Immortal Sword Pavilion

I entered the game yesterday and watched the protagonist kill an evil cultivator, slay a monster python, and enter the Turtle Mountain. He had a vague demeanor of a sword cultivator who came and went with his sword. I thought it was well written. But from the beginning of building the foundation of the Five Elements Dao and understanding the Five Elements Sword Intent, I have been very doubtful about what the author wants to understand when he writes about Yuanying, Yuanshen, and Yangshen? A minor practitioner of Qi Refining is about to understand the meaning of the sword. I seem to have seen someone writing about the artistic conception of gold, the secret of evolved gold, the rules of evolved gold, and the origin of evolved gold many years ago 🤭 Then it starts with the fire-killing exercise. I really can't stand it. How many chapters did you write to kill a small fire exercise? Will I have to write 50 chapters to kill a foundation player in the future? Do you want to write 500 chapters of Killing Golden Pill? In my opinion, swordsmanship is about "being alone with a sword from the sky", rather than making a fuss and beating up a group of people. Finally, I think most people write sword cultivators just write the magic weapon as a sword, that is, a "sword-carrying magic cultivator." However, as of Chapter 150, the author does not seem to have taken drugs to increase his cultivation level except for flying beasts, and he has not taken out magic weapons or talismans to fight. This is worthy of encouragement.

Being affectionate and righteous is not the Holy Mother. If you are a grown-up person, you just want to be a nanny for others. In less than ten chapters, you will be a nanny for two mortal kids. I'm afraid you will be a savior later and be a nanny for the mortals in the world Look at how old the author is, he is still at the age of middle school fantasy Don't say you haven't failed, even if you are the protagonist who has failed, he won't dare to play like you. When you meet someone who asks you for help, you wish you could be his parent and hold him in your hands, fearing that he will break it Why do you have that? Where does one have the confidence to be a savior? Just because you are a time traveler?

Spiritual roots or talent for cultivating immortals are a must! The world of immortality where everyone can cultivate has collapsed since the beginning! Because a world of immortality where everyone can cultivate immortality must be a world dominated by a family of immortality cultivators. Ordinary people have no future at all! Everyone can cultivate immortality, why should a family of immortal cultivators leave the resources for cultivating immortality to you ordinary cultivators? Wouldn't it be nice for someone to monopolize everything and use resources to destroy their own family members? Only with spiritual roots can the number of people in a family who can cultivate immortality be limited. Otherwise, if there are hundreds of thousands of families cultivating immortals and millions of mortals can cultivate immortality, how terrifying do you think it would be? Can ordinary people like you get even a little bit of resources?

Now when I read the novel, I can see the arrogance in each one of them! Each one of them is so violent that I wish the whole world would die at your hands. I think the author's style is already very good. Even the sun can't make everyone in the world like it. I really have good suggestions that the author can refer to. I don't care about the keyboard warrior at all.

A person's Xianxia is ultimately weak. Xiaoxian already has the system of this book. So, next, readers, have you thought about the fairy tale scenes, magic weapon skills, and plot narration that you yearn for? Those who are willing to participate can join in together and the choices will be appropriately arranged. Above, thank you! (This book was originally planned to be completed with more than one million copies. How much you can write in the future depends on the results. You still have to save some love to generate electricity for the next time.)

The reading quality of this book is seriously inconsistent with the ranking

It's a good book, there are no weak villains, and there's no plot about a girl kneeling on her knees. It's worth reading. In the early stage, the protagonist's combat power was not very high, and the fights were not interesting. Later, after practicing the five elements, he became awesome.

Nice! Come on, author! Is there a female protagonist? If there is a female protagonist, please let the author tell me in advance. I personally don't like having a female protagonist. She feels pure, detached and free, which is called cultivating immortality 😳😳

What does "seeking longevity" mean? ? At least take the introduction seriously.

It's boring... The protagonist has a good character! But the main plot is not clear, the branch plots are not full, and even if you want to tell a story about slaying demons in a small town, you can't tell it well! It's inexplicable that the importance is confused! Don't ask for a golden finger, but you have to be clear about it, right? No! It needs to be humane, but you can't just say that you are sad when you create new lyrics because you don't know what it's like to be sad, right? There is a comment barrier, forcing me to subscribe to a chapter just to comment... Oh! The style is really good, especially the sentimental and righteous part! But there is something wrong with the overall design, I really can't stand it! I'm bored after reading so many words. I don't remember what you wrote and why you wrote it.

I have only read more than 200 chapters. The writing is good, but there are too many typos. It feels like it has not been proofread at all. Also, can you stop mentioning Su Hui? It does not talk about the amazing things the protagonist did when he was a child. He just keeps bringing up Su Hui. It is very empty and boring.

Seeing the scolded Holy Mother, she is merciful and soft-hearted, a loser, a woman's kindness. I came in and took a look. What I lack at the beginning is this kind of feeling. The most important thing I lack is the ability to kill your whole family at every turn.

It doesn't have to be a female protagonist. Many works have poor female protagonists and turn them into poisonous works... It depends on whether the author can grasp it 🤐 (I personally think it's fine without a female protagonist) Personally...

