Rebirth and Daily Cultivation

Regarding Yucheng, this is the first time I have seen a novel written with my hometown as the background 😭 So today I got excited and went to the No. 4 Middle School in the novel, hoping to find some scenes in the novel. No. 4 Middle School is now surrounded by high-rise buildings, and even the road leading to the river dam has been closed recently. It took me a long time to find the way to the river dam. Now the roads in Heba are well built, and you can see many old men and women walking. I set out towards the west, trying to find Tongtong's house, but it turned out that there was a new community over there, and further west was a wasteland. On the river bank, you can see many old men and women selling vegetables, not only vegetables, but also many other things. I think Tongtong and the others probably buy vegetables here, as well as little rabbits, hehe The reason why I like this novel is actually very simple, we can all find ourselves in it. I studied in high school in Huai County. I remember going to the cafeteria to eat in the evening during my first year of high school. On the way, I met a kid with 140... Well, maybe not 140 yet. I said to the classmate next to me: Wow, there are still elementary school students in our school. I didn't notice the school uniform she was wearing at the time, which was embarrassing 😥 The key is that she heard it, just glanced at me timidly, turned around and ran away quickly. We met often later. She got good grades in her experimental class and we got to know each other later. However, I transferred to another school a year and a half later and we had no contact with her again. What impressed me so deeply was that I had never seen such a short person again after that 😃

I'm almost 200 chapters in. In fact, the daily life on campus and the images of the students are pretty well written, and there are all kinds of funny comparisons between talents, which are quite funny sometimes. There are several issues that I would rather complain about. The first one that ranks number one is the description of the heroine. The author describes a heroine who is short in stature, extremely lazy, invincibly tough-tongued, a bit fond of taking advantage, has an IQ as small as a child, but has very good grades. The only reason for becoming a heroine is that she had blood cancer in her previous life. . For such a girl, in the author's description, no one (the other characters in the book) seems to think this girl is cute. . Compared with the other supporting girls in the class, whether it is the class beauty Bai Yuxia or Geng Lu in the back row, and even the eldest lady who investigates the protagonist, they are much more attractive than the heroine. They have created a heroine who can be said to be useless except for good grades. I don't know what kind of brain circuit the author has. With your description, after reading online articles for so many years, this is the first time I have seen a heroine who has nothing but grades, tenderness, kindness, emotion, enthusiasm, etc. I can't say I'm annoying, but I don't really like it either. There are also authors who have opened a bunch of branch plots, and then just started them, without any follow-up, such as the eldest lady who investigates the protagonist, the eldest lady's brother, the enemy team who wants to rob the protagonist's company, the beautiful chemistry teacher, the relatives and friends of the teacher in the past life of cultivating immortals, the junior sister who loves the protagonist, the white gloves of the protagonist in reality, the copy of the alien world, etc. It takes a lot of ink to write at the beginning, but there is nothing left to write about the beginning. . . Looking at the creation of daily characters, the author obviously has the writing skills to write a story, but in the end there is a story like this. In addition to describing the wrong skills practiced in the previous life, the protagonist does not know what the protagonist's pursuit is, what he wants to do, what progress he has made, etc. . Looking at the whole story, the best characters are the supporting characters with few roles, the thief saint, the game boy named Ma, the class beauty's dog licker, the gangster bad boy, and several golden flowers. They are all very interesting, but they have few plots, while the protagonists and heroines are very boring. . . This is what it feels like to see it now.

I spent a few days at home during the Chinese New Year and read it all in one go! ! The author writes well and writes thousands of chapters! ! ! Those who abandon the book just because they want to do it, who always want to take down a character because of their own preferences, who say the writing is bad, who talk about hurrying up the main plot and a single line, these people who have no idea in their hearts, don't care what they think or say! ! This is your novel, the story in your heart. Write this story according to your ideas! ! ! The eleven chapters of monthly votes saved have been voted in, update soon! !

Ariel Ariel 20 years ago, she really looks like her

The last two chapters were so poorly written and so confusing. I can't feel happy, and I can't step on it properly. The author should think carefully about how to end it next. I scolded the book club for two days, and finally realized this afternoon that the book club is not just a place to give opinions to the author, and there is no need for it. As for my personal suggestion, I suggest that you rewrite these two chapters of Li Shi. Of course, it may be deleted or the author may not see it. It doesn't matter. Li Shi's punishment was very embarrassing, and some friends may have enjoyed it, but personally, I think it might be inappropriate to see a gun in a daily novel. I would rather think that it would be better if the male protagonist shot Li Shi directly to make the two of them mouth off, so that Zhuang and Lin could also have a chance to stand up. Or rewrite it so that after Li Shi opened her mouth and teased Lulu about how to drink red wine, the male protagonist asked someone to throw it out to Li Shi. But the author should have known better. It's good to write it like this. Just make it round. I don't have any objection. Hey, that's it, we'll see you later. Yeah, I deleted the post, it's good.

