Lord of the Earthly Fiends

Could it be that some factory director left the palace?

Pig's feet should not be used to write lyrics all over the waistcoat. This is obviously inconsistent with the second part of the Confucian Temple! If you want to make a statement, you should first establish your reputation so that people can believe your poems. It is useless to just write on your waistcoat! What we readers are watching is the highlight moment of the pig's feet. It's not that you are half a pig eating a tiger, and you haven't eaten a tiger yet? What we want to see is the highlight moment of the protagonist. Like Xu Qian's pretentious highlight moments, if you write like this, basically no one will read it. Pig's feet should be inaccessible to others. If you face difficulties, you can stand up if you don't have fame.

This book can at least be a small hit, but the author's plot rhythm is not good enough. He keeps suppressing the protagonist's reputation by following the latest chapters, writing poems and articles, and finding various excuses to prevent the protagonist from becoming famous. The plot is too bland and the preparation time is too long, so it can only be said to be a good idea. Let me remind the author that if an article and poems are only sold in one bookstore and not in other bookstores, everyone will doubt whether the bookstore owner is the author.

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It seems that the main plot still requires a test of merit and fame, which is not enough for the world. It feels incoherent with the built system and looks weird...

There are some extraordinary plots in the early stage that are not well laid out and are a bit inexplicable. The main point is that the protagonist is not ethical enough. In this world with monsters and ghosts, can the protagonist be more ethical? He climbs a mountain just after he is released from prison. It is difficult to understand.

Why do you overturn the verdict? What do you have now? Overestimating one's capabilities

There are only a few spells in total. When two people are fighting, one side: Look at my Seventy-two Earth Fiend Invisibility Techniques. The other side: Oops, also look at my Seventy-two Earth Fiend Invisibility Techniques... The whole book is just a few spells extended by the Seventy-two Earth Fiends.

It's very discouraging to do so many things at the beginning.

Hello author, let me share some of my opinions. If you don't like it, you can delete it. I just read Chapter 4, and I really don't understand one thing, that is, the protagonist feels depressed and wants to go hiking to relieve his mood. I just want to say, what does the protagonist think? I just got something from the master of ghosts and gods in prison, which means that the protagonist already knows that this is a world with ghosts and gods, and this world can no longer be viewed with the theories of the previous world. The protagonist in your book is a time traveler, right? You must have read novels, movies and TV series, right? Doesn't he know that it is most likely to encounter strange things in the deep mountains and old forests? If you want to say that this is the real world, you can say that you have to believe in science, but as I said in the previous paragraph, you have seen ghosts and gods with your own eyes, so why are you running into the mountains? The uncle who fished you out asked you to stay at home and avoid the limelight. If he comes out after a while, can't you read a book at home? You already know that your physical fitness is poor and you can't exercise? If you don't like doing any of these things, you can just sleep on them, right? You don't have to go out to relax as soon as you get home, right? In a situation where there may be ghosts and gods in the world, shouldn't normal people find a way to protect themselves before they dare to go out? Why is your protagonist so brave? It's okay if the protagonist doesn't encounter anything. In the next chapter, he meets a talking weasel? Author, don't blame me for complaining, it's not good for you to write like this! I know you may want to use this to draw out the protagonist's golden finger. But it's too far-fetched! It seems that the protagonist has a big heart. The novel you wrote is quite good. The writing is smooth and the dialogue is natural. It can be seen that your literary skills are quite good. I am just expounding my own opinions above. I hope it will not affect your mood. Come on! Hope you can have a good result.