The Ultimate Transmission Terror Beast Stands on Douluo Continent

I caught up on the latest chapter yesterday. Let me share my thoughts on this book. First of all, this book does not entirely follow the original work. The author has enlarged the Douluo Continent and added several restricted areas such as the Star Dou Forest, which is a good supplement to the original work. There are a little bit of Pokémon elements added to the spirit beasts (just borrowing the names and skills), and there are also some things from the card guys? (I don't quite understand this), but it doesn't have much impact. About the characters, especially the original protagonist Tang San , I have only watched Dou Yi, but not after Dou Er. I only know a little bit about it in the fan fiction. I don't understand the cool operations in the later parts. I don't have that much ill will towards Tang San. I think it is reasonable to change Tang San's character since he was a child. Before Tang San was reincarnated, He is an outer disciple of the Killer Organization, a technical nerd who regards the Tang Sect as his home. In the end, he was found to have secretly learned special skills and instead of killing people, he jumped off a cliff to show his ambition. From here, you can see his character: a unique view of good and evil (lawful chaos), simple and cares about family and friends, foolish loyalty, and low emotional intelligence. Isn't it normal for such a person to live with a brother who treats him sincerely for more than ten years and read books for more than ten years? It is different from the original work? (Don't say that after Dou Yi, he became a god. After living for who knows how long, people will change. We have become different in just twenty or thirty years. Not to mention that Tang San Dou Yi lived for a hundred years before ascending, and after living for so long, who knows what he will become). Why Douluo Dalu is so popular? In addition to the successful anime adaptation, the setting is also very interesting. This book makes up for some unreasonable aspects of the original work and makes it more interesting. In recent years, there have been a lot of humanities in Douyi, but they have always been about mindlessly torturing three people and going to the harem. This kind of literature gives me the feeling that "you may commit crimes in the future, I will go back to the past and kill you, and then become you, open up the harem, all the beauties are mine, and anyone who disobeys me will die." It is very speechless, and this book is not a love brain bonus, the focus is on developing technology to change the future, and turning small love into great love.                             Finally, let me rate the points, based on my standards, the full score is 10 points, the writing is 7 points (the twists are sometimes a bit stiff, resulting in more breaks, and have no impact), the storyline is 8 points (mainly due to slow updates), the imagination is 10 points, and the character description is 8 points. Don't miss it if you like Douluo Dalu and imagination writing.

It has been nearly three years. The protagonist has just reached level 40 and is either blind or on the way to becoming blind. The content of the second creation is very creative and the writing is very good. However, the author is addicted to his own second creation. It is estimated that the final ending will be unfinished and he will be killed by himself. The writing is endless. You may say it is not good, and it is indeed good and interesting. But after reading it, I realized, then As for the growth of the protagonist, I feel that the author's left brain attacks the right brain, and the cerebellum slaps the brain wildly. Anyone who writes will definitely put himself into the protagonist. What the talented author of our book loves most is to suppress the protagonist's combat power and suppress the protagonist's growth. The early stage was okay. From the beginning of entering Tiandou, it smelled of AI and was extremely watery. It was completely like something written by two people. It can be said that Tiandou was very enjoyable to watch before, and it is not an exaggeration to say that the perfect second creation cooperates with the author's writing. After Tiandou, he was stuck at level 30 for hundreds of chapters, and then in these hundreds of chapters, you can see that other characters have improved, but the protagonist did not prompt at the same time. This feeling is as uncomfortable as force-feeding, or I just can't figure out what the protagonist is doing for a long time. Shouldn't the pile of research he has done serve his own strength? As a result, all the improvements Upgrade, no supporting character upgrades quickly in school, that's it, the protagonist is innately full of soul power, you might as well write innate 0.5 Second Yu Xiaogang and forget it, we can still understand why you wrote these hundreds of chapters like this. After climbing hundreds of chapters between 30 and 40, you are not the second Yu Xiaogang.