I would say that the character Li Shi is the most failed character in this book. For a blunt plot of pretending to be a slap in the face, the author went against logic and created such an unreasonable character. Anyway, he is just mindless to cause trouble for the protagonist. This is comparable to the retarded way of writing in trashy white novels where passers-by find trouble with the protagonist without thinking to advance the plot. Just write about Jiang Ning and Tong Tong's peaceful life, and I'd love to read it even more.

I even suspect that the author spent more time writing about daily life in high school than he spent in high school. I just want to say that it is interesting. I can write daily articles, but I always look like a ghost every day. The plot does not advance. Every day, three o'clock and one line every day. Reading your book is like going to work. After reading hundreds of chapters, I still look like this. I delete bad comments at every turn. The previous daily writing is not bad, but it is outrageous if it is daily life, and the daily writing is not as outrageous as you.

Could it be that the author can't write about cultivating immortality? He can't keep writing about daily life. It's obviously about cultivating immortality in the city, and 95% of the space has nothing to do with cultivating immortality. It can't be all about daily life if it's good-looking. The more I read it, the more boring it becomes.

I have read about 380 chapters so far, and I feel that the author can really consider starting a harem. As a group drama, the supporting characters are all very good, and they make me laugh every day. In comparison, Xue Yuantong's scenes are relatively repetitive. Internet articles pay attention to a sense of substitution. I will take the perspective of Jiang Ning. In fact, I ask myself that I cannot be partial to Xiao Xue. I have read other daily love articles before. I am a strong-willed single heroine who loves the party. But in this book, I feel that I have changed. I want to have a harem. Xiao Tongtong is very cute as a daughter, but not very interesting as a girlfriend.

Xue Yuantong Bai Yuxia

This book makes me want to read more

First-rate daily group portraits, second-rate plot, third-rate immortality, and inferior urban slaps. In fact, we can regard cultivating immortality as the bottom layer, and what is exposed is only the tip of the iceberg, rather than telling the readers' faces: Look, I am cultivating immortality. But the urban slap in the face was completely deducted. It looked embarrassing and full of taken-for-grantedness. When I saw a business negotiation with antiques and threats to a company: If you don't let me buy shares, I won't give you this stone/this tree. I really couldn't stand it. Let's talk about the advantages. The campus group portraits are really awesome. I don't know if the author used real people to write them. Anyway, I can recognize them after reading them, instead of not knowing who they are at a glance. Everyone has their own characteristics, but they are not facial makeup-like characteristics. High school life is a memory that many people will never forget after graduating from college, working, and starting a family. Thanks to the author for this book, I can occasionally recall the beauty of high school. Of course it would be better if the embarrassing slap in the face could be removed.

If you can read the front of this book, you don't need to read the back I hope you can support yourself for a lifetime with this book.

Is the point of you breaking the chapter to make fun of book lovers who can read more than 500 chapters?

36 Tickets, please keep updating

After reading it for so long, I basically don't comment, but this new chapter of yours is really ruined, and you don't want the character anymore? Or are you really going to use Illusion Circle to come back? In the past, people said that I didn't feel the water you wrote, because I really liked it, but now I want to read this chapter, it is true history. If it is really a fantasy, why is it broken? In order to read readers' comments and decide on the subsequent plot? To be honest, this is quite off-putting.

Everything is good but the quantity is too little.

What lingers in this book is the character, temperament, inner description and behavior of many supporting characters. I can always see the shadow of my high school classmates in them, not only Brother Ma, Brother Nan, Brother Quan, but also most of the characters such as Wang Longlong, Hu Jun, Shan Xiao, Miao Zhe, Chen Qian and so on. I can take care of my classmates hahahahaha; I also see that I was so naive and ignorant at that time. Like Brother Nan, I was fascinated when seeing beautiful people (only secretly imagining it). Like Brother Ma, I used my mobile phone to play and read novels in class. It was more like... Thank you, the author, for letting me reminisce about high school. It would be better if there was a "Shen Jiayi" character (but maybe there is one in the book, but everyone's "Shen Jiayi" is different).

