The Martial Soul Scholar of Douluo World

This is what I see in Dou Guo Luo Dalu. It's not that there are many female protagonists, they're pretty, but there are just a few.

Looking at the protagonist's posture in the latest chapter and the current bureaucracy of the principality, is it imitating the Ming Dynasty? Co-ruling with scholar-bureaucrats → Co-ruling with soul masters Six departments → Department, Division, Office, and Department. Then related people's livelihood protection has appeared, such as "work-for-relief", "craftsmanship" (what kind of professional profile), "guanzheng"... But it feels like the author is deliberately exaggerating the gap between soul masters and ordinary people in the original work. And said that the suffering of Jianguo was too troublesome. It's money and it's people. But on the one hand, it is also said that the protagonist is the current popular aspiration of the martial soul master. As a result, in the organizational structure of the empire, martial soul cultivators account for exactly one third. As a result, most families are still waiting to see how to appoint officials, as if they have exhausted all their wisdom by moving into the principality. Also, although the protagonist has laid out the work-study students teaching and printing, maybe the illiteracy rate of residents in the territory has indeed dropped. However, there is still no integrated civilian education system. According to the current progress of the protagonist, the first city is still being expanded, and the exclusive auxiliary cities for craftsmen and scientific research you planned are too big. According to the current progress, it seems to be far away. At present, there is no real wisdom of the people, and Douluo is regarded as too realistic. After all, according to the original work, Douluo's civilian IQ is worrying, and it takes thirty thousand to reach the interstellar age.

