Across the Screen: Dream of the Red Chamber, I Am Jia Hu

There are so many typos! Is this a voice recording?

With that kind of power, people like Lai Dajia and Zhou Rui's family would definitely be wiped out. Servants betray their masters, and it's perfectly normal for the master to kill them; even the emperor wouldn't say anything. As for someone like Grandmother Jia, would she dare to do it if threatened with Da Lian Bao's life? Jia Wangshi would just be given a cup of poisoned wine!

I'd like to ask everyone if you've felt that the last few chapters have been too drawn out. The writing lacks focus, and no matter which side it's on, there's so much dialogue and inner monologue. It's making me feel suffocated. Or am I the only one feeling this way, and am I just being dramatic?

With such poor writing skills, why make the map so big?

The reading experience was terrible; the subject matter was good, but the writing was really weak.

Are you serious about your writing style and attitude?

That's not the point. The point is that you've already written millions of words, so how come this new book has so many typos and incoherent sentences?

The idea is pretty good, but, as always, there's a "but"—how did you manage to write so many typos?

There are so many typos... This is practically a no-go, isn't it?

I like the protagonist's age. Brother Jia Lian is a good example. Many characters in Dream of the Red Chamber are too young. There are even characters like Jia Baoyu's younger brother and Lin Daiyu's younger brother. They are not even adults yet, and the Jia family is already gone. They can only become high-ranking officials at the age of thirteen or fourteen, which is unrealistic. Your writing is a bit weak and it also incorporates historical elements, making it a bit messy.