Immortality Starts from the Paradise of Cave Heaven

The front part looks great, and the main character's plug-ins are also okay. But after the clone, all the stories became dull and boring, so it stopped at the extraterritorial chapter. Starting from Yuanying, the protagonist's methods become simpler, and his fighting methods tend to be mediocre. Although it becomes more difficult to write as you get to higher levels, it is still a bit too perfunctory. It is a pity that there is no heroine. I only practice without enjoying it. I don't know what the practice is and I have no goal. Despite this, the cultivation and rise of the spiritual grass in the early stage is still very exciting, and the sect and Tianluo sea area are also developing steadily later. The late upgrade of the big boss Fengxian was a failure. Instead of forcing the continuation to the cave, it is better to kill them in the incarnation and rearrange the main enemies. Even having an Immortal Master would be better than this. I hope the author will continue to work hard and write better in the next book.

I just saw it on the shelves, and there are a lot of typos. It belongs to the portable genre and is not a pure farming novel. The proportion of farming is too small to satisfy the farming complex in the gene. The protagonist often passively participates in all kinds of bad things, although in the end it is the protagonist who reaps the benefits. The hang-up is too high. With the four major functions plus the Immortality of the Soul, you can write a book on its own using only one. There is too much to write, which affects the fun and rhythm. The advantage is that the current character's IQ is online, and the protagonist is decisive in killing and can be watched, which is better than those on many rankings that suddenly release poison.

It's a really good book, the rhythm, plot, stretch and suspense are well-proportioned. Can't stop. 👍👍👍

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With the fifth level of Nascent Soul cultivation, you can exert tens of thousands of kilograms of strength just by raising your hand. . . . . . This. . . . . I can still understand when you talk about ten thousand kilograms for foundation building. The strength of the fifth level of Nascent Soul Body Cultivation is only this 😰😰😰

The elixir at the qi training level actually requires more than 70 Chinese medicinal materials. Why, a full banquet between Manchu and Han Dynasties 😅

I really think it's well written, but it's still a clichéd issue of realm. As long as a cat or a dog gets to know the protagonist, his or her cultivation level will skyrocket. If there are resources, forget it, and those without resources will automatically improve their qualifications. I think this buff is common in many books. 😰

Let's talk briefly: Some plots feel like they cannot stand up to scrutiny, or the early settings are not convincing enough, causing readers to be unconvinced by the plot. Just like this villain who seizes the body, building the foundation is just a small amount of spiritual consciousness. Isn't seizing the body generally a unique skill of the Yin God or Nascent Soul? Or some soul. The protagonist also practices qi, alchemy, sword practice, physical training, spiritual training, and weapon training. Later, it seems that he needs to learn formations and manage his power... It's really too complicated. It was hard to fight in the middle stage of foundation building and in the late stage. After fighting back and forth, I finally won after a lot of hard work. It's obvious that the author wants to make the plot exciting, but shouldn't the protagonist look like the protagonist? With one spiritual attack, one sword move will lower you to a higher level in an instant. Isn't this just a bit more refreshing... I don't feel the pressure I should have at all. Although I don't agree with many of the settings, most of the plots are diligent and detailed. I don't know how it will be written later 😁

The writing and pig's feet are good, but the formula is too old. With this alchemy path, any elixir or elixir is hard to find. Different pills must be taken at each stage. When the pig's trotters have not reached the level of cultivation, the foundation building pill, gold knot pill, and baby knot pill are all kept secret, and the medicinal materials are hard to find. Once the pig's foot passes this stage, thousands of monks of the same level will pop out. And there are many casual cultivators. This setting is really too old to stand.

Now let me tell you what you think after seeing the transformation. The writing is pretty good, and the combat system, setting, and world view are pretty good. It feels like the plot stops the self from upgrading after having a clone. The trumpet is no longer allowed to use gold fingers, so the feeling of farming and upgrading is no longer there, and it has completely become a relic style.

I feel useless after reading 200 chapters. The monks inside don't do their job properly, don't practice well, and just run around outside every day. The three Nascent Soul Sects are no good either. The Demon Sect has been sieved in its own territory. It took a long time for them to realize that they were causing big troubles. The Golden Core Foundation Builder inside is wasting time outside all day long. What a waste. Pig's feet are so awesome, even one percent has not been developed, and the resources on it have not been used up, and they are still looking for resources everywhere.