At the age of three and a half, through the talent given by the spiritual world to discover the medicinal properties of plants, and observing the herbs eaten by hunting dogs in the village, he invented herbal tea. At the age of four, due to drought, the village invited a soul master to help dig a reservoir, and initially understood the power of the soul master. He began to peek at the awakening of the martial soul for the first time and explore the source of innate soul power. At the age of five, he realized that martial soul mutations were only morphological changes and could not give birth to innate soul power. He began to cultivate the blue silver grass and howling wolf grass plants of his parents in reality to see if there were soul power plants, so as to observe the similarities and differences. When he was five and a half years old, he was exploring the mountains behind the village, encountered a spirit beast, and was rescued by Matthew Nuo. He also obtained the soul power blue silver grass and devoured some of the accompanying spiritual creatures of the soul beasts. At the age of six, he awakened his martial soul and gained half a level of innate soul power. Later, he was assassinated by a neighboring village, through which he got to know Mathieu Nuo and Su Yuntao, and obtained the method to investigate the Spirit Hall of Notting City for free. When he was six and a half years old, while studying at Notting College, he inquired about ways to improve his soul power, and planted a large amount of blue silver grass and howling wolf grass in the back mountain, with the intention of cultivating silver thread orchids in large quantities, which have the same origin as the martial spirit, and create a mimic environment. At the age of nine, he broke through level ten with the help of the same source of silver thread orchid. By handing over to the college the method of building a symbiotic environment that imitates a mimic environment, a high-quality century-old soul ring was obtained. With the leyline spore ginseng, the martial soul is strengthened and there is a way to absorb the leyline energy. (The first soul skill, Earth Veins Xinglin, can absorb the energy of the Earth Veins, release a large number of spores or condense them into pills, which can greatly restore injuries and nourish the body) (The first real full-scale display, Volume 1 Chapter 78) At the age of ten, he was assassinated by a soul master hired by a neighboring village. He counter-attacked and used the spiritual world. His spiritual power officially discovered the direction of the main meridians of the human body, and began to take a different path from Douluo by penetrating the meridians to achieve great circulation and strengthen meditation. At the age of twelve, after absorbing the moonlight vine for seven hundred years, the martial soul gained the ability to absorb moonlight and strengthen it. (The second soul skill, Moonlight Rain, absorbs moonlight and stores it to generate nectar, which can be taken to nourish and restore internal injuries) (The true meaning is revealed, Volume 2, Chapter 16) At the age of fifteen, he broke through level 30. In order to disguise and absorb the powerful third soul ring, he bid farewell to Nordin and joined the Rock Mercenary Group outside the Star Dou Forest. At the age of fifteen and a half, he successfully obtained a thousand-year soul ring under disguise. The method of vitality refraction releases the mottled soul power that was previously absorbed by earth veins and moonlight, and successfully moved towards a method of first focusing on quantity and then on quality. (The third soul skill, Jinglin Healing World, absorbs the vitality of earth veins and plants, releases vitality and soul power, releases and generates a vitality aperture, and continues group treatment within the aperture) (Volume 2, Chapter 15) In the same year, he began to plan a way out for the future, and chose the future direction by promoting the continued hybridization of silver-threaded orchid and other plants. At the age of seventeen, he left the rock and strengthened the origin of his martial soul by absorbing soul beast companions. And successfully hunted the five-thousand-year-old soul beast Seven-stringed Earth Dragon Vine. (The fourth soul skill, Praise of Life, gives the spirit a sonic surge that vibrates the blood at high speed, which is used to strengthen training, and gives Silverline Orchid the ability to cut at high frequencies) (The first official appearance is Chapter 15 of Volume 4, which is consistent with the fourth soul skill of his younger brother Ye Gu but with the younger brother's biased connection) At the age of twenty-one, he returned to Notting College to become a teacher. In the same year, he jointly published "The Theory of the Origin of Earth Vein" (Volume 2, Chapter 29) with Mathieu Nuo and Su Yuntao. At the age of twenty-two, he absorbed Youyue Yugui. (The fifth soul skill, Condensing Moon Frost, strengthens the accumulation of moonlight in the second soul skill. It can nourish the moonlight to cultivate plant fruits and accelerate the growth of the plant.) (The bay fruit is its imitation product. It nourishes the body through the bay fruit and repairs it. It is re-injured secretly, but the effect is graded as the moonlight condenses. It normally blooms in nine years, bears fruit in nine years, and matures in nine years) (mentioned in Chapters 13, 15, and 42 of Volume 3) At the age of twenty-seven, Tang San came to Nordin to report. In the same year, while hunting for the sixth soul ring, Bellflower in the Konggu, and helping his sister obtain the first soul ring, he met Oscar. (The sixth soul skill, Linghe Qingfeng, is in the same category as the fourth soul ring, from acting on qi and blood to acting on spirit. Blowing the soul seems like a breeze blowing willows, but those with weak souls may suffer heavy losses, and are usually beaten by Ye Chuan Used to blow on oneself and concentrate on spiritual power) (The first official appearance was in Chapter 5 of Volume 4 when fighting against the ambushed Contra) Thirty years old, absorbing the Ten Thousand Silk Dragon Blood Banyan Tree. (The seventh soul skill, All-encompassing, gives Silver Thread Orchid extremely powerful weaving and growth capabilities. It is also the prototype source of the later armor and martial arts) At the age of thirty-four, he faced Dugu Bo, and later relied on imitating the poisonous elixir, and initially developed the inner elixir, the elixir of life. Thirty-six years old, he absorbed the 100,000-year-old soul ring of King Blue Silver that broke the limit of sacrifice, and condensed the elixir of life. (Soul Skill One Silver Sky Curtain, Ten Thousand Flowers Realm. It can reflect enemy soul skills and absorb soul power, converting it into vitality.) (Volume 4, Chapter 7) (Soul Skill Two Mirror Flowers and Water Moon, use mirrors, water and other objects to move positions) At the age of thirty-nine, he participated in the Tiandou Palace Transformation and was named the Protector of the Country. Now, at level ninety, the soul ring is tentatively determined. Self-created/derived soul skills Grass binding, the process when the first soul skill stimulates spores is interrupted, thus strengthening the toughness of the plant itself. (Volume 2, Chapter 6) Deprivation of life. Change the process of releasing spores and vitality to absorption in the opposite direction, forcing the absorption of the vitality of plants and soul beasts. (Volume 2, Chapter 15) Shanhe Sheji Seal. The move can fully activate the energy of the earth veins, but it will affect the trend of the earth veins, mountains and rivers in the area, so it is not used easily. (Volume 3, Chapter 71) Lingxi controls the wind. The combined mutation of the fourth and sixth soul skills shocks the enemy's energy, blood, and soul energy in all directions. (Volume 4, Chapter 63) Life replacement, Nirvana and rebirth. The soul skill of the elixir of life can force the location of plants and objects around you that are full of vitality. (Volume 4, Chapter 9) The silver orchid blooms. The vitality is greatly released, stimulating the limitations of one's own body, and stimulating the vitality of the human body at high intensity. In addition, there are conventional combat methods such as plant armor and plant weapons.