Sorry, I saw that there are only 90 chapters on the shelves. The first 30 chapters are very innovative, and the next 50 chapters can be connected to the plot even if you don't read it until it is released. They are always passers-by, supporting roles, setting, and repetition. I feel like I need to write about 10 million words, 1 million plots, 200 settings, 300 group portraits, and 4 million floods. So I'll come back when I've written 2 million words and it's still on the monthly vote list. It feels like the author is not writing a novel, but a thesis about Douluo Continent. As for the character design, I think it's normal. It currently fits the setting and growth environment in the author's novel, and it's not dark for the sake of being dark. I like the setting, I like the group portraits, I don't care about the plot, I don't care about the protagonist.

The only Douluo Dalu fanfic that is reasonably logical and self-consistent

This book is currently regarded as a masterpiece among Douluo fanfics. It has the potential to become a hit and is highly recommended. Personally, I think the biggest shortcoming of this book is that the title is too long and has no characteristics. After all, the audience of Yu-Gi-Oh is a small minority, and a large number of people may not be interested after seeing the title of the book. There are also some minor shortcomings, such as occasional typos, and the amount of updates. One update a day is barely enough to read, but if you want to become popular, this amount is definitely not enough. If the author has any ideas about the subsequent plot but is not sure, he can post it in this chapter, so that readers can discuss it.

What are you doing next? You wrote to Dugu Bo and you got no response at all? You should have known to come to Dugu Bo when he came, and the retainer of the Ice Emperor, it was a complete failure, and the replenishment was too slow. If there was only the setting at the beginning, I would almost abandon the book on the spot. Why does it feel that it is getting more and more confusing later on, and the protagonist's intelligence is getting less and less up to standard. I am afraid the author is too busy. This is a bit different from the protagonist who is so good at everything in the early stage. On average, about 5 chapters, I feel that there will be a poisonous point. Oh my god, I am going to die.

I have read Chapter 120, and I feel that what the author wrote is quite interesting. I really like the process of the protagonist in the article exploring the truth of the world. In some articles, people who follow a lightning rod to evade lightning are really annoying to me 😭. How can our scientific theories be copied and used in the fantasy world? Science is about studying the laws of the world and using them. If you want to develop science in other worlds, you have to start all over again, which is very long. I like the author's slower pace very much I also like the protagonist in it, at least until chapter 120, he is not too poisonous. Many Douluo fandom protagonists did much more disgusting things than Tang San🤢. The author should continue to write in this style. Monthly tickets are enough.

When the author frequently stopped updating, I already had a premonition of this ending. In my opinion, the interesting point and the out-of-control point of this book coincide with each other, which is the characteristics of the setting itself. The author has greatly expanded the existing world view of Douluo Continent, and tried to give a self-consistent explanation to a large number of ambiguous contents in Zhang Wei's original book. This attempt is very good, and it also makes many readers (such as me) feel new and interesting. But the author's shortcomings actually lie in this. Overemphasis on setting has led to the procrastination and lengthyness of the plot itself. The collection habit of "not donating the small and large" has also caused the protagonist's strength to be prematurely unbalanced, resulting in great difficulties in plot arrangement. The derivation of the plot itself has also prematurely deviated from the track of the original book. This is also an important reason why the author fell into Kavin. The last little wish is that the author will send out his outline and conceived settings for everyone to see. I think this is the best part of the book. In short, I would like to thank the author for his rich imagination and give me a good reading experience. I respect the author's choice and wish the author all the best in the future.

It gives people a Pokémon style, a bit strange and novel, so take a good look, after all, it's hard to find such complex ingredients.

Although the writing style is not amazing, it is smooth and the narrative is good. There are some typos, which I will correct slowly. After reading the author's words of the latest chapter, I suggest you write a copy and review it more It can be seen that the author is very willing to communicate with readers and listen to their opinions. This is better than many new authors It can be ranked among the top five in Douluo fandom, come on

Come on, author, there are not many novels with online IQ nowadays.

The author writes very well. I like it very much and can basically read it. However, the biggest problem currently is the lack of updates.

