Douluo Peershi: I Can See My Own Autobiography

What you mean is that the protagonist became the number one in the second grade by virtue of an ordinary martial spirit that is not even as good as a low-level martial spirit. It was even more frustrating to watch later. He was embarrassed and simulated like this. For those who didn't know, he thought it was a beggar's suffering diary. After reading chapter 20, he couldn't bear it anymore.

I believe that those who have read a little bit, or just read the title of the novel, will know what kind of plug-in this is, which is a legacy left by countless time. There are countless timelines after death, and currently there is no power that can resist Tang San, either overtly or covertly. He is always jumping around with Huo Yuhao, and Tang San has noticed him. I don't know how the author deliberately ignored this. Besides, Tang San had already attacked him several times in the county, and he kept licking him. It was so damn disgusting to see. Take the initiative to avenge Huo Yuhao and become a nanny. On the surface, he says he doesn't care, but in fact, he is really a dog-licker. Even with such a big trick, you still want to taint Huo Yuhao like a nanny. I doubt you can come up with anything new. Just like the plot, follow the plot His talent is not as good as Huo Yuhao's, you have to know him. With Xu Sanshi Beibei and the protagonist surrounding Huo Yuhao, I read a fanfic. I don't say how sophisticated it is, but you can't make people look so frustrated. You look like this now. It seems that you are not suitable for Huo Yuhao, and you have to follow him to lower the level. And just keep your level up and follow Huo Yuhao, nothing will change. Jiang Nannan was still taken through the back door, and Ma Xiaotao was still robbed to the Holy Spirit Cult. Tang Ya looks like she's going to become an evil soul master. It doesn't make any difference whether or not you are there. You are licking Huo Yuhao while not caring about these things. What are you doing? Or to set off Huo Yuhao.，        ，，， Even if the system is added, I still think that Huo Yuhao has better talent. What are you going to write? And the preface does not match the postscript, which is a bit like AI.

What a mess of writing. I wanted to leave Shrek before, but ended up clinging to it. Now it's getting more and more involved. Shrek is getting whiter and whiter as he writes about it. I can't even think of how the author could write about running away later. The part about spiritual metal is even more funny. I thought that if I went to the Haotian Sect of the Sun and Moon Empire, I would not be able to touch porcelain. With a hammer, I would make a spiritual metal by forging iron. I would also mess up my cloak. If the buffs were stacked, others would not touch porcelain. It was so funny. Not to mention the forging process of sensing the characteristics of metal and hammer, is it difficult to make a machine tool and add a mental power amplification and soul power amplification device? 🤔 In this way, if Haotian Sect wants to touch porcelain, it can only force it. Also for this plot, delete the protagonist, give this ability to Huo Yuhao, and slightly modify the details to make it more reasonable 🤔 When can you, the author, write the protagonist's own plot?

After reading about 20 chapters, the protagonist is too frustrated. Either let the protagonist accumulate food at the bottom and slowly become the king, or he will have fun. There is no need to stay in Shrek Academy. I also saw some people saying that the male protagonist and the protagonist group are suppressed like this. Letting the protagonist sneak in is forcibly completing the plot 🤓🤓

In the latest chapters, I answered every question Wang Yan had. I was speechless and kept talking about everything.

Not at all, I can only see Huo Yuhao's revenge, and the rest of it is as confusing as Tang San's upper body.

This simulated gold hand, the author deliberately did not follow the protagonist group, knowing that he has no talent, and the simulated things are of no use.

Why is this author so fond of belittling the protagonist and exalting Huo Yuhao? He has done this in several books in a row. If you like to lick Huo Yuhao so much, why not just let Huo Yuhao be the protagonist, or just make the protagonist a woman and let Huo Yuhao play the lead role? A person who is number one in the grade outside the academy must say that his martial arts is poor and his innate soul power is very poor. Why should you be the number one in the grade outside if you are so poor? Do you really think Shrek's admissions standards are shitty? With your big face, you know how to lick Huo Yuhao?