1. "The Theory of the Origin of Earth Veins" links the evolution of plant-based martial spirits with the evolution of earth vein energy and the origin of life. This gives grassroots plant soul masters a specific direction for development. 2. The "Symbiotic Environment Construction Method" imitates a complex mimetic environment, planting a large number of similar plants of the soul master's origin through the direction of the earth's veins, and using soul power plants as the core to create a simpler mimetic environment. As a result, Notting College was promoted to an intermediate soul master college, and is now being hunted by small soul master families and even various colleges on a large scale. 3. "Stream Meditation Method", with the concept of "the best is like water", breaks away from the traditional Douluo and applies it to specific martial soul meditation methods, and publishes the meridians on a large scale. 4. "Ideas of Martial Soul Contemplation", which is equipped with common martial arts pictures drawn by the protagonist, guides the soul master to visualize the martial soul, increases affinity with the martial soul, and enhances spiritual power. 5. "The Theory of Planting Martial Spirits and Food and Supplements", creating a "soul meal" system, using soul food to replenish the soul master's deficient origin and enhance the soul master's training 6. "Physical Training Techniques", including various systematic training methods such as eye training and body training, and is equipped with common weapon soul catalogues, as well as health-preserving potions. 7. "The Theory of Integration of Martial Soul and Martial Arts", by publicizing a large number of sects and soul beast soul skills, some martial soul masters can use their martial souls as whips, sticks, guns and other weapons. 8. "Planting Armor Technique", entwining and weaving the spirit of planting martial arts into combat armor. 9. "Introduction to the Derivative Soul Skills of Zhiwu Soul" proposes the concept of derivative soul skills, that is, by finding its fundamental soul skills, such as growth soul skills, Zhiwu Soul can develop derivative soul skills such as entanglement, parasitism, and cage, and transform the release of soul skills from a single soul skill to a later soul skill development method. It was also proposed to carry plant seeds with the same origin of the martial spirit, and trigger the plant seeds through the vitality of the martial spirit to achieve effects such as parasitism in disguise. 10. "Inner Alchemy Method" refers to Dugu Bo and relies on the soul beast elixir to create Tao elixirs and life elixirs that integrate the soul master's spirit, energy and spirit 11. "Soul Power Vortex Sect Method and Soul Core Condensation Alchemy Method", after confirming the meridians and Dantian of the whole body, use the core of the plant to open up a soul power vortex in the Dantian. In the later period, the soul power is strengthened and compressed to further form the soul core. If the same source of the alien beast inner elixir can be obtained later, the Life elixir can be further formed. 12. "A Systematic Preliminary Study on Soul Fusion Techniques", from soul power fusion techniques, soul skill fusion techniques, to martial soul fusion techniques, and systematically proposed that the premise of soul master's soul fusion lies in homologous and alien forms, rather than the appearance of opposite attributes and opposite directions of development of souls 13. "On the Foundation of Soul Masters: A Preliminary Study on the Three Elements of Spirit, Qi, and Shen", which proposed that the origin of soul masters lies in the three elements of essence, energy, and spirit, and that the integration of the three elements can break through the title.

The writing is okay, but the progress is really slow. It takes more than forty chapters to awaken the martial spirit.

