Douluo: Xiao Xiao's Peerless Life Remake Plan

There are a bunch of free chapters about cultivation. I will make some comments, list some things, and finally write a few sentences about the plot. I rush to put it on the shelf and find out why there are no results. The readers don't know what they have read. How can they pay for it?

On the whole, if you don't mind the gender change, I think it can be regarded as Dou Er's best novel. I guess it's pretty good without the plot of changing the marriage, but there are too many early settings that some book lovers may not be able to stand. But it can be seen that the author is also a master of abstract entertainment 😁

There are really few articles about Xiao Xiao as the main character or the first heroine. I finally found another one and I must give it a thumbs up.

After writing and writing, it turned into a training paper, "Soul Ring Matching Instruction Manual", "Power System and Protagonist Cheating Outline". The real plot part has become pitiful.

If you don't read enough, it's easy to get bored with the book. Try to read it as soon as it's updated If you are interested, you can help the author to promote it. There may not be enough Douluo around the author Thank you all, hey.

Author, you wrote the first hundred or so chapters very well, but why do you get more and more crooked in the later chapters, with the perspective focused on people other than the protagonist? Tang San, do those God Kings, the affairs of the God Realm, and the pattern of the continent make sense to the current protagonist? Is it meaningful for a little soul king? We came to see Xiao Xiao, to see Tie Tie, to see Ping Hezhong slap in the face and pretend to be cool, not to see Tang San and the others. The feeling in the next one hundred or so chapters is that I am too weak to do anything. I want to take care of everything until the end, but I can't take care of anything. Not only that, Chuanfengruyu also lacks one of the most important hidden logic in the novel: [Lack of sense of security]. The current protagonist can't do anything and is at risk of death, which makes people feel unhappy and depressed.

The original rhythm and writing style are completely destroyed. It always feels like you are writing an outline now.

The Holy Spirit Cult has been strengthened too much. The protagonist improves his own side through operations, while the villain is strengthened without doing anything.

From the flaws discovered in Chapter 153, why are the following chapters chapters of unclear meaning? The flaws are already very clear and you have given a very clear solution direction. What are you doing if you don't solve the problem? Given a problem, and said that there is a solution to a certain place, but the next step is not to go to this place to solve the problem, but to say "Okay, let's go shopping" 😅 The previous rhythm is so urgent that dark clouds are over the city, and when the camera turns, you are acting in daily life. You can at least put the previous question to an end before you can continue to answer the daily questions. You are so overwhelmed that you don't know what the world is 😅

Don't write about dwarf, there's no need. At present, the writing does not feel the cuteness of Chaozi. On the contrary, both the pros and cons use this to tease the protagonist. It's better to grow taller soon.

Traveling through the past and directly finding Huo Gua, what happened to Huo Gua in the early stage when he lacked love and affection? After giving him some love and using him as bait, he was hoisted up and then given a lesson. Meimei gained the power of a god king and was not afraid of being disobedient. Huo Gua was a very well-behaved boy.

1. Weaken the protagonist's creation power, make it defective, and cancel the overly powerful extreme attributes 2. The Sun and Moon Empire has been greatly strengthened, and villagers have shared the battle armor technology with the Sun and Moon Empire 3. The evil soul masters have not developed and will be killed (the Holy Spirit Cult is not yet the state religion, and the evil soul masters and the soul masters of the Sun and Moon Empire are obviously hostile)

For the time being, it's pretty good to watch, and there's no inexplicable enmity or hostility between the characters in the original work. Instead, Wang Dong and Huo Gua were strengthened at an epic level and became their companions. It's interesting, but a little short.

The writing is quite good, but there are too many settings now. The settings are all set for several days in a row. The plot develops too slowly. When writing the settings, it is best to compress it into one day.