Find a way to add a sickle martial spirit to ensure that the protagonist is invincible

Has this book continued to be so stressful? I looked at it and found that even though a hammer spirit is not very powerful, why did it evolve once and say that it evolved from an ordinary hammer to a low-level spirit? Are you exaggerating? Do you mean that the protagonist, a spirit that is not even a low-level spirit, won the first place in their session? Even if you say it's okay to evolve to an intermediate level, or evolve from an ordinary one to a low-level one, I'm not sure if there are any standards for this, but anyway, I feel like I'm being pressed, and it feels very unreasonable. After all, even an ordinary hammer is considered a low-level martial spirit.

I feel that the protagonist is not a time traveler, and the theoretical system of Shrek Academy is pure and simple. If you come from time-travel, you can make hybrid rice, but you still can't become a master. After all, if Yu Xiaogang can become you, it won't be too bad, right?

It's getting worse and worse. After arriving in the Sun and Moon Empire, I could no longer understand what the protagonist wanted to do.

It looks good at the moment But I have read a book about Naruto After completing the last words, you will be rewarded A new will will be refreshed one month after completion Then it will be refreshed and kept repeating and waiting for the last words. Keep refreshing It has been repeated too many times and I don't feel it.

It's very toxic at the beginning. The protagonist in the autobiography is a brainless idiot. He only cares about the word count for the sake of word count. I don't want to read anymore.

Otherwise, if Huo Yuhao is not made into a girl, the relationship between the protagonist and Huo Yuhao will be so good when he grows up, as if he was given 😥

The author added a lot of private stuff, but it's quite interesting. It's just a common problem with simulation writing. Each simulation magnifies a certain aspect of the protagonist's thinking, which looks a bit stiff.

Your thinking is clear. Is the title correct? The protagonist can definitely join the Tang Sect in the early stage to earn those skills, but the result is always bad. I don't understand it. I have to complain hard. I can't stand it when I see this. I'm going!

Summon Shen Nong, can Shen Nong save me?

The more I write, the more boring it becomes. I might as well change the protagonist to Huo Yuhao. If I can't turn his mother into a little Huo mother, she won't become gay as I watch it.

There may be some problems with the author's writing style, but it's not serious. There may be a little lack of imagination, but it's not the most important thing. There is no random writing, but the emotional line is written in a subtle way. I always feel that Huo Yuhao is the heroine. The most important thing for me is that I realized today that the Purple Demon Eyes of Dou Er, Dou Yi and even Dou San are not of the same level. In the past, I only remembered that Xuantian Kung cut off the Eight Meridians of the Qi Meridian. Only now when I saw what the author posted, I realized that the highest level of the Purple Demon Eyes had been cut. This is really a joke. 😄 The main meridian technique has been cut off. As a result, the accompanying moves have also been cut off. No wonder I have never heard of Guanyin Tears. Only those concealment weapons are spread.

Every time I write about the sun, moon and oranges, the plot starts to get weird.

The front is fine, but the back is finished👎

What do I think? Is it true that some people say that writing fan fiction requires paying the original author?

We are cleaning up the Sun and Moon Empire again. Hot knowledge. The Sun and Moon Empire has the most peasant uprisings among the four empires. How about free awakening of martial souls?

The duchess is gone, Dai Huabin is crippled, Dai Luoli takes over, and the Duke is traumatized. Xiao Huo's revenge is successful, and the subsequent plot is not important.

The mutual damage between the protagonists of Beibei Xu Sanshi is the only interesting thing written. The other data are inconsistent and contradictory. The writing is flat and straightforward. There is no emotional line. What makes it interesting for me is the mutual damage between offense and defense.

The recent plot is weird. Is the author's imagination as exhausted as Archer's?

The author has read this and the previous book, and the protagonist and Huo Yuhao both look like they are giving. If it doesn't work, Huo Yuhao should be changed into Little Huo Niang in the next book.

After Chapter 130, there is no outline. Just a hammer here and a stick here and there, whatever you write down, no main line, no goal, just dawdling around.

I wish there were more scenes in the autobiography