1. Notting City's "bus" system allows rural residents to spend a small amount of copper soul coins to travel between urban and rural areas 2. Notting College's "Teaching Assistant" program, students who are about to graduate can be included in the study aid review and hired as teaching assistants to assist in school running, experimental research, etc. 3. Notting College's "work-study assistant" "Plan, Notting College work-study students are required to set up literacy classes in the countryside during holidays to teach rural residents to read 4. The college's "alliance" system is similar to an interest club, encouraging students to develop a secondary career that combines life and interests, and to contact related entities outside the school to ensure that students have a job after graduation. 5. The "Policy of going to the countryside with medicine, medicine and food", announced large-scale basic medical skills, Chinese herbal medicine planting technology, and "Blue Silver Rice Wolf Howling Wheat" grain seeds, further developing the economy around Notting. 6. Collection of orphan copies and revision and printing. Under the call of the protagonist and spontaneous collection by Nordin students, orphans or incomplete copies of martial arts theory, administration, economy, etc. Were collected, and revised and published by the protagonist and representatives of various industries. 7. The "Wanye Guild" system integrates all walks of life to form unified pricing, order receiving, dispatching, and bulk business in the industry, as well as professional training and professional assessment within the industry such as blacksmiths, tailors, etc.

It's so uncomfortable to watch, the protagonist is like a green tea with fragile heart

Douluo cannot come to the Sun and Moon Continent, and there are three ferocious beasts separated by glaciers on the land. A family of magical whales dominates the sea.

Oh my god, what kind of magical author is this? You can read so many thousand words for free. Is this still the starting point? And why are there so few people discussing it?

Tang San Ye Chuan's direct disciple Martial spirit: Martial Spirit Grass → Blue Silver Sword Grass → Blue Silver Sword Emperor Grass The first soul skill, Blue Silver Flying Blade. It is taken from the 400-year-old soul beast sword bamboo variant - the silver-fronted purple sword bamboo. The effect is that the blue silver grass blades can be turned into blue silver flying knives, which can be locked in place to a certain extent and shot. The first soul skill derived from the soul skill: Flying Knife Storm (form the flying knives into a flying knife whirlpool) The second soul skill, Blue Silver Stab. Taken from the upper soul beast Lone Bamboo - Lone Leaf Bamboo. The effect is to make the bluesilver grass branches tough and grow rapidly. Second soul skill derived soul skills: blue silver spear gun, blue silver bamboo spear, blue silver shield, blue silver cage, blue silver coffin Third soul skill, the meaning of Haojin and Jun Cheng's heart. The soul ring is taken from the ancient alien species Hao Jin Mo Jade Bamboo. It was obtained by tapping the heart gate and connecting the Hao Jin Mo Jade Bamboo. Later, with the blessing of the Immortal Grass Black Jade Divine Bamboo, it has exceeded 100,000 years. The meaning of Haojin can make Tang San bless the Blue Silver Grass, making the Blue Silver Grass indestructible and invulnerable to water and fire. Jun Cheng's heart can enable Tang San to avoid charm, illusion and other effects as well as negative emotional and mental effects. The attached soul bone Haojin ink jade bamboo sword, the soul skill Haojin destroys evil spirits, can effectively break the defenses of the soul master or the soul beast's external gangster energy, evil spirit, etc. The fourth soul skill, Blue Silver Thousand Silk Transformation, blue silver emperor bloodline awakens the life, after activation, the front soul ring changes into the healing life direction, life healing leaves, blue silver growth, Haojin body training. Xiao Wu Ye Chuan's direct disciple, Tang San's sworn brother Martial Spirit: Soft Bone Rabbit → Jade Rabbit First soul skill, waist bow Second soul skill, Rabbit Kicks Eagle Third soul skill, teleportation Fourth soul skill, Soft Bone Lock And at Ye Chuan's suggestion, he tied a knife behind his braid to catch him by surprise in close combat. Ning Rongrong Ye Chuan's personal disciple Martial spirit: Seven Treasures Exquisite Tower→Nine Treasures Glazed Tower The first soul skill, strength The second soul skill, speed The third soul skill, soul The fourth soul skill, suppression. The effect is that the fourth soul skill is amplified into a demon-suppressing tower, and can be maintained by absorbing the soul power of the target of suppression during the suppression period. Oscar A direct disciple of Ye Chuan Martial Spirit: Meat Sausage The first soul skill is to restore the big sausage The second soul skill is Qingfeng Tianchang, which is taken from the "Wind Antelope" which is famous for its speed. The effect is to gain the speed blessing of assault. Later, Oscar learned the self-created movement technique of "Sliding Step" The third soul skill, Flying Mushroom Sausage, is taken from the flying mushroom. The effect is to continuously fly The fourth soul skill, Exploding Qi and Blood Sausage, takes out the Exploding Bear. The effect is to strengthen the soul master's Qi and blood and all aspects of physical fitness. Derived soul skills, exposure bombs, through the soul power compression effect, compress the qi and blood in the qi-blood intestine, causing the sausage to explode Self-created ring-melting soul skills, sausage stick, the sausage is fused with soul power and compressed to form a sausage stick for combat Ye Gu Ye Chuan's younger brother Martial spirit: Silver Thread Orchid First soul skill Spore Shen Pill Second soul skill Vitality refracts light Third soul skill Silver Orchid Shelter Fourth soul skill Silver Orchid Bloom Release·Hymn of Life Ye Lan Sister Ye Chuan Martial Spirit: Wolf Howling Grass The First Soul Skill Wolf Howling Sound The Second Soul Skill Shocking Soul Wave The Third Soul Skill Wolf Howling Cage The Fourth Soul The magic sound and magic spell The combined attack stunt is the "Blue Silver Explosion" with Tang San's Blue Silver Grass, and the "Sausage Explosion" with Oscar Sausage The martial soul fusion skill is the combined "Silver Moon Wolf Lord" with the second brother Ye Gu's martial soul fusion skill.

