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I subscribed, so I wrote down my thoughts. I experienced three mental changes after reading this book before subscribing. I almost gave up when I first started reading it because some of the descriptions were very embarrassing. Later, when I didn't think it was good, I just watched the free chapter until the end, because the transitions in many places were too abrupt, and sometimes I always felt that the content of the next chapter was inconsistent with the previous chapter, so I had to check whether there was an extra chapter. Now I want to continue reading, because the story is quite attractive to me, and I can see that the author worked hard to write the book. Come on. I haven't read Disha Seventy-Two yet (I don't read novels with less than 2 million words and 500 chapters). The genre of this book suits my appetite. I hope the fairy tale style is stronger. Some of the jokes are too blunt and will affect the viewing experience. PS: The author will review it more. There are too many typos 😭. I recently helped my sister, who has just become a primary school teacher, to mark her homework. When I saw the typos, I wanted to circle them.

With an awe-inspiring spirit, you can wipe out all injustices and walk to the ends of the earth with a sword, but with a clear conscience Although this book draws on a lot of the settings of the Seventy-two Changes of Earthly Evil, it also has certain innovations while drawing on it. Although some plots are a bit blunt, some scenes also express a heroic artistic conception. Overall worth seeing. The current progress is to launch Chapter 2

It's a pity that I didn't finish writing Xiandao Jiange before. I'm back to read the book written by Xiaoxian again. Come on, keep running!

I don't recommend not connecting the two before and after. It was originally intended to create suspense, but too much seems disconnected and a bit uncomfortable to read. I still like it. Let's see if we can change the style. Don't always insert another scene before it is finished. Sometimes it is a bit inexplicable.

Looks good, I'll give it a try. 500 Coins per wave

It was a good book, but the title of the protagonist really forced the author to separate them. I really couldn't bear it. The protagonist's name is Zhou Changqing. It doesn't matter at first, but can we unify it? One moment, Changqing, and another, Zhou Changqing. Originally, I thought it was this in certain chapters. Like, I didn't expect it to always be like this... Let me give you an example, for example, Yuan Chengzhi, the protagonist of Blue Blood Sword... If it is written like this, Chengzhi hits him with a palm, the opponent dodges, Yuan Chengzhi flies up with a kick... Chengzhi... The names of the protagonists keep switching back and forth...

I just saw a review. If you want to become an immortal, you will become an immortal. You want any kind of heroine. Haha, what do you want to read in a novel? The story is exciting and the characters are vivid. Why can't we add emotional scenes? Are all the heroines of Squid Girl useless? Brotherly love, family love, and male-female love are all necessary conditions for the characters to be alive. The cold monster-fighting and upgrading, training for the sake of training, I don't think it can be tolerated, and I believe the author will not write it like this. There are many starting points for reading such books. The author is ambitious. Isn't the storyline of Squid Girl interesting?

Is the Taoist practice in this book so scholastic? If you are only cultivating the soul, isn't cultivating the Tao as a fellow practitioner of the Three Treasures of Spirit, Qi, and Shen? Only cultivating one's nature, not one's life, is the first disease to be cultivated. All the Taoist practices in the book follow the path of contemplating the inner and outer scenes, and there is no trace of the Jindan Dao 😭. It seems that it is really a fairy-xia plane with low magic. What's more, the protagonist doesn't look like a Taoist at all. I haven't seen the protagonist read any Taoist classics at all. Every day, he either practices the techniques passed down by Lin Jiu or only relies on the supernatural powers given by Golden Finger. If you say he is a Taoist, he doesn't look like it. If you say he is a scholar, he still doesn't look like it. If other people's Heart Saints are able to master the three teachings, that is because their knowledge and practice have reached that level, but what about the protagonist? How much do you know about your own practice? It's like a bucket of dissatisfaction, half of the bucket is dangling, and I just know how to practice every day, whatever I want to practice. Of course, this may be because the author himself is not familiar with the Taoist classics and cannot write them. But these details determine the book's loss of points. It's also a highlight that you, a descendant of the Three Purities of Taoism, stay in the academy every day 😐