I felt that the author's idea was very interesting, so I wrote an idea✍ The core idea: As the second martial spirit, it does not have the same spiritual path as the first martial spirit (representatives of spiritual races such as the Evil-Eyed Tyrant, Sea Princess, and Three-Eyed Demon Ape) Overlay; If you avoid the role positioning of the ten ferocious beasts (Emperor, Evil Emperor, Ice Emperor, etc.), Select the best solution from the two dimensions of attribute completion and racial strength: strive to expand new attributes on the existing basis with each change, and ultimately achieve an almighty god-level existence. The first transformation: Tianmeng Ice Silkworm, transformed from a cocoon into a moth (spirit + ice) Dual attributes of spirit and ice, millions of years of cultivation make its spiritual power unparalleled, but its combat effectiveness is weak. The ten golden patterns provide the foundation for subsequent transformation; it is the prerequisite for the communication between Huo Yuhao's first martial soul, Spirit Eyes, and his second martial soul, Tianmeng. The second change: Star Anise Ice Grass + Fiery Apricot Tree (ice and fire come from the same origin, gaining plant attributes) With the intersection of extreme cold and extreme heat of the Ice and Fire Eyes, the two grass jelly grasses are fused at the same time, penetrating the foundation of ice and fire. From then on, the water and fire are invulnerable to all poisons, the physical strength is greatly improved, and the meridians are expanded, laying a solid foundation for the subsequent accommodation of multiple attributes. Third change: Thunder Hell Vine (Thunder → Destruction) or Golden Tree (Light + Life) Choose A (combat outbreak): A top existence in the plant system, possessing the legacy of the Thunder God's blood, absorbing the power of thunder to improve cultivation (but excessive compression of the thunder of destruction will cause Self-destruction), it is difficult to break through the plane suppression (by passing through, you can revive the blood of the God of Thunder and master the catastrophe of destruction); Choose B (survival assistance): Shrek Academy's guardian core, which has the dual attributes of extreme light and extreme life, can release the light of the sea god, and finally evolves into the life core of Douluo Continent. The fourth change: Silver Moon Wolf King (spirit + wind, water, earth, fire, thunder, light, darkness, silver bloodline) Has seven attributes, has strong mental power, and contains thin silver bloodline (corresponding to the silver dragon series). If you can complete the seven basic elements at once, the attribute pool will be instantly expanded, and you will have great freedom in subsequent choices. Fifth transformation: Dark Demon Tiger (evil + darkness + thunder + wind + time + space) or Three-Eyed Golden Tiger (Light + Fire + Spirit/Destiny, Golden Bloodline) Choose A: The white tiger is mutated by the power of the evil god, and has six attributes (wind, thunder, evil balance, scarcity of time and space). It improves its strength by devouring other soul beasts, and can create black holes to drag opponents into different spaces to force childbirth. A life-and-death duel between the yearly bodies; Choice B: The Emperor's auspicious beast has the ultimate dual attributes of fire and light. It is equipped with the power of luck and the eye of destiny, which can increase the chance of the local soul beast breaking through the bottleneck. It contains golden dragon bloodline (which can form the prototype of gold and silver dual blood with the silver bloodline of the fourth transformation). The sixth change: Demonic Great White Shark, Demonic Killer Whale, Deep Sea Demonic Whale (Ocean Overlord, pushing the water attribute to the extreme) Choose A: The island-protecting beast of Poseidon Island, possessing the Demonic Shark Domain, which can control the surrounding sea water to greatly improve itself; Choice B: Fierce Cruel and murderous, he has the killer whale domain, full of violence and madness, which can interfere with the mind and soul; Select C (recommended): The strongest overlord of the ocean, with the magic whale domain, which can control ocean currents, air pressure and thunder and lightning, covering hundreds of miles; its unique devouring ability can break the conventional age limit, and has the potential to transform into a dragon and become a god. Seventh transformation: Emerald Demon Bird, Blond Lion Mastiff, Golden Beamon (natural enemies of dragons, gain advantage against dragons) Select A: Extreme speed, likes to eat the brains of soul beasts; Select B: Top-notch Beast King, ultimate strength + dominance of the field (the longer the battle, the stronger the combat power), and is not affected by the dragon's power; Choose C: The bloodline of ancient mythical beasts, feeds on dragons, is the nemesis of dragon-bloodline soul beasts, and can evolve into purple gold Behemoth. Eighth Change: Titan Ape (Titan + Power + Gravity Domain) or Azure Dragon (Dragon + Water, Wind and Thunder + Slowness Domain) Choose A: An ancient alien species, inheriting the Titan bloodline, with unparalleled strength and gravity domain (can be superimposed with the power system); Choice B: An ancient alien species, the Azure Bull Python evolves, with a stable dragon bloodline in the body, possessing the slowness domain and the ability to control wind, rain, thunder and lightning. Deep Sea Demonic Whale? Azure Dragon? Golden Behemoth? Ah this 🤔 The ninth change:Mountain Dragon King (earth + gravity field) or Ice Dragon King + Fire Dragon King (god-level ice and fire have the same origin) Choose A (absorb the Mountain Dragon King Trunk bone): Control the power of the earth, possess the ultimate power and gravity field, and reach the top of strength and defense; Choose B (absorb the remains of the Ice and Fire Dragon King): control the ultimate ice and ultimate fire, echoing the second transformation and pushing the homology of ice and fire to the Yin and Yang. The nine dragon kings are all descendants of the Dragon God's courtiers. Their bloodline attributes can greatly stimulate the gold and silver potential in the body, allowing them to leap to the level of the Dragon God. Tenth Transformation: Yin-Yang Chaos Bird → Cocoon of Chaos (Ultimate Transformation) The ancient bloodline was bred from the remaining chaotic Yin-Yang energy when the world was first born, and can evolve all things. Finally,all the attributes accumulated in the first nine transformations, as well as the potential conflict between the gold and silver bloodline and the seventh transformation on the dragon clan, were melted into one furnace. Beyond binary opposition, mutual generation and mutual restraint, return to nature, and turn into a cocoon of chaos. The cocoon contains infinite possibilities - it can transform into a moth, transform into a dragon, or evolve into any living creature. The starting point is a cocoon, which can transform all things with one thought, and evolve infinitely; the end point is also a cocoon, which can also return to chaos and return to the origin.

