
Mortal's Journey: I Transmigrated a Little Too Early
凡人,我穿越的有点早
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- Completed
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- 1.7M Words
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- Cultivation
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- Classical Xianxia
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- 6mo ago
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- Qidian
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Five books in a row have been sold out, so how can I dare to invest? Moreover, this book has no thoughts of cultivating immortals at all. It is just a dark blue book with some assembly line work.
Collect red whisks, give birth to xuan'er, dry clouds and dew
Trafficking in women is extremely poisonous, so book friends, please stop your losses immediately!
This book has serious problems, and its style is particularly contradictory. First of all, the protagonist is a body-refiner, and then he is a rob cultivator. He is a kind of evil person who often does bad things. As a result, there is a plot where his daughter is robbed and disgusted by the Chen family. The protagonist also compromised. There is a very obvious personality conflict here. According to the normal way of writing online articles, for example, the plot of the daughter being robbed should be left until after the elixir is formed, and then the protagonist knocks on the door, punches the Hier Moon Sect, and achieves the supreme evil name (from the frustration of the daughter being robbed, to the hard training to improve oneself and prepare trump cards, to the door knocking out the Hier Moon Sect, the fierce Famous, complete a closed loop of satisfaction) The plot of the Chen family can be placed in the foundation building period. If you want to write a cautious flow, then first take revenge on the person who provided the horoscope, secretly inquire about the information, and come back with revenge. It is best to slander the hostile forces and start a war. If it was a normal and exciting story, then they would just fight back. The Chen family was furious, beating the younger ones and the older ones, giving away lives and treasures along the way, and eventually turned into fuel for the protagonist. Instead of being like this book, the daughter was robbed and beaten but could not be forgiven, and the Chen family was disgusted and settled the matter because the other party was powerful. Although this is a realistic writing method, it is not a web writing method!
What rubbish? My wife was killed, my daughter was abducted, and I still want to marry her after being slandered. The key is that she still owes
The Moon Moon Sect forcibly took away the protagonist's genius daughter as a disciple by kidnapping, and made the protagonist's daughter suffer the pain of losing her parents at the age of seven. Is this because the sect is developing too well, so it specially cultivates a resentful genius disciple within the sect for fun? Even if Old Monster Qiong has a weird temperament and unpredictable behavior, after he handed over the protagonist's daughter to the sect, the Yuanying monks and other golden elixirs of the Biyue Sect didn't care about it?
Immortal grass, brothers🐶🐶🐶
I've read a lot of novels, and the main character sells human beings and traffics young girls and young women. You can kill people and take treasures. I hate human trafficking the most!
Human trafficker, right? People are bought and sold, right? After reading so many novels, this is the first time I saw someone who directly tied up a woman and sold her to the Hehuan Sect. You are the first one.
Seeing that this first ray of purple energy is actually used to strengthen a body-building pill, you can roughly tell the level of this book. Also, although there is no conflict between spiritual practice and physical cultivation, there is still a problem of specialization in this book. It can only be said that the author did not pay attention and did not read the original work. I think that when writing a fanfic, you must at least respect the setting of the original work. Random second-hand settings will lose a lot of readers.