It feels like the author and I live in the same era, and the author should be born in the 1990s. This novel has a strong sense of immersion and a very real sense of time. It is basically consistent with what I experienced in high school, which is awesome. I haven't read such a great novel in a long time. Speaking of which, I really miss my life in high school. The WiFi master key and WiFi killer, Xiaomi 2s, and Apple 5 were all used by ordinary students at that time, and they were indeed used by students of that era. Being able to add the setting of time travel and cultivating immortality on this basis is so exciting, as if I have returned to the past and dominated the world. Author, please don't stop updating! I will subscribe to the end!

I love it so much. If the author doesn't write 10 million words, I'll send him a razor blade. Each heroine is very distinctive. I want to follow her for ten years! ! ! !

[Overall experience] After reading more than 300 chapters, it gets a bit repetitive later on, so that's about it. The overall feeling is that this book is great, very relaxing, very everyday, and has little to do with cultivating immortals. Cultivation is to provide the background for the protagonist's omnipotent ability. This part is not written much. The author knows better what the audience of this book likes, which is relaxed campus daily life, so the pace will be very slow and he will write a lot of small things that happen every day. It is rare to write such detailed campus life. I think it is very interesting. It's just that the rest of it is basically repetitive, which may be a bit boring. Maybe I will come back to read it again when I am in a bad mood. [Introduction to this book] 1. Type: Urban Cultivation+High School Life+Group Portraits 2. Characters: ①Protagonist: Jiang Ning He is a master of Cultivation who travels back to high school. He knows magic and is invincible. Overall, it is decisive, and it is quite ambiguous with the various female characters. The pretense is not very consistent. Maybe the author likes to read the comments to adjust the protagonist's personality. ② Female first: Xue Yuantong A top student. The personality is two-sided. He is very naive and "overbearing" in front of people close to him, and has no sense of existence in front of people he is not familiar with. The overall shaping is relatively simple, just silly and cute. More like a daughter than a girlfriend. ③ Female supporting characters The whole book is beautiful but not beautiful. The differentiation is obvious, and the girl in the middle will not become the main supporting role. Beautiful female supporting characters: The ones in this class and those in other classes are all quite interesting, and many of them are better portrayed than the heroine. Unattractive female supporting characters: Pang is the main character, which is the highlight of the comedy. ④ Male supporting characters The essence of this book lies in the male supporting characters, they are very interesting. Ma Ge, Wang Longlong, Shan Kaiquan, etc. Are all very vivid characters, and their stories are very interesting. It has been a long time since I read a book with so many chapters. I really think this is a very successful book with its own characteristics. I wish the author a good reception and I wish everyone a happy reading

Author Jun Come on, no matter how it is written, I will like it

By the way, I understand daily fairy tales and daily writing. Can the plot be advanced faster? It has been three years, and the novel has only been two years. It's too slow, and the plot surrounding those supporting characters is just that. If you write around them, it's not necessary, and readers will feel that it's the same. Push forward. What readers want to see most is how the protagonist's terminal illness in senior high school Tongtong can be solved by cultivating immortality. You can create a plot in this regard, such as teaching Tongtong to cultivate immortality, to overcome the terminal illness. Don't just practice a pill at the beginning and you'll be done. Make sure that those who deserve water are not given water, and those that do not deserve water are sent to you blindly.

I feel quite like Emperor Kiritong

Looking at the plot after returning to my hometown, how should I put it? Firstly, the author's cognition will be projected onto the protagonist, secondly, this kind of cognition is undesirable, and thirdly, it should not be like this. I always thought that the protagonist's experience in this book was about the simple and honest middle school life experienced by many people. At one point, I even thought that it was written by a classmate of mine. It was really too similar to my experience. Of course, after reading the IP, I knew it was not the case. Going back to the work itself, where did I start to feel that this book gave me a "novel" feeling? Everyone may have a conclusion. Maybe I am not a fan of decisive killing. Some parts of the plot are like discarding gold and jade for dirt.

How can I put it? I have read a lot of interesting articles, and this book is the most suitable for the character. Although he is hidden in the market, he is happy with his grudges. He is ordinary in life, but he is persistent in justice.

Tut tut tut is more colorful

Author, please pay attention to your health. You really can't rest for two days, but you must persevere.

Support, more

There are some people who are so disgusting that they won't even kill them. I really don't understand what the author is thinking.