Strange Tales from a Chinese Studio: Above the Divine Path

Too impetuous! I'm afraid your new book won't be as good as the last one! Just learn from ordinary people, the most important thing is to persevere...

I feel like the plot is a bit dragging. It's been more than ten chapters and I still don't know what the plug-ins are for. It doesn't give readers much expectation and sense of involvement.

This is a model worker

Updates are too slow. One of the two major acts of reducing intelligence is that ancient people did not eat delicious food. One is that modern people travel to ancient times to write poems and test public names. After seeing this, I will most likely give up the book. But the author's writing is very good and he is not ready to abandon the book, and he can't see any problems for the time being.

In ancient times, calling someone by their full name was equivalent to greeting their mother. If they were not elder brothers, they would be called by their baby names.

Can't you post both chapters together? Separately, it's painful to watch. It's short and only one chapter. It's particularly troublesome to follow the reading

Times have changed. The most important indicator of new books is to follow them and read them effectively. So if you like it, don't read it anymore. Read two chapters a day. It is comfortable and nutritious. Please, please! If you have any comments or suggestions, please feel free to leave a message, but avoid swearing and nonsense!

I just voted for the monthly ticket and the next chapter will be mailed. . .

The writing is okay, he solves the uncle's problems, he solves the teacher's difficult things, it's too fresh, the supporting role, there is no supporting role. I suggest that sometimes pig's feet are good, and they are highlighted by supporting roles.

It is recommended that the author communicate with the editor and revise the outline and details. Your writing style is good, but the book review section is so deserted mainly because the structure is too scattered. In the early stage, small plots such as the recognition of ancestors and the corpse puppet disrupted the rhythm. You can just start with the Thirteenth Duke being frightened by the Thirteenth Duke who was doing the wake-up call and leading to the ancient bronze lamp. Next, a series of small plots are inserted, such as becoming a disciple, upgrading the ancient lamp, poetry meeting, getting to know the fox girl, giving a dowry, practicing secrets, Taoist Wang talking about spiritual practice, and finally revealing the clues of the corpse. As for the family line, it can be transferred to after the poetry meeting: to attract the attention of the family, and then conduct an assessment to recognize the ancestors and return to the clan. Weird things appear in the assessment, which leads to suppression by the family. Chekov said that if a gun appears, then the gun must go off in the third act. The original plot was like hanging a gun but not firing.