To be honest, I feel like many Yu Sanliu movies don't have female protagonists. If I insist on talking about it, it's Tang San. If there is a female protagonist, it's just a fake one 🙂

The writing is good, but not suitable for Douluo's rhythm.

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The plot of this book by the author, starting from the appearance of Tang San, was okay, but it was really boring before, and the character of the protagonist was always empty. I almost skipped to read it. Obviously the protagonist's experience can be completely written as a book, but the plot is very rushed, and the characters have almost no impression. The achievements, thoughts, changes made by the protagonist, etc. Can be written in a little more detail. It is better to let the readers think along and enhance the sense of immersion, rather than just brushing it off. At least it should give the readers an impression. Remember that the most basic point of Qidian signing is that it has commercial value. If it cannot retain readers or attract readers, it is almost impossible to sign a contract. So for the next book, I suggest the author think carefully. If he is still writing a Douluo 1 fan, 1. I suggest the Tang Chen period. The original works of this time period have less descriptions, and there are not particularly many people who have written about it. There is a lot of room for manipulation. The third book can also link to the Tang San period, learn from Sanshao, and write a Douluo series of his own. The disadvantage is that there are few reference materials in the original work, and the plot of the original work about this period has been changed many times. You need to design the plot independently, which is difficult and easy to write. 2. It is recommended that Tang San be written at the same time. The advantage is that there are original works for reference. You only need to add some original plots yourself. It is the simplest and most common choice. However, the disadvantage is that there are too many people writing and the homogeneity is relatively serious. The competition is fierce. It is difficult to get out of the circle without your own ideas. 3. It is recommended that this book should be overhauled or republished after revision. The advantage is that it has been written so much, but it is still not ideal. If it is revised, it may be better and it will not be worse. The disadvantage is that it is difficult to correct if it is written too much, and it may be in vain if you repost it. 4. After this book is written, writing a story that takes place many years after the protagonist becomes a god can inspire some old readers to read it. The summary has its own advantages and disadvantages, and it is just a personal opinion. The specifics depend on the author's own thoughts.

It's very beautiful and the writing is very good. It's much better than most works. I feel that the three views are very correct.

