The Vortex Clan in Marvel

The author's plot design is so speechless. The protagonist says he doesn't want to participate in the plot, but ends up running around to recruit women and disciples. First impression is very important, and your protagonist's character is like a schizophrenic. The protagonist started off as a good otaku, but was forced by the author to accept the blond and blue-eyed Ocean Horse, who clearly said he didn't like it 🤫. Does Gu Yi care about you as a time traveler? Time and space are so slippery, why can't I banish you if I can't win? I think this is the bad thing about Marvel fans. If you come up with any protagonist, Ancient One, you have to show up and explain that I won't do anything to you. You can play whatever you want. I will wait for a few chapters and then log off. I don't care about this nonsense. Will a mere New Yorker take care of you? Didn't anyone take action in the Battle of New York? It simply lowered the level of the Supreme Mage Ancient One.

There are always people who scold Marvel for mixing in Chinese elements, but there is no objection to Marvel mixing in Chinese elements that have been mutated by Japan... Tsk tsk tsk.

I feel relieved when I see so many people scolding Super Killer Girl. I originally wanted to say that since everyone is scolding, it will be fine.

The protagonist is not only a money-giving boy, but also a waste. He wrote a full-level account at the beginning, but Zeng E fought for a long time. If he didn't have the Samsara Eye, he would have been beaten to death by Zeng E. Author, have you watched Naruto? There is a ninjutsu called Thunder Release in Hokage, and there is also a place called Thunder Ninja Village. Learn about their Thunder Release Armor. It can strengthen the body and defeat tailed beasts. Was there any tailed beast that was once evil? There is an existence called the Uzumaki Clan. Please learn about the sealing techniques he can use The Uzumaki Clan you wrote about does not even know the sealing techniques that are useful in battles. Learn about the four-phase seals. They all have a maxed-level account. A water dragon bullet can hit Zeng Evil without losing blood.

I don't like the boy-like protagonist who gives money.

，，， It's not like there are two female protagonists. The male protagonist licks like a star chaser and then gets the same treatment as his girlfriend? Then this person felt that I didn't understand the charm of Super Killer Girl at all, and it felt a bit like self-pleasure. Then I would like to speak to a lot of readers, especially those who have never seen Kick-Ass. I could barely keep watching, the subject matter is really attractive. But after reading what the author said, I realized that this role was added based on personal feelings. It was clearly labeled as a single female protagonist, and a disgusting role was arranged. I just felt that Gwen was a cuckold. Then I said that I would no longer give chakra seeds to others. I also thought that Peter Parker could also have one, which could be regarded as a development team, so that it would be more harmonious. No matter what, Peter is a hundred times better than that super-killing girl, but if he says he won't be there in the future, then I think it's better to withdraw. Originally, because I like this character, it would be nice to teach her to become stronger, but can't I do it as a master? Why is it described in a dog-licking manner? No one likes it. Anyway, I feel like I don't regard Gwen as my girlfriend. After seeing such a relatable character, people who have never watched Kick-Ass will not be able to become fans, and may even start to hate Mindy even more. Is it true that you like your favorite character when others criticize her? Isn't this just attracting negative fans for her?

The protagonist gives money to a boy and sells dog meat to others. He talks about being cautious and wants to live a peaceful life, but in fact he wanders around and causes trouble for himself.

Let the author make up for the movie settings. Ancient One and Odin are invincible and no one dares to cause trouble. This is all made up by domestic imagination.

Is there anyone out there writing a new book based on this setting? This book is so rubbish

Live a good life, it's very simple, don't stay in a foreign country, understand? What the hell is this rubbish setting? If you want to live well, you have to cause trouble? Are you going to follow an American superhero? Do you want to help them and contribute?

Every time the protagonist thinks about a problem, he always acts recklessly. It's so poisonous! I'm afraid of SHIELD. The channel between Earth and Captain Marvel is not working at this stage. Luo Dan's pager may not work well. Even if the pager works, the protagonist can assassinate Luo Dan first and make him disappear from the world. Even if he has a pager, he won't be able to use it. Dealing with Hydra is even easier. Contact Iron Man, hack into SHIELD's network, look for Hydra evidence, and expose the entire network. The hidden Hydra is awesome, but once exposed, it will be a clown and be beaten to death! To deal with Master Gu Yi, directly make friends with the next generation of Supreme Master and wait for Gu Yi to retire. The government's nuclear bombs are easier to deal with. The protagonist has transformation and clone techniques to hide himself, illusions to torture intelligence, and flying thunder gods to teleport. Nuclear bombs cannot hit the protagonist. If you have family and friends, then build a force to protect them. The protagonist can build a company and become a capitalist. What's more, it doesn't matter if his identity is exposed. He can hold a press conference like Iron Man and announce that he is a certain man. Only the weak will care about the trouble caused by the exposure of identity, while the strong are not afraid. They can use wooden clones to protect their friends, or they can mark their friends with flying thunder gods. What's more, if you make friends with the Supreme Mage, he can check the timeline and help you.

After reading Chapter 116, the only feeling I have is that the protagonist looks like a fool.