The author's angle of exploring Tang San was very novel, and it made my eyes light up even if I was looking at other things. The whole book was surprisingly... Pretty good. A stubborn child who lacks love? Interesting. . . Xiao Wu, Old Jack, Brother Tao... These supporting characters are all well written, without the feeling of bitterness and hatred in ordinary novels. And Dai Mubai, Yu Xiaogang, and Tang Hao are also dead. Anyway, no matter how hard I try to clean up these three things, I can't clean them up. The author simply didn't write about my bad points. The whitewashing of other Shrek Academy supporting characters seems to be logical and personal. These aspects are not bad points for me. It's time to talk about the bad aspects when talking about the good aspects. It's too dry. The martial arts, soul rings, and hexagonal diagrams that are related to the original work can still be seen in the front. The more you write later, the more dry it becomes, and it deviates a little from the Douluo fandom. I usually jump to read it. There is also the aspect of the Fallen. It feels too strong, and it feels a bit like a bug that cannot be exterminated. Look at the original Dou Er's Angel Wuhun and the Evil Soul Master. There is also a Wuhun Hall in Dou Yi. How can those things be raised? There are also newly added gods who are both the moon god and the god of time, and the protagonist's attitude towards the gods is a bit too negative: fear, worry, something else, it feels too depressing.

It's well written, at least the logic is self-consistent.

The author is too subjective, some of the characters are seriously OOC, and the plot is not very good, but the imaginative setting is very good, and it opens up new imaginings on the original setting. For me, it covers up all the ugliness.

When I read this novel, I felt that this novel was not like a fanfic, but more like a new book based on Douluo Dalu. This type of book is rare. I like reading it very much, so I hope the author can write more

Assuming that from the current 15-person team, 14 people are selected to play the game. In theory, Bai Chenxiang is still a cheerleader. The general team composition may be as follows: 1. The structure of the original Huangdou team. (1) The original 7-person crowd structure. The Shi brothers are in charge of the t, Jade is the main dps and deputy t, Po is responsible for debuffing, the two Mins are the deputy dps and cut the back row, and Ye is responsible for restoring blood. They have high attack and high defense, but they are afraid of control and special attacks. Needless to say. (2) Improved type. Two defenses and two sensitivitys are obviously repeated, and one or two can be replaced by Tang or Meng. Improve tactics and strategy. My suggestion is to change your sensitivity. 2. New 7-person structure (1) Gu main t and main dps, Meng main control, Lan auxiliary control remote dps, Wu and Zhu Qie part-time deputy dps in the back row, Ning is responsible for buffing, Tang is responsible for tactical planning and switching (2) Improved type. Learn from the Chopper Team's play style, replace Ning and Meng with Du and Yu, and focus on a one-hit kill (3) Improved 2. Strengthen the Gutang combination with all your strength, add Ye Hedu, replace Zhu Hewu (or Meng), the main focus is an Gutang thigh, and the rest are all auxiliary

Unexpectedly, this month also has double monthly passes.

Could it be that he got into trouble with Tang San?

There are too many private settings, which makes it look less like a Douluo, and more like a Japanese fantasy world in the West (some names, titles, sentences and behaviors). It is acceptable for the author to write a story that has changed due to the protagonist's time travel. I have never played Yu-Gi-Oh and don't know it, which is also a reason. If it is for exclusive use, passers-by will not be considered. I didn't say it. When writing this kind of article, don't waste your energy on this kind of place. It's meaningless (the harem stallions should have run away long ago after seeing the description of the relationship between the protagonist and Tang San) The most important thing is the third point. I have covered all the previous points. I thought the author would explain it here, but I didn't expect it to be poisonous 😢 This book is very well written in terms of research and experiments. I can give it 5 stars. The reason why it was lowered is because of the previous points

Not bad, not bad. Although he is still Douluo, he has written something new, not the same old thing.

The pace is too slow. What are you doing around Chapter 150? Are you adding water? It will cause fans to fall off. It is really too watery. I want to express a lot of content, but the writing is not enough and it makes it boring.

The author hopes you can continue to update. I like it very much

It's good, but this rabbit is really disgusting. The original is useless. It's just a tool and it's a lot of trouble. Respect the fate of others and put aside the plot to help others. Do you understand? Unless the 7th ring is about cheating and being a ring gang, it's normal.

Is there any brother who can come to the book review section and help me check it out? It's almost interesting.