#Character ability panel · Ye Chuan --- ## 1. Basic information * **Name**: Ye Chuan * **Identity**: Teacher at Notting College / Lord Protector of the Tiandou Empire * **Martial spirit**: Silverline Orchid (Highly enhanced origin·composite plant martial spirit) * **Current Soul Power Level**: Level 90 * **Cultivation System**: * Earth Vein Absorption * Moon Flower Nourishing * Vitality Transformation * Meridian Great Circulation Meditation * Life Pill (Inner Alchemy Method) --- ## 2. Soul Ring Configuration (Current) | Serial Number | Years | Soul Beasts/Plant Sources | Core Direction | | ---- | --- | --------- | --------- | | First Soul Ring | Hundred Years | Leyline Spore Ginseng | Earth Veins·Restoration | | Second Soul Ring | Seven Hundred Years | Moonlight Vine | Moonlight Nourishing | | Third Soul Ring | Thousand Years | —— | Group Vitality | | The Fourth Soul Ring | Five Thousand Years | Seven-stringed Earth Dragon Vine | Vibration/Cutting of Qi and Blood | | The Fifth Soul Ring | —— | Nether Moon Jade Gusana | Moonflower Cultivation | | The Sixth Soul Ring | —— | Empty Valley Bell Orchid | Spiritual Nourishment | | The Seventh Soul Ring | —— | Ten Thousand Thousand Silk Dragon-Blooded Banyan Tree | Compilation/Growth | | The Eighth Soul Ring | One Hundred Thousand Years | Sacrifice of the Blue Silver King | Rule Level Life Transformation | | The Ninth Soul Ring | —— | Tentative | —— | --- ## 3. List of core soul skills ### The first soul skill · **Ley Vein Star Lin** * Absorb earth vein energy * Release spores or condense life pills * **Effect**: * Restore injuries significantly * Continuously nourish the body * Improve the upper limit of physical fitness --- ### The second soul skill · **Moonlight Sweet Rain** * Absorb and store moonlight * Condensate into edible nectar * **Effect**: * Repair internal injuries * Stabilize Qi and blood * Assist in training --- ### The third soul skill · **Jinglin Healing World** * Absorb the vitality of earth veins and plants * Expand the vitality aperture * **Effect**: * Area group healing * Continuously restore soul power and vitality --- ### The fourth soul skill · **Praise of Life** * High-frequency sound waves stimulate blood * **Effect**: * Strengthen the efficiency of physical exercise * Silverweed obtains high-frequency cutting ability --- ### The fifth soul skill · **Condensing Moon Frost** * Deeply compresses and saves moonlight * Injects plant fruits * **Effect**: * Accelerates plant growth * Cultivation of nourishing spiritual plants (such as bay fruit) --- ### The sixth soul skill · **Spirit Healing Breeze** * The target of action extends from qi and blood to the spirit * **Effect**: * Nourishes the soul * Stabilizes spiritual power * It has suppressive damage to those with weak souls --- ### The seventh soul skill · **All things in the world** * Large-scale activation of the origin of Silver Thread Orchid * **Effect**: * Super-fast growth * High-density organization * The core foundation of planting armor and martial arts --- ### The eighth soul skill (one hundred thousand years) · **Yinhua Sky Curtain · Ten Thousand Flowers Realm** * Expand the field of vitality rules * **Effect**: * Reflect enemy soul skills * Absorb foreign soul power * Transform into vitality and feed yourself back #### Derived soul skills · **Flower in the Mirror** * With the help of mirrors, water and other media * Achieve position shifting and spatial dislocation --- ## 4. Self-created/born derived abilities ### ◼ Pill of Life · Born System * Inner elixir-level life core * Supports high-level soul skills and rule calculations #### Native soul skills * **Life replacement · Nirvana rebirth** * Position replacement with high-vitality plants/items * Used for escape, rebirth, and life preservation --- ### ◼ Combat derived soul skills * **Grass Binding** * Strengthen the toughness of plants for control and defense * **Life Deprivation** * Reversely absorb life force * Strong effect on plants and soul beasts * **Lingxi Yufeng** * The fourth + sixth soul skill joint mutation * Shock the blood and soul at the same time * **Silver Orchid Bloom** * Release vitality to the limit * Break through physical limitations in a short period of time * **Shanhe Sheji Seal** * Fully activate the earth veins * Will affect the trend of mountains and rivers * Belong to strategic level means --- ## 5. Normal combat configuration * Plant armor (defense/increase) * Plant weapon (cutting/ Run through) * Silver Thread Orchid establishment field * Leyline × Moonlight × Vitality three systems in parallel --- ## 6. Summary of ability positioning * **Combat positioning**: · Earth Veins · Moonlight · Meridians · Inner Alchemy · Plant Civilization

After carefully reading the content of the first forty chapters, I feel that the author should be more comfortable writing martial arts, land reclamation, and fantasy.

