Across the Screen: Dream of the Red Chamber, I Am Jia Hu

Are there too many typos? Voice recording?

With this ability, everyone like Lai and Zhou Rui's family will definitely be killed. The slaves will eat the inside and outside, and the master will be beaten to death in feudal society. Jia Wangshi just drank a glass of poisonous wine! Since it all involves fantasy strength, what else do you have to worry about? Moreover, these things are done for a reason, and the various members of the family will never have any objections. On the contrary, they applaud and applaud. No one except Jia Mu knows about Mrs. Wang's bad things and unites the family!

I would like to ask if you feel that the last few chapters have been too boring. There is no focus. No matter which side there is, there are so many words and so many psychological activities. It makes your chest feel tight. Or am I the only one who feels this way and am I being pretentious?

The writing is so poor and the map is so big

The reading experience is really bad, the subject matter is very good, and the writing is really bad

Are you serious about your writing style and attitude?

This is not the key. The key is that you have already written millions of words, so why are there so many typos and many unclear sentences in this newly opened book?

The concept is quite good, but what if I have to worry about everything? How did you write so many typos?

These typos are not common. . . , Is this a direct persuasion to quit?

I prefer the age of the protagonist, Brother Jia Lian. Many of the characters in Red Mansions are too young. There are younger brothers like Jia Baoyu and even Lin Daiyu. The Jia family is gone before they reach adulthood. They can only become high officials at the age of thirteen or fourteen. It is quite unrealistic. Your writing skills are poor and the integration of history is a bit confusing.