you leave the village, you will stand out. When your strength is achieved, when you leave the village, you will be the center of attention. Come on, it's well written. The main plot of the protagonist's development is well written 🤭🤭🤭🤭
There is a war outside, and the protagonist thinks about money every day. Is money still useful in troubled times? When making equipment, don't ask the craftsman how many materials are needed? Instead, he asked how much silver is needed. There is a war in nearby towns. Where can you buy materials? This is not an online game. You can buy anything with gold coins.
I just didn't figure it out. This protagonist is the only son of the late Emperor of Great Xia, and his mother is only in her teens. How long has this Great Xia been destroyed? How long did it take for the Zhou Dynasty to reach its end? Can the author give an explanation?
I was confused, how big is that mountain? There are more than 10,000 refugees in a month and they are still unwilling to go down the mountain. What a waste. We are not here to see how to run a bandit cottage. Or is it that the so-called Heaven is actually only one cottage, the authentic cottage Heaven? And go to heaven every night?
I was very confused after reading this book, and I had a lot of opinions about several settings. 1. Can silver be turned into anything? The article does not mention the transportation inconvenience caused by the war at all, nor the price increase or shortage of raw materials. It blindly emphasizes the importance of silver. It feels that as long as there is silver, there will be no shortage of raw materials. It also makes no mention of the changes in raw material prices caused by the war, which is very untrue. 2. Living in the mountains, there is never any talk about the role of the raw materials brought by the mountains in the village's equipment and elixir refining. Whether it can be produced by oneself instead of buying from the outside world, the price of the elixirs is not stated. 3. As for the girl named Su, is her family stupid? Are you not well informed? Both the common people and the big families know that this village is not simple, but they don't know that. Even the girl looks disgusted and arrogant. I really don't know what kind of brains their family has, but there will always be smart people, otherwise they will become a big family! ! ! !
The protagonist's power upgrade is embarrassing. Others have 2 points of genius. He looks like a loser in his 20s.
The protagonist is the emperor. I think any street gang leader is more powerful than him.
That's ridiculous. A knife costs a hundred taels of silver. Author, you can do the math yourself. It can only be made on a small scale for use in the imperial court, and it is impossible to popularize it.
To be honest, the data is a mess. In this book, three points of talent are the pride of heaven. The protagonist, who has 20 points of talent, is not as fast as the old man in the village who has two or three points of talent. The book says that the protagonist practices a very awesome unknown technique. However, after writing to chapter 50, it is not clear how awesome this technique is. It just has more special effects than others, but the cultivation speed is extremely slow. The cultivation speed is twenty times faster than that of a genius, but his level cannot even catch up with the tail of a genius. I really don't know if it's a problem with the protagonist's skills or if the author is deliberately slowing down the protagonist's cultivation speed. Also, the prices inside are so confusing that I looked confused. If a normal person had the talent of the protagonist, they would probably ascend to heaven on the spot. If you want to write about the protagonist's skills to lay a better foundation, then you must at least write about the power.
The writing style is extremely poor, even inferior to the compositions written by junior high school students.