As the title indicates, I also know people who are familiar with it, and I can be considered an old bookworm who reads Douluo fan fiction. As the author said in his introduction, he wants to follow the ordinary stream, the scholar stream, and the third stream of education. At present, it is considered a success, but the shortcomings are also obvious. That is, the overall progress is fast and slow. From the first volume, it can be felt that the author wants to write similar academic and humanistic books such as "Blue Silver Grass Strategy", "Ordinary Soul Master", "Ultimate Terror Beast", "Defying Gangzi", "Self-struggle", "Life Scientist" and "Tang San is Different". So the overall narrative is slow-paced and unfolds slowly. The protagonist comes up with herbal tea and raises rabbits to improve his life. Again, he observes plants in reality as a reference for his own martial spirit. Thus, the character of the researcher of the protagonist is demonstrated in disguise. But the problem with the author is that he doesn't have a good grasp of the rhythm (a common problem for novices). Because the protagonist is an Aboriginal, many plots in this book must be foreshadowed around this identity to bring him into the story. This also exposes your early mistakes. For example, the most criticized thing is that the protagonist only awakens after more than 40 chapters. Because you need to create a protagonist with the drive to work hard to obtain innate soul power. It was hunting and fighting for water that laid the foundation for the village's problems, and then it was revealed that the cultivation system was a soul master. (To be honest, if your name hadn't been Douluo, I would have thought it was an original novel like some fantasy fairy tale.) Then they did some hybridization or something, but there was no result. When it came to getting some grass, they got the soul power blue silver grass and wolf howling grass, and then they got the hybrid soul power plant, silver thread orchid (it seems to be this, the protagonist Wuhun). But after spending so much effort, the innate soul power is only half a level. I guess you want to engage in some kind of mortal flow, but look at the true spirit in front of you and it has been an experiment for so long. Is half a level appropriate? It's cool to be completely covered up by you. As long as you make a patch and say that the protagonist is afraid of excessive exposure of the innate soul power, you can use that mental power plug-in to cut off the soul power and pretend to be half a level of innate soul power. (I remember Tang San did this in the original work.) Then came the academy chapter. The most speechless thing is that you didn't write the expansion when it was time to write. In the academy chapter, you can explain in detail how the protagonist reacts to the environment, then check the information and start to further build the mimetic environment. In this way, the character of the protagonist can be established, connected from life, and the specific usage of the plug-in can also be explained. (The mental power plug-in and the identity of the Dou Po Anti-Inflammation time traveler are similar, but they are not mentioned in detail later.) Then he will further explain how to achieve from half-level soul power to tenth level soul power. (Just like the male protagonist of Blue Silver Grass Strategy) As a result, you just skipped this side and went directly to level ten. . . Then it's level ten to level twenty-nine. Next is the mercenary chapter. To put it bluntly, Douluo is all about fists. If you want to prove that a growing genius is not worth investing in, and your protagonist's growth is too abnormal, there is no problem. So let's talk about how the protagonist hides his identity, how he intrigues with the mercenaries, and then hunts for the soul ring with their help. . . . But to put it bluntly, you already have a disguised identity. Just expose your talent and let the mercenary group who wants to invest in you help you hunt for souls. It's such a big circle. As expected again, after explaining, he jumped directly from level 30 to level 40 to hunt some vines or something. Optimized the martial spirit. But this is completely changing the protagonist from a scholar to a guy who relies on those spiritual grass plug-ins to optimize and improve. Back to the academy later, the theory proposed here was not elaborated, nor did it echo the previous sense. After all, the theory of earth veins, how the protagonist observed it, how it was obtained, and how it was predicted was not explained at all. Later, we finally came to the real beginning of the book, and Tang San appeared. (I recommend that book friends who come later also start reading from here.) In a completely different start from the original work. In the details, we can see the changes compared to the original work under the butterfly effect of the protagonist. Including Su Yuntao's explanation, Old Jack's attitude, and Tang Hao directly pinching his neck and asking Tang San if he was his son... In just a few words, the impact of the protagonist is outlined. (It's completely okay to write here. If you start with this, it's no problem at all) Then there