This book is very well written and imaginative, but it's a pity that the author started writing about the country's political system halfway through! Let's put it this way, there were a lot of smart people in ancient times. Some systems cannot be changed by manpower. Unless you kill all the people in the country and only keep the children, it would be wishful thinking for you to directly change the social form. Chinese ideas will be passed down, and some ideas will not change without pain. That is conservative! Our current social form has changed the world, and it is also an era that connects the past and the future. It is as great as the unification of Qin Shihuang. There are three stages in China: before Qin Shihuang's unification, after unification, and then modern times! Can you understand how ridiculous it is that the protagonist you wrote wants to change his life? It's very poisonous. If you write about immortals, just write about immortals. Don't write about politics. Your consciousness is too low.

I remembered why I didn't read it, because this book always talks about how handsome the protagonist is.

The book is quite good, the only thing that makes me feel bad is that it is too bland, it is a pity to abandon it, and it is tasteless. The main plot of the protagonist is to rely on the golden finger to travel through time and become stronger, slay demons and change the world in the future, and the world is in chaos. The titles of various realms make many people unable to remember which level the protagonist is at. When the protagonist's level is unclear, the excitement of the protagonist's promotion will be less. After all, in addition to watching the plot, what we want to see more is the protagonist getting stronger. It's so cool 2. Every time the protagonist advances, it is mentioned in one stroke without much foreshadowing. For example, what the protagonist did in pursuit of becoming stronger and fought for something useful, and the final advancement is often the plot of many previous chapters and then here. The protagonist has upgraded one level, as if we have been waiting for the protagonist to upgrade for a long time and then you are done with it in one sentence 3. The opponents that the protagonist faces are often of unknown levels, but the protagonist can always beat them in the end, so it creates the same feeling whether the protagonist is upgraded or not 4. Every time the protagonist kills monsters, there will be rewards. Originally, these rewards were written very casually and were basically written in one stroke, but since they were put on the shelf, there is no mention of killing at all. He has killed so many monsters, except for Yaksha who got the Tiangang Technique. This has resulted in the protagonist having been completing dungeons in various plots, but he has been doing meaningless things with no reward and no sense of accomplishment 5. The protagonist lacks the process of pursuing becoming stronger in the dungeon experience. He is simply following the plot to kill demons, and lacks some plots to show his strength The above is why I think it lacks some excitement and is too bland. I hope the author will adopt it.

When I saw Chapter 19, I felt that the author's plot was very strange, and there was no logic in it. For example, there is a murderer who has a submachine gun in his hand, and you are very skilled and can kill 7.8 People with your bare hands, but you will still die if you are hit by the gun. There are 50 people arresting the murderer, but they have pistols in their hands. ? There is no such thing as logic, and people can't be like this. It is normal for everyone to be angry. Not to mention "Thirty years in the east of the river, thirty years in the west of the river, don't bully young people into poverty" like in Fighting the Sky. How can you say that you can't let them go after this. After all, if you are weak, you will be forced to die.

You write well, why are your grades so bad?

