Lord of the Earthly Fiends

Could it be that one of the factory supervisors has left the palace?

The protagonist shouldn't be using multiple pseudonyms to write lyrics; this clearly doesn't align with his established reputation in the second part of "The Temple of Literature"! To establish a reputation, you need to build it up first. Only then will people believe your poems and lyrics. What's the point of just using multiple pseudonyms?

This book has the potential to be a minor hit, but the author's pacing is lacking. The constant writing of poems and articles in the latest chapters seems to suppress the protagonist's fame, using various excuses to prevent him from becoming well-known. The plot is too bland and the setup is too long; it's merely a mediocre work.

Reading is the lifeblood of a new book, so please read it often if you like it! Feel free to leave any suggestions or thoughts in the comments!

It seems the main storyline still revolves around achieving official rank and status, lacking the martial arts world feel, which feels inconsistent with the established system and makes it look rather strange...

Some of the extraordinary plot points in the early stages weren't properly established, making them feel a bit inexplicable. The main issue is that the protagonist isn't cunning enough. In this world with demons and ghosts, couldn't the protagonist be allowed to be a little more cunning? Climbing mountains right after being released from prison is hard to understand.

What makes you think you can overturn the verdict? What do you have now? You're overestimating yourself.

There are only a few spells in total. When two people are fighting, our side says: "Watch my Seventy-Two Earthly Fiends Invisibility Technique!" The opponent says: "Oh, watch my Seventy-Two Earthly Fiends Invisibility Technique too!"... The whole book is basically just a few spells derived from the Seventy-Two Earthly Fiends.

The fact that so many things were done right from the start is discouraging.

Hi author, I'd like to share some of my views. You can delete them if you don't like them. I've just read the fourth chapter, and there's one thing I really don't understand: the protagonist feels frustrated and wants to go hiking to relieve his mood. I just want to ask, what was the protagonist thinking?