Let me ask the protagonist, did you get married in the end? Are you still single? Are you single? 😜

This book is considered to be an extremely rare type among Douluo fans recently, that is, the kind that neither tramples on Tang San nor praises Tang San very highly. It is completely a breath of fresh air. The author said that based on his work experience, he believed that Tang San in the original work may have some shortcomings in spiritual personality, so the protagonist was placed in Tang San's childhood in order to fill the spiritual hole. This is very interesting, at least I have never seen a book written like this in Qidian. There is a problem here, that is, the author is too rational. The author starts completely from logic and analyzes the internal behavioral logic of the original characters, making this book right in the middle of the so-called "stepping on the three factions" and "licking the three factions". The Trampling San faction will think that the author is working as Tang San's nanny and is a dog licker. But the Li San Sect felt that the author was changing the innocent young Tang San, and Tang San did not need to change. It's really a bit miserable to please both sides and hate both sides. In terms of writing techniques, the author is not like the current "fast food" novels, which use fast and powerful hot spots to quickly attract attention and gain profits in the early stage. When the hot spots are used up in the later stage, he cuts the book and runs away. Instead, more pen and ink are used to describe the inner changes of the characters, focusing on the inner thoughts of the characters rather than external performances.        Old Jack, the nameless doorman in the original work, and even Xiao Wu, who can be said to be the protagonist's pendant in the original work, have been carefully portrayed by the author, making the characters seem to have come alive, with their own lives and their own ideas. But in this way, the overall pace of the book is very slow, the plot fails to advance quickly, and the readers are attracted to the book until the author has no passion, and finally it is abandoned (just saying this, the author must not cut it, I will vote). I hope the author can update more. These problems will not be a problem as long as they are updated more. (Since I have written so much, the author is great, could you please add more details)

The common poisonous points of imagination writing have begun to break down. The author seems to have little experience in writing books, and his mentality is almost unbearable. He has become aggressive with the readers, and no one in the explanation even complained. One of the advantages of this kind of imagination writing is that it is groundbreaking and novel. It has low requirements on rhythm control, plot arrangement and writing style, and is suitable for novices with ideas. But the disadvantages are also obvious. Novices have no patience and only have three minutes of enthusiasm. Without planning, they write whatever comes to mind. In the end, they will dig holes everywhere, one in the east and one in the west, and none of them will be dug deeply. The author's first hundred chapters can't be called a novel. They should be called detailed outlines of settings. I've posted large sections of settings. It's too lenient for readers to tolerate it. After that, I just dug holes all over the place, and I couldn't write down all the cool points in detail. What about the previous Lanta? Like a transparent person in a vase, the figure is almost invisible; where is Zhu Zhuqing's power of the underworld? He is also invisible every day, and his development and training are no longer progressing. He feels inferior to the comic master. What about Ning Rongrong's two auxiliary systems? The spirit of a battle is gone, and the difference from other people's team battles cannot be reflected. Not to mention the previous relationship with Wuhun Palace, the connection with the three upper sects, and the future layout. What about these main lines? With so much to write, my mind got hot. For a whole week, I updated it every day, and I was thinking about strengthening the water and ultimate ice that day. I had to kill everyone and win the hemp. It seemed like the previous one hundred chapters of racking my brains to strengthen it seemed like a relief. Every point can be written in depth. There are many things to see if you dig deeper. If you have to try them all, you will not be very good. I just want to play, I just want to happily spread my imagination, and I don't want to do the difficult and long completion and in-depth cultivation. If I continue like this, I will just be a courier delivering creative ideas to subsequent authors. Online articles never matter who is the original author. Whoever writes well will take all. The leader of various streams is never the pioneer, but the one who writes the best

I only saw licking Tang San and clearing Tang San's name. What the hell are the first two written about? Tang San's fault is not Tang San's fault, it's because the people around him influence Tang San. Tang San's mistakes are not wrong. Is it right to say that the people around Tang San became like this because of the people around them, and then they are all cleared, right?

Shrek Academy is full of stains, but everyone in Wuhun Hall is spotless. They are all pitiful people. Do you also want to be Tang San?