Legend: I Materialize Gear in the Apocalypse

Someone who plays games so much they won't even save their sister is truly a genius.

With its Frankenstein's monster world-building, I can't think of any reason why it could be considered the first virtual reality game. Only the original players considered it a classic. Now, any popular game has a more compelling and well-developed world-building than Legend of Mir.

Why are you always in a game, in this apocalyptic world? Have you forgotten about reality?

Getting carried away with writing, huh? Completely ignoring the apocalypse...

Just mow down enemies like in Musou; can't you even grasp the fun of Legend?

Most people who read legendary novels are veteran players. Why are you going to start by introducing the game's background, story, and skills, dragging your feet like that?

Can I get a winning hand of the Judgment card at the start? (Social Little Peng)

This is too superficial. A simple introduction to basic knowledge and equipment would have sufficed. There's no need to fill an entire chapter and a half with just one piece of equipment. A 100-200 word introduction for a new piece of equipment would be much better.

I'm actually looking forward to what happens next, but it can't just start by introducing a nice little sister and then just keep playing games.

There's too much game content here; the book title should be changed to: I Play Legend in Another World.