The protagonist enters Taoism through martial arts! It is not mixed spiritual roots, nor false spiritual roots. It has no spiritual roots at all and is a pure mortal. Therefore, the author arranged for the protagonist to have a "gold finger" to have a paradise, so that he can enter the innate world with a mortal body. Warriors are innately able to sense spiritual energy, which can be seen from the descriptions of many martial arts novels. The author writes that warriors enter the innate world, and then switch to practicing immortal magic. Written from this perspective, this is the real way for mortals to cultivate immortality! Han Li has four spiritual roots in Wang Yu's "The Biography of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality", and he still has spiritual roots. 99.9% Of Qidian's novels are written with spiritual roots. Of course, there are also many novels written about martial arts in Qidian. They are pure martial arts novels, that is, after the warrior enters the innate world, he combines the magic of cultivating immortals, and the original martial arts skills become martial arts skills.

It is normal to have martial arts in the world of immortals. Even in the low martial world, the combat power cannot be underestimated. However, the difference between immortals and mortals is that the strength and advantages of cultivating immortals are too great, and they can live forever.

There is no dignity or inferiority in the world of cultivation at all, and it does not reflect the feeling that a higher level is completely different.

Damn it, you can earn 300 spirit stones by planting a field, but you actually said that three hundred spirit stones is a huge sum of money, and a pill that breaks through the innate realm costs 50 spirit stones. For example, a farmer earns 3,000 yuan from farming for a year. Do you think this 3,000 yuan is a huge amount of money? If you write like this, the elixirs used for Qi training period should not start with thousands.

Whenever something trivial happens, my face changes, just like in Sichuan Opera.

Nothing special. In the early stage, it looked like it was Gou Daoliu, but it changed after it was put on the shelves. As long as there is no heroine, no holy mother, high IQ, and ruthlessness, just write casually. There are so many tall and famous writers who are jabbering all day long. If you have practiced the deep esoteric method, it is better to write that today I have nothing to do and listen to music.

I have raised some garbage spiritual beasts, spiritual bees to collect honey, and spiritual fish. If you encounter a second or third level spiritual beast, you won't raise it. What a waste of goldfinger.

Does this book have multiple female protagonists? If it's that kind of monk article, I won't read it! Ask all book friends! I don't watch single heroine or monk novels

In the early stage, I thought it was about farming and cultivating immortals. Unexpectedly, I was wrong. The ruins turned into fights and troubles at the beginning, and then they kept fighting and making troubles. Farming was gone.

Tell me your personal views. I read Chapter 35. If you want to farm, just farm well. Don't mess with that moth every day. There is a person at the Qi training level who thinks he has been at this level for a long time and despises pig feet when he comes in. Then there are all kinds of discrimination in it. The co-author relies on this to promote the plot. It is said to be a tribute to Brother Mo. Does Brother Mo have so many things?

The plot is okay, and Goldfinger is okay, but the economic system really confused me. In novels about cultivating immortals, especially novels about losers cultivating immortals, if the economic system collapses, the protagonist will look like a clown. Come back and read it when you are in a good mood. I will keep it for now.

Don't have so many old routines, okay? You always have the same old routines. Every time you encounter a little thing, someone will cause trouble every time you go out. Can't you just be quiet? You encounter a lot of insignificant things, and you are so superficial.

I finished watching it for free, and my prostitution was successful.

Farming has been good, and I have built up the foundation to the golden elixir. I feel that the golden finger is refreshing, but it is not reflected. If you want to develop the cave sky and develop it from the wave aspect, you should go for Naruto Obito's ability to decelerate and divine power. If you are more careful, not only the base but also the space is involved. I feel that Flying Thunder God should also be able to make sense. You can also develop into the secret realm and use formations to divide areas into spiritual plant areas, mining areas, breeding areas, spiritual water areas, book areas, trade areas... In general, in the latest chapter, the main line of cultivating immortals has been going steadily, but I don't pay much attention to the golden finger. Apart from being a base for growing vegetables, no other functions have been developed.

I've read the first hundred chapters and it's pretty good. Why are my grades so bad?

So far this book is really well written. The traditional Yuanying school of building foundation pills is pretty good. The advantage is that there are no obvious poison points. The characters are also well drawn. The shortcomings are not obvious. Although it is not particularly outstanding, it is still watchable. How should I put it, the traditional fairy tale novel is really worth reading. Recommended by a 10-year old bookworm.

Can anyone tell me what the state of this book is like after becoming a god?

I actually ate the grass that turned back...

The book is quite good, but there are a lot of typos. I hope the author can use some caution.