The origin of the Thirty-Six Techniques of Tiangang and the Seventy-two Techniques of Earthly Evil in "Tongjian of Immortals of All Dynasties". It was created by Master Yuchen (Shangqing Lingbao Tianzun).                                             Shangbai Erzhen said: "I am stupid and have no heir. I would like to beg this child as my son. I am sorry to hear the promise." Huang Lao said: "I would like to give it to you as my heir. But this child has extraordinary talents and will prove to be of the highest quality. You can raise him well for me." The king came forward to pay homage to Erzhen. Erzhen took it from the throne and handed it to him. The king came to receive it with both hands. He was as heavy as a mountain and was sweating profusely. He suddenly realized that he hurriedly summoned the queen to speak, and she saw the same thing. The queen's spirit grew twice as long, and when he was three years old, he and his queen gave birth to a sage prince, who later became the God of Heaven and Earth. The Erzhen collected the Dharma and drove northward in the clouds. Yuanshi said: "If you have a king, you must have a prime minister. Your Majesty has already planted the foundation of a monarch. At the end of the road, you should choose the forest of kings and assistants. There is a little friend who is from the time of the Three Emperors. Because he is good at Taoism, he often teaches him, and he is most willing to listen to him. He was originally named Taishi, but he said it was the same as my name, so he changed it to Taipu. Now he is practicing in Longshan. Please surrender to me for a while." Huang Lao moved the clouds to Longshan Mountain in Nanzhou, stepped on the ground and watched. There are nine turns to the slope. If the people want to go up, they can reach it in seven days. Huang Laoge said: The long heads are flowing, and the sound is quiet. Longchuan is like snow, filled with dead people. At the beginning of the Yuan Dynasty, he also sang: "You are too simple, and the source of the truth can be felt." If you have any doubts, where can you ask? Before the song was finished, someone came out from behind the mountain to compose a song and said: I miss the king of heaven, who is in the sky. Once pointed out, it will never be forgotten. Pay homage to Yuanshi. Yuanshi said: "Let's see the truth first." He bowed to Huang Lao. Yuanshi said: "This is Taipuzi. When I met him on the shore of Beihai in the past, I saw that his nature was empty and spiritual, and I wanted to ascend with him. However, because of his unfulfilled merits, he stayed in the world." Huang Lao said: "Looking at his appearance, he is worthy of being a prime minister and assistant." Yuanshi said He said: "In the realm of Xuantian, the auspicious mist is lush and lush, and God will appear. My son should rise to the occasion, work diligently to cultivate, benefit people, and have close karma. He is the Prime Minister of Jade." Taipu thanked him for his teachings, and Fu Jin said: "There is a person in the west named Huanzhi, who lives in Zhongyan of Shangqing Dynasty, and is also called Taiwei Zhenren of Shangqing Dynasty. He has little morals and immeasurable magical power. He specializes in teaching, so he is called the Great Master of Yuchen. During the reign of Emperor Zhongzhong, Xuannv of Zhongtiao was the first to receive the Yuji spiritual text, and later there was Yuanzi of Emei Town. He learned his alchemy and treasured seals. He never hesitated to teach anyone who had a chance to learn and ask questions. He once descended to the barren mountain and talked about the truth. There are thirty-six transformations and seventy-two transformations. People can respond to them in thousands of places. Such a miracle is rare. " Erzhen then thought: "It would be very good to meet him for a while." Suddenly he saw a crimson cloud flying towards him from the southwest, and a Taoist appeared. Taipu greeted him and said, "The Master has arrived." Before Erzhen could speak, Yuchen said, "Shangzhen, King of Heaven, you have been waiting for a long time. Please forgive me for being disrespectful." Erzhen was surprised by his intelligence, and they all bowed their heads in respect. Sitting down, Yuanshi said: "I heard that Brother Tao's magic is superb and he is not afraid to teach others. It is his highest wish. But there are good and evil in them, how can we predict them? How can you control them if they are in chaos?" Yuchen said: "Choose people and teach them, it's close to Stubborn. I only have the vast Dharma." Huang Lao said: "Do you want to explore the Dharma yourself or teach it secretly from above?" Yu Chen said: "I was born in front of the emperor, and I went up to Tianfeng Dahu Mountain alone at night. Observe and observe, knowing that there is great light in nature. After absorbing the dew from the sun, you can refine your spirit. Over time, you can summon ghosts and gods, carefully examine the six armors and five elements, and be able to control them. Use the number of six and six to call it Tiangang. Gang Gang; the numbers of eight and nine are called earth evil spirits, and evil spirits are killed. They are combined into three pieces, and they are collectively called the Heavenly Book. "The jade letter in the exploration book is written in three volumes, with gold slips and elixirs written in clouds and thunder seals. Each line is divided into magical talismans and magical ways. The Thirty-six Methods of Tiangang: Mediating with nature, reversing yin and yang, moving stars and fighting, returning to the sky and moon, calling for rain and wind, shaking mountains and earth, riding on fog and clouds, marking rivers and forming land, moving golden light across the land, turning rivers and seas, pointing the ground into copper, Five Elements Escape, Liujia Qimen, knowing the future against the will, whipping mountains and moving rocks, bringing back the dead, flying to leave traces, and being convinced in nine breaths. Export Yuan Yang, subdue the dragon and subdue the tiger, mend the sky and bathe in the sun, push the mountains and fill the sea, turn stones into gold, stand upright without shadow, change the shape of the fetus, the size is as desired, the flower blooms in an instant, the wandering spirit controls the air, sees through the wall, returns the wind and returns the fire, masters the five thunders, dives into the abyss and shrinks the earth, flies sand and rocks, holds the mountain and crosses the sea, scatters beans into soldiers, nails the seven arrows The second and second volumes, seventy-two techniques of earth evil: Channeling the secluded place, expelling the gods, carrying mountains, banning water, borrowing the wind, spreading fog, praying for clear weather, praying for rain, sitting on fire, entering the water, covering the sun, controlling the wind, scolding stones, spitting flames, swallowing knives, potting the sky, walking on the water, detaching the staff, making a clone, becoming invisible, continuing the head, immobilizing the body, slaying demons and inviting immortals, chasing souls and absorbing souls, attracting clouds, taking the moon, carrying, marrying dreams, separation, sending sticks, cutting off the flow, warding off disasters and relieving disasters, yellow and white, sword skills, shooting, earth elements, and stars. Guide, false form, spray into fingers, disintegrate corpse, move scene, bring in, then go, gather beasts, transfer birds, air restraint, vigorously, see through stone, generate light, blind eyes, guide, take food, open wall, jump over rock, sprout head, board copy, drink water, lie in snow, blizzard, make pills, talisman, medicine, know time, know place, big grain, magic prayer Huang Lao said: "Although the Taoist teachings are wonderful, they may be spread over time. If a traitor gets it, it will bring disgrace to the world and bring disaster to the people. Isn't it unreasonable to punish him for his wrongdoing?" Yu Chen said with horror, "The purpose of legislation is to lead people into the Tao, but instead it leads people into evil! There is no place for regret. But there are many teachings that will harm future generations. What can I do?" Yuan Shi said: "Strictly teach the senior disciples not to teach anyone who is a bandit and a different person. You should be careful." Yu Chen said: "Bai. The eight small methods are fortunate to be broken. It is very easy to break the evil spirit of the sky, but it is slightly difficult to control it. Now I have to tell the disciples not to pass it on secretly. I have not been able to travel to the heavens. I will be very happy if the king is willing to travel to the heavens." Huang Lao said: "I have been away from the barren mountain for a while. I will see you later."       ："，，" Taipu Jishou listens and accepts. At the beginning of the Yuan Dynasty, Yuchen and Yuchen rose up on the colorful clouds, enjoying a happy and wonderful state. From then on, Taipu made extensive use of his meritorious deeds, and at the beginning of the Kaihuang Tribulation, he began to rise to the occasion.