Let's focus on the plot. There are too many settings, which makes the reading experience poor.

Why can't Xiao Xiao's father be called Xiao Yan, and why can't her mother be called Cai Lin 😁? There's no need to work hard on her own.

Why do I feel like the plot is about to go crazy recently? Does the author have an outline? Douluo in the original book is weaker than Sun and Moon in all aspects. I feel that Tang San strengthened Sun and Moon too early, and the talent of human beings has not been developed, and there is no chance of catching up. If Xiaoxiao hadn't saved a wave of Mu En, he would have been wiped out in one fell swoop. And when I saw the evil soul master rioting, I thought of another fan author I saw before who wholesaled dozens of titles to Shrek and directly suppressed the entire Douluo Continent 😅

The content of the protagonist's divine test is to cultivate a sufficient number of main gods, in other words, investment. Those who have already invested or have clear investment intentions should be Huo Yuhao and Wang Dong, Dou Er, and who else has the potential to become a god to invest in? Ji Juechen, the sword maniac, lacks talent but his talent is amazing enough. If he improves his talent, he should be able to reach the limit and become a god in one go. The normal cultivation of Ye Guyi, the descendant of the angel, may reach the limit. If he can find a way to restore the angelic throne, it should be considered a guarantee. The Snow Emperor's transformation and reconstruction will not be a big problem if everything goes well and she can become the ultimate again. Finding a way to solve the restriction that the soul beast cannot become a god should help her complete the final breakthrough. Other people feel that Li Cheng Shen has gone through a lot of research, or the scenes are not outstanding enough. Can the author reveal a little bit about who else is worth investing in?

There are too many settings, which has affected the main line of promotion. Setting this thing is not suitable for writing in the main text.

The quality of the Douluo fan novel itself is much lower than that of other themes. The writing of this novel is good. If it is about other themes, it is at least good grass. When it comes to Douluo fan novels, it is even more like fairy grass.

I saw Chapter 232, and I felt that everything written in the past was quite good, but from the time when the Holy Spirit Cult invaded Xingluo, I didn't feel anything at first, but the more I read, the more and more something was wrong. What I really felt was not very good was from Qiankun Qingqing Valley. I felt so abstract, and I was trapped in it for too long. If you say a month or two, forget it, if you think about two and a half years, all the time you have worked hard for in the past has been wasted. If you feel better, it will be gone. All of a sudden, I don't want to read it at all.

Is there a Douluo group? I also want to write Douluo, I have some ideas. No one writes about Chong Wuhun

Everyone, can you still read what I'm writing now? Is there a plot? It won't be a long story about settings and training. I don't know if I really came to teach me how to practice. Now I have seen Qiankun Qingqinggu, and the evaluation is not as good as San Shao. Although San Shao is full of loopholes and inconsistent settings, there is nothing wrong with it in that the core of the novel is storytelling.

Xiao Xiao: Emperor Tian, ​​only I, the Phoenix God King, can lead the revival of the soul beasts and reshape the (dragon) (delimitation) Phoenix God Realm. The future god realm is the Beast God Realm and the Phoenix God Realm. I, Xiao Xiao, allow you to become a god, and I, Xiao Xiao, will grant you a divine status and restore your divine power. Come on, Ditian, be my mazai, ah, son!

He is the best Douluo fan this year.

Is this a transformation essay? Is it a single or a hundred?

By the way, is the world level in Dionysus higher than that in Douluo Continent? Because in the novel, Lie Yan breaks through to the level of a second-level god.

666, I was thinking about the gender change in the introduction, which turned Xiao Xiao into Xiao Xiao, female into male, and I was very disappointed when I found out that they were Lily.

I feel like the author was a little hasty when writing. If the original plot develops, all the nine rings should contract with Long Jiuzi. Later, he used Dragon Valley to break through to the god level.