Swallowed Star: The Pay-to-Win System

Run, run, run! This book seizes every opportunity. Shennong tried it, run!

Nine out of ten fanfics about devouring (a Chinese fantasy novel) are incompetent, and this author's work falls into that category. I'm outta here.

This book feels cursed. At the peak level, the original owner of the body takes it back. It feels like the protagonist is just working for someone else; it's so disgusting. Basically, the protagonist is leveling up for someone else, and then the original owner comes back to claim their max-level account. Then they switch maps and level up again, and it's an endless loop ∞∞∞∞

Top-tier account boosting, then handing it over to the original owner! I'm not playing along anymore.

Extremely poisonous, Shennong is dead.

If it's pay-to-win, then here's the problem: once the protagonist becomes powerful and establishes an empire in the universe, wouldn't he just be able to print whatever amount of money he wants?

I rarely criticize authors, but the fact remains that this is a flop, so I can't blame others for saying so. It's true that the author's claim of it being their first book makes sense, but if they claimed to be a seasoned reader or had written other works before, I'd probably criticize them for at least 5,000 words. If you're really bored and have nothing better to do, you can check it out.

Damn it, where did my previous post go? What's the point of writing anything? Just doing all that work for someone else's benefit? All that spending money just to make the original Yan Luo the protagonist? Oh, so that Yan Luo was the real protagonist after all. This so-called protagonist is just someone else's employee, getting no benefit whatsoever. There's no point in watching the rest of the story; he'll just be toiling away for Yan Luo in Panlong. If you can't write, don't force it.

There's a reason you failed.

Don't you have any sense of responsibility for picking up leftovers from someone else's "Swallowing the Stars"? If the original author saw how you wrote him, one sentence from him and you'd be finished.