It's not clear, it's not clear, it's not clear, the main world hasn't been introduced clearly yet, here comes a dream world, Tiangang Earth Demon, you are a great god, Platinum, some people will buy into this kind of writing, but it's not a cool novel, it's not passionate, it's not invincible, it doesn't even make people want to continue reading, come on, maybe I'm overthinking, who doesn't enjoy reading novels?

I hope the author will carefully review each number, because most readers are sensitive to numbers. If the logic does not work, they will suddenly see poisonous spots when looking at them, just like being fed a mouthful of feces while eating a delicious meal. I hope they can make corrections, especially when describing the length, width, and thickness of living things. You need to be more careful.

To be honest, these two chapters are a bit poisonous. The author, these novelist and peasant characters are like a piece of paper. The characters are poorly drawn for the sake of foreshadowing. How could a group of people who dared to insist on their own ideas in an era when Confucianism was prevalent become so sad and happy because of these two simple sentences. In short, all the schools of thought like you will fail when you write it. Just tell yourself that you want to write about a world. How could a group of thinkers in a declining era be just like ordinary peddler storytellers everywhere without depth. No matter how many people write a school of thought, there is still not a single scholar who is knowledgeable and understands etiquette. Since in the era when Confucianism was the sole focus, there was no sign of these people being infected by Confucianism. At the very least, you should write about the spiritual outlook of various scholars. Really, what you write is just like calling a random storyteller on the street and people say he is a novelist? What about the background? As a school of thought, there is no official connection and no reputation in the market. Who knows who you are and why you can be recognized by military strategists, Confucianists, Legalists, etc. That's outrageous

