One Piece: the Great God Usopp

Dressed as Usopp, what should I do with the Jesus cloth? This is one of the best scumbags.

The setting is okay, and the early stage is also okay, but being smart and insisting on writing a plot about Blackbeard makes it ugly. I can understand why it is written like this. Usopp's combat power is already good. When the Straw Hats have a strong combat power, the subsequent plot is not easy to write, but you It's really frustrating to write that Luffy was captured instead. Starting from the protagonist trying to find Ace, he met CP9 and was defeated. Luffy was defeated by Blackbeard and was defeated. Everyone came to read the story to enjoy it, not to show your understanding. It was not even as exciting as the original plot, which shows how many failures it had. My fellow shipmates generally deal with Blackbeard in two ways. 1. Forget it if he can't persuade Ace. Strengthen the group's strength and prepare to take over. 2. Kill Blackbeard directly in the early stage, or at least give Blackbeard a painful beating, so that he will not dare to covet the Straw Hats, and then kill him later in Impel Down City and Summit War. This is the worst way to handle this.

It's so tiring to keep calling out skill names and no fighting scenes for readers to figure it out.

A hodgepodge... You've only seen the surface of what's in One Piece itself, plus a bunch of hodgepodge! It makes people look uncomfortable... Why does Sauron insist on Usopp apologizing in the Capital of Seven Waters? Because Usopp's position for himself was unclear at first, and there was no clear distinction between superior and subordinate to Luffy! It's more of a partnership and alliance where everyone goes to sea together... Also, Usopp himself is not weak, but he can't hold a murderous weapon, a gun, because of his own psychological problems! That is to say, there is no murderous intention and no murderous mentality! That's why I played the slingshot... As long as the time traveler overcomes psychological problems, Usopp's technology plus sniper ability! Even beating the Yonko is enough to provide enough support and threat! You only see Nami having fun with the weather stick, but you forget that the weather stick was invented by Usopp. The various seed bullets he plays with are enough to make a fool of himself if the purpose is to kill people.

Write less about the system and more about the plot. The slingshot plant develops domineeringly. Waiting for Usopp to fight the Green Bull.

There are a lot of people out there working alone. How could someone like Usopp finally come up and work alone instead of following the boat? Then you write shit about Usopp! And there are so many Fuse Styles. Even if there are fifty One Piece fanfics, there may not be one that is Fate Styles.

I don't understand, whether it's your identity as a time traveler or Usopp's identity. What does Ace have to do with you? Why go to the thankless task of rescuing him? Do they accept your love? If you change the plot, the time traveler's advantage will be gone. The brain circuit does not understand.

What I wrote before is pretty good, and the various storylines that integrate into the team are handled very well. It's just Ace that annoys me. Why do you have to deal with the Ace and Blackbeard incident? Don't you think it's too far-fetched? It's too disgusting and too licking. They are not the same pirate group and have different beliefs. Are you going to remind Ace? They might even beat you up, and even told Robin the plot. Niubi, you might as well have just positioned the time travel memory to end at Ghost Island from the beginning. After that, I felt like I just fell apart, and I no longer had the sense of adventure. I think the main purpose of following a group is to write about adventure. You save someone here and someone there, you think you are the savior.

The Meili was still burned. You have to change as a time traveler. Ship spirits have been born. Can you refer to the opinions of the ship? You can pull the ship to the shore and build a museum occasionally. After becoming famous, it may still become a famous attraction. Like the original work, I don't like it if it is burned. Although it is very heroic and touching, I really don't like it if it is burned.

It's enough to get the passive, and it's really unnecessary to extract skills. In fact, buying six equipment is too much. I don't know how to arrange it. Anyway, I think that the world of One Piece has a small magic passive, plus a vampire passive, and a madman are enough.

In fact, Ace is not worth saving. He is conceited, arrogant and self-righteous.

I laughed. It was okay at the beginning, but when I started writing CP9 in the middle, it became disgusting. At this time, I can give up.

The author was so decisive in killing the navy soldiers before but not killing CP Spandam. The author is still awesome.

This nose can actually replace other organs😏 You can take in two at a time😏

It's been a while since I've read a Usopp fanfic! ! ! Will Usopp go alone or join the ship later? Following a boat is too cliché, the sea is so big, there is not only one way!

The most annoying thing in anime is Usopp. Not only is he ugly, but he still acts like a two-for-one. Although other people are like that too, he still flashes his memories in a flash.

I wrote the introduction wrong. It should be: In good times, rely on Zoro, in bad times, rely on Luffy, and in desperate times, rely on Usopp.

The front of this book is okay, but the back is just a piece of shit. Be careful everyone

Toxic, so many skills have been added, in order to suppress the protagonist, let Lu Qi catch it without thinking, it disgusts me to death. Run directly into the sea and destroy their ship, how about guerrilla warfare? ? ? The protagonist has a negative IQ and is invincible, so he looks even more abusive.

I finally understand how you managed to write 6 books and still get level 1

Poisonous, tasteless and a pity to throw away. Fascia's passive, Senna's passive, and Angel's passive are all available in the early stage. The attributes explode at the beginning, and the attributes are piled up like crazy.

Usopp? Then why doesn't Miss Qingmei have a character card?

If there are too many bugs, it would be meaningless.

It's really a pity. I like the setting but the plot is a bit toxic.

Also playing with guns, One Piece is already in its later stages, let's see whose gun can shoot through the armed colors.

There is one fruit that is most suitable for Usopp. The target fruit is the fruit of the pirate who tried to assassinate the queen on Fish-Man Island, failed to marry the princess, and bewitched the captain of the guard. I forgot its name.

It has been updated. I thought the author sent it.

There are a lot of typos and they won't be corrected even after readers corrected them.

The author's writing is good. I would like to recommend the book he wrote. Friends who are book-hungry can take a look. Just click on the avatar. It is non-toxic.

What's the poison? Shen Nong said that this is obviously the debuff of the heroic good man in advance, which is in line with my imagination of pirates.