The writing style of the plot can be either a no-brainer, or I just don't like the story about the world of seeking immortality and the collapse of the immortal world. Can't I write about the immortal world in terms of the concept of immortal heroes, which can escape from the prehistoric era, The List of Gods, and Journey to the West? I really hate to see things like the Three Pure Ones, the Jade Emperor, and the fighting saints. It can be set like a mortal's journey to immortality. Otherwise, learn from Tomato's world view, and you can ascend to transcendence. If you write like this, the protagonist will reshape the immortal world in the end 😅😅 I have already seen this possibility 😐

Forehead. . . After reading, the book is actually good, barely enough, but there are a few things that I am not very satisfied with. The first one is a typo, and it is always wrong. The author must be typing too fast or it is caused by the input method, such as Po Jing Dan. I always use the mirror of the mirror. I felt awkward in my heart after reading it for a long time, and I really couldn't bear it before I said it in this chapter. Let's talk about it; the second is the character of the protagonist. The setting is a bit funny rather than a bit naughty. It's okay now. But in the future, when you are one or two hundred years old, this character will still be bad. Moreover, sometimes you are naughty in front of others, and I personally feel uncomfortable. After all, this is an immortal, and it is an ancient cultivator. Others can't catch it. What's the point of being naughty? If it is a modern cultivation, modern people will be able to catch your jokes and have feedback in their hearts, which will make it interesting for us to read. Another one is character. We must pay attention to the description of the character's character. It must be progressive. We can't say that it goes back to the same state for a while. This will make it feel like the IQ is rising and falling. Words such as regret, hatred, unwillingness, and helplessness are best used sparingly. If these words are used too much, it will feel like the character's character is average or even xinxing. Poor; the third is the plot design, as well as the design of the supporting characters. There are times when you are frustrated, and there are times when you are victorious, but there are definitely more wins than defeats. After all, this is a good article, not a sad article. To be honest, sad articles require certain writing styles. You can't vent your emotions when you are happy at the end. The readers will be suffocated. You This is obviously due to too many times of being frustrated. For example, the Fire Actor repeatedly made the protagonist's side frustrated and played around. I felt extremely aggrieved at the time. When I finally died, I didn't express much emotion, because the Fire Actor was just a younger brother and not a big boss. This was also obvious. The protagonist has a low IQ, and the evaluation has dropped again; fourthly, the language is refined, and the plot is always procrastinated. The first one, the Five Elements Sword Intent, was not allocated well. The water element took an extremely long time, so it could only be compressed and compressed later. In fact, I think the water element was written quite well, but why did it feel like it took so long? Because you used too much space on other plots, it lengthened the time of the water element. Sometimes the main character's skin can cover a few pages. I think it is completely unnecessary. You can completely reduce the length of the main character's skin and write more about the understanding and magical uses of the other five elements. This is cultivating immortality after all. Another example is the plot of the main character returning to the sect after Daoji. You have written hundreds of thousands of words, but we haven't met the sect yet. The protagonist has said several times that he will go back to learn the Five Elements Zhenshijue after Daoji. The reader can't bear it any longer. As a result, the protagonist has done a lot of things after Daoji and returns. I encountered another bad thing on the way. To be honest, my mentality suddenly collapsed at this point. I watched it for a while, and then skipped to watch it. This was my mentality at the time. In fact, if the author could refine the plot and design the protagonist's growth route, this would be really good. If the author can see the book, I hope he can think about it carefully. Also, when the author thinks that he has finished it, he can let him know and come over to taste it or something. Then I will come over and finish the whole book, including a lot of chapters. Now, I have been screwed by the author!

Thoughts on cultivating immortals, 1. From the beginning of cultivation, there is a big difference in strength between ordinary people and ordinary people. It is like a dimensionality reduction attack, just like the British colonization of India. Mortals can only be useful or useless. Of course, some kind-hearted ones are not excluded. Other mortals are just assets. Look at the British and Indian people during the colonial era. 2. The funniest thing is that there are always novels about cultivating immortals with the ability to control other cultivators. That is interesting. Most of the immortal cultivators are slaves. High cultivators control low cultivators. It is just instinct. All assets and people are mine. Only fools will not do it. Yuanying controls the golden elixir and lets the golden elixir of his subordinates control the foundation. There are many slaves. There is no free person. 3. Demons are the setting that I hate the most about cultivating immortals. For mortals, they are all demons, they are all rulers and slaves, and they are all imperialists. They just pay attention to their eating habits. For the sect, the Soviet Union or Russia is the devil, because I control public opinion. Hahaha, cultivating immortality

This triggers battles too frequently. It makes me so tired

I'll write this one when I finish my new book! I'll wait for you to continue writing.

Is the author Xixia (a certain fan)?

I feel like the second book is a bit watery and not as good as this one.

I only read the first seven volumes of this one. I was busy with other things and I didn't read the novel for a while. I didn't read the new books. I don't know if there will be a follow-up to this one.

Is it possible to write a million words on an adventure in an immortal mansion? I'm also drunk.

Multiple clones (real bodies), this is awesome. Tomatoes are perfect, and Ergen's immortals are also...

The author's writing is getting better and better, I hope to stick to it

It's been a long time since I've been to Qidian. I've ordered all of this book. I'm here to send my flowers and congratulations when I finish it. I wish you write better and better.

With rewards + monthly tickets, I wish the author good health, good fortune, and endless inspiration in the Year of the Ox.

So slow! I want to keep the book. I have turned on the automatic subscription. Next time I come, I hope it will reach 1,000 chapters. I will close the book for three months.

Watch me fuck the guy with the most monthly votes

It's so slow, only a few chapters, I'm too lazy to read and continue reading

Will the monthly pass be doubled at the end of the month? If yes, the monthly pass will be given to you at the end of the month.