I like single female protagonists in fan fiction, I like the heroine Gwen in Marvel fan fiction, and I also like the abilities in Naruto. This novel shows that it is full of my favorite genres, but the author ended up writing it in such a way that I can't stand it!

Not a single heroine? What's going on with Super Killer Girl? The author is speechless for using his private goods as a licking dog. I don't understand the charm of a super-killer girl. It is clearly labeled as a single female protagonist but a super-killer girl was added inexplicably. In short, it is extremely poisonous! ! ! !

The poison spot in front is actually not very big. But the faster it goes, the more I feel that the protagonist is not doing anything. Especially after the various enhancements to the Green Goblin. The New York surveillance barrier set up by the protagonist is basically useless against the Green Goblin. The protagonist doesn't take the initiative to take care of various things that happen. When others ask him for help, he only solves existing problems and ignores the remaining problems. Making the problem even worse. I think the protagonist either doesn't help, or helps until the end and solves the problem completely. Knowing that problems may arise, he does not deal with them in advance and waits for others to ask for help.

It's really disgusting. To be honest, I don't find that Super Killer is any more beautiful. She's just a young lolita! It doesn't look very good! Is the prerequisite for a lolita to be beautiful, cute and good-looking? This is really disgusting, is Gwen bad? ! You have to deal with people here!

Good guy. The reincarnated eye can directly cut the moon in half. You are worse than trash.

Give it up, Super Killer Girl is simply a huge poison, what the hell is that?

The most annoying thing is the kind of person who says he doesn't want to cause trouble while taking the initiative to get closer. Schizophrenia...

I wanted to pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger, but I actually turned into a pig. Having an invincible attitude, just don't use it. Just stay in a dark corner, watch and watch, say and reveal everything, just like a resentful woman. ………… When I read this book, my biggest feeling was that I felt aggrieved and useless. Describe it in one sentence. Put a pen on your desk, you don't even know what to do with it.

I didn't look at this one before and thought about raising it, but today I feel it's fat enough to kill it, and the result is. . . Let me tell you my opinion. Gwen is a good heroine. I like Gwen. At first, it was good for the protagonist to hide her thoughts, but then I couldn't understand it. At the beginning, it was about full-level time travel, but in the end, she had to practice shadow clones. There is nothing wrong with Kaitian Zhongzhong. It is very tiring to get a psychic beast. The abilities of the protagonist "whirlpool" family are not reflected at all. To add the whirlpool body to the full level, you need the energy of the cosmic cube to strengthen yourself. Before time travel, you can buy various talents and ninja illusions like crazy. , I have to master the physical skills later, and the ninjutsu only shows a few ninjutsu at the Jonin level, there are even less illusions, very few sealing techniques, and the ability of the Rinnegan is also a mystery. It stands to reason that only the Rinnegan can use the Heavenly Gochu, and the encyclopedia writes about this jutsu. It consumes a lot of chakra when activated. It is an eye technique that no one can use flexibly except Kaguya, who has a huge amount of chakra. It stands to reason that with this kind of chakra, making a psychic beast is not just for fun, but how about performing it to Gwen to win sympathy? Coming back to the topic, the description of the Samsara Eye is also very rough, especially the ability, which is the All-Seeing Heavenly Leading Shen Luo Tian Zheng Tian Zhi Yu Zhong. Of course, I only saw more than fifty pictures. If the ability is added later, I didn't say anything That's the feeling I got from the whole thing. . . It's very weak. There's nothing special about it except for the Samsara Eye. It's like a child picking up a pistol. I don't know until I look at it later. Let me ask first, what should I do if the protagonist doesn't have the tailed beast chakra in his body and the various modes behind it? The encyclopedia says that the Ten-Tails is the transformation of the Divine Tree, and the Divine Tree is the source of chakra. What about the Six Paths Mode? Of course, it's in vain for me to ask these questions. I'll definitely write about them later, but I'll leave you alone first. . . . I'll withdraw first

I'd like to ask everyone's opinions. Do you think it's possible for Hulk and Banner to become existences like tailed beasts and jinchūriki?

In order to develop the plot, the author deliberately created several opponents for himself without knowing the plot, and constantly strengthened the opponents. It was really painful to watch. Bye bye

I can only say that it is a daily introduction to poison. The author's writing is so contradictory that it makes people sick

The author enlightened the protagonist and strengthened Roman by cheating. I was so speechless that I couldn't stand it any longer. I walked away88

Extremely poisonous, this writing is truly amazing 😅

The writing is really rubbish, and this good subject is wasted.

The character of the protagonist has not been established at all. He was just a game designer at the beginning. After a few chapters, he talks to Gwen and he looks like a villain BOSS. There is no change process. There are spoilers and various arrangements. He even comes to help Gwen in a cowardly manner. There is no reason. Moreover, the names of the protagonists in the first few chapters are extremely weird. The protagonist's name appears several times in a sentence of less than 30 words. I have to repeat it over and over again. I don't understand how this is written. I have never looked back to check it after finishing it... The subject matter is good, but the writing method is really unbearable.

I haven't read it yet, but I have a question: why choose the whirlpool constitution? In the world of Naruto, it is indeed the top Marvel... All I can say is that it is nothing.

I was numb to this protagonist, and it was the first time I met the heroine that I told him everything. . . . . .