are the different combinations of martial arts between Tang San and the original work, as well as those methods of training that the protagonist can transform and improve as soon as Tang San mentions them. And the changes in Notting City seen from Tang San Xiaowu's contact. This is where I reluctantly made a point. In addition, Oscar's choice of soul ring and the construction of the sausage house also used the original sausage stand in disguise, which illustrates the protagonist's insight. Then Tang Hao sacrificed himself to give up the soul bone to the protagonist. It can be said that the beginning of your article should actually start directly with Tang San's appearance, thus bringing out the real protagonist. Just like later Gangzi submitted a letter of challenge, and then Tang San and the others faced off against a completely different Shrek, it was quite a surprise here. People are even more curious about what the protagonist has done in the past three years to correct Gangzi's personality. Then he very cleverly used the help of Tang San's soul hunt to reveal Xiao Wu's identity in advance, and logically let Tang San and the others eat the fairy grass. It also introduced the soul core and inner elixir, further demonstrating the protagonist's research ability. Then there are the competitions later. The martial arts and fighting methods of those disciples are indeed pretty good. Including the chapters where Tang San and his team worked together to defeat the evil-eyed white tiger. As well as Gangzi's personality correction, he recognized his own doctrine, accepted the protagonist as his teacher in public, and vowed to destroy the wolf bandits. I can see that you really want to correct the garbage characters in the original work. It's another critical year. It's the brotherhood between Dai Mubai and Ma Hongjun, and it's something that awakens Feng Xiaotian. Then what was surprising was that Lao Rabbit knew how to avoid its sharp edges and did not go to the Spirit Hall. This is not bad. Then there is the chapter on the construction of the principality. As I said before, a lot of ink was spent on the construction of the principality, and it turned into a Machiavellian article. According to Douluo's drool-worthy average IQ and extreme political awareness, it is completely unnecessary. But the part about those families' considerations is okay. But I made an old mistake again. Rhythm and narrative perspective. The replica construction of the two eyes of ice and fire, which can also prove the protagonist's theory, has not been developed, and it is entirely due to Tang San and the others. Then there was no explanation of what was given to Ning Fengzhi and what kind of martial soul supplement theory he had. And the latest soul power theory here does not explain the source of inspiration It gives the impression that the real protagonist now is actually Tang San. I feel that you want to use Tang San's changes compared to the original work to set off the protagonist Tang San's personality modification. Indeed, the advantage of your book is that compared to the original work, the overall IQ is online. But the balance is lost when it comes to emphasis. Just like Tang San mentioned the concept of body skills at the beginning, it would be great if your protagonist could directly complete a complete set of physical training. Just like in the Eye of Ice and Fire, through the construction, the meditation field can be imitated by the protagonist, but Tang San was shocked. After all, the protagonist's initial thoughts and ideas already made Tang San doubt whether the protagonist was a time traveler. It would be fun if the protagonist imitated the two eyes of ice and fire, and also developed Tai Chi Furthermore, the martial arts system for mortals without soul power can also be built by the protagonist. Tang San could be a participant, or even a source of inspiration. But it cannot be a builder. How to reflect the creativity of the protagonist. Therefore, whether it is the construction of the Ice and Fire Eyes or the discussion of political affairs, it is slightly unsatisfactory. The author can spend all his time writing about how the protagonist thinks about the administrative system. However, it can still be seen that the author is making progress. It's just that you feel like your mind is too easily diverted. The pace is fast and slow You can either go slow or you can really go slow from beginning to end. A style similar to the original version of "Blue Silver Grass Strategy" with a complete explanation Or a fast-paced full-length explanation. But it's really unbearable that it's fast and slow. I hope you can get rid of this problem in the next book and unify the rhythm. One of your advantages is that you can write at a slow pace, but you lack explosive points. You also said that the next book will be a time traveler, so I hope there will be more showmanship and less foreshadowing. This way the rhythm picks up naturally. (The above is my humble opinion. After all, it is because the author has written hundreds of thousands of words in vain and his character is still acceptable (other people may have made the cut earlier), so I would like to comment)