Is there a female protagonist in Ghost Blowing Lamp? Yes, is the novel well written? It's definitely good. In fact, it doesn't matter if it's there or not. It just depends on how the author grasps it. In the final analysis, it's a novel that is positioned as a dog licker, a wisecracker, a harem, or a pig breeder. This kind of novel is definitely scolded. It's positioned as a companion in the world of mortals, and a world of freedom. It depends on whether the author can write it. It's positioned as invincible. So what should a matching heroine look like? Positioned to cultivate immortality and seek immortality, what should the heroine be like? I believe that what many readers want to see is a more reasonable and smooth plot with vivid and distinctive characters.

This whole thing was so damn hard to write, and then the author let himself go and gave up on treatment.

Be confident. I don't know how much better this book is than the one at the top of the list. The results that are hyped up are not worth mentioning compared to the results that are actually written down.

It is enough for all the scholars to focus on the twelve established schools. Those who are masters and empty-handed are all unpopular, so there is no need to write about them at all, or it is better to mention them in one stroke.

To be honest, after reading the previous dozens of chapters, I still don't understand whether the protagonist has been in a dream or in another world. This may not be because of my poor understanding.

After reading 8 chapters, the author emphasizes the handsomeness of pig's feet in each chapter. It makes me sick. How ugly must I be to find comfort here?

I've been keeping it for more than a month, and now I'm buying it. Mainly, it's easy to persuade me to leave it. It's too bland and doesn't make me feel good. I should add a little bit of fun to it occasionally to show off the coolness.

I subscribed too early... I finished the subscription in one go, but there are still more than 400 chapters left to read... The development in the back is weird, and the beginning is a bit half-ruined... Originally, the parallel timeline was good, but in the end, I made some kind of overlay timeline, and the changes will cause the real world to cover that parallel timeline... You can see for yourself whether it is messy... Originally, no one in that parallel world knew the protagonist, and it was a timeline where the protagonist did not exist. I accept that. It introduces the concept of parallel worlds, and it's pretty cool. Even if you change the result, there will only be one more timeline. As a result, you write something later and it becomes the future that can be changed, so the protagonist begins to exist again... If you just travel through time to change the past and the future, it would be a bit cliché. This theme was developed many years ago. Now that the theme is gradually improved, and the system of cultivating immortals is perfect, there are many bugs in your theme. What has already happened in the future cannot be changed. If it is just a prediction, the possibility of change is just a prediction of the possibility that the future has not yet happened. But the timeline you go to the future is all things that have already happened... If you change the timeline arbitrarily, it will cause the timeline to be disordered and more unknown things will happen. It is like a reborn person going back and starting a new life. Are other people like the characters in the script, unable to think and change? The protagonist changed so many things, but nothing happened beyond his expectation, and no one else took another route... It's like three forked roads and you blocked the middle, wouldn't he take the right path? Maybe the world will become even worse by then. Maybe there are people who were originally good people who went astray, people who were originally great villains who accomplished nothing, and your friends who were originally good people died because of you... Running back and forth without doing anything in the end will only make it more troublesome. If you block these and integrate the two timelines into one world... It will be very awkward and full of bugs. Of course, it's possible that my taste is unique? It's okay that other people like to read this subject, but I'm really sincere. After all, I fully subscribed and read two hundred chapters.

This book has been available for free for several times. Is this a gift package for free?

Come on, Xianxian. At first, many novels such as "Dao Zheng Feng" were tepid in the middle, but their shortcomings did not hide their flaws, and later they became popular. Word of mouth and writing are the most important. Accumulate and be patient, and you will see a boom in the later stages!

The writing was good before it was put on the shelves, but not so good afterward.

Come on, the plot can be more fleshed out, that's fine.

The characterization of this character is very poor. Read it yourself, do you think it makes sense? Especially speaking and details