A Passionate, Thrilling Youth

Concept map of the heroine

Concept map of the heroine

If the elder brother doesn't want to update, just say so. Why bother to deal with the younger brother like this? It seems that the younger brother is being sentimental. The older brother is weak and needs more rest. The younger brother urges the elder brother like this, but it seems that the younger brother is not considerate of the older brother. Injuring the elder brother's body also makes the younger brother feel distressed. Unfortunately, whether the elder brother is injured or not has anything to do with the younger brother? Finally, the younger brother wanted to ask his elder brother, does he want to update more?

Why do I feel like I'm going to collapse after writing this book? It's a bit too homogenous with this book, and the author is probably being talked down by the editor, so many small articles about driving are afraid to describe it 🙂, after all, the last book took off so well. I was quite looking forward to the story of Ordinary World at the beginning, but it ended in just a few paragraphs. (Is there any restriction on the platform?) Then the timeline jumped another twenty years, and I jumped to subscribe to the next dozens of chapters. Some chapters just took a look at the titles and I didn't want to read them. I knew that some things were difficult to write in that era, but it was only over 600,000 words. I seemed to have no patience. I took out the outline and was about to end it hastily. Isn't it really a eunuch? 😐

It's obvious that the author doesn't know what to write. It's too similar to the previous book and it's hard to come up with new ideas. I suggest starting a new book with the background set in the Republic of China. Starting from life, with cheats, the plot can be richer and there is more excitement to write.

Concept map of the heroine

Concept map of the heroine

This thing has been written all the way to Siheyuan. Now that the author who has left Liangjian and Siheyuan can't write a book? I vomited at the sight

This was an absolute masterpiece of literature in its early days, but now it suddenly becomes a bit decadent. Authors, you should know that familiar characters in fan fiction do not need to be deliberately portrayed, but in this pseudo-fan fiction, many non-fan fiction heroines need to focus on writing when characterizing. Why I say it was good-looking in the early stage is because the first little widow was really wonderful and down-to-earth, but the current heroines, especially Guo Yan as the wife, have too single characters, lack unique personal charm, and have too few depictions. One more small suggestion, while maintaining the educational characteristics of Cao Thief's novel, this article must add a little more to the excitement of the non-color plot. This is why this stage is a bit weak, whether it is the promotion of the protagonist, using space to get supplies, or even getting some special colors to pay for the current situation, otherwise it will be difficult to break through this bottleneck period. It's a pity that this work has the qualifications to become a god.

Come to water Come to cheat Come to sneak attack