Zixiao Asked

It's a very good book, but there are always areas where the plot is not up to par, and it's very rushed in some places! For example, after chasing down the snake demon, he went home to say goodbye to his parents and go to practice, which was the proper intention, but he rushed to Beijing in a hurry. There was also a girl of the same clan who had a problem with the sacrifice and promised to help but did not get it. The benefactor of the manor in Beijing later ran away after crying! No matter how you look at it, the protagonist is a heartless person and has no three views, which makes a lot of plot logic combined with the protagonist's behavior, which is very strange! It's like a plot where a person is sick and can't walk, but he is arranged to run!

The woman is strong and the man is weak, the hero's wife is a martial arts legend, and the father is a drug dealer, just a side branch. How the hell did she fall in love with his father? Would his grandfather's family agree? The more top powers, the more they value bloodline inheritance? Can family inherited skills be passed on to daughters? Only my daughter doesn't ask for a wife? Too fake

The script for the male and female protagonists must have been reversed. Jiang Ming has been practicing hard. On the other hand, Xuantang'er was born in a martial arts family. After being attacked by snakes and pythons, she survived with the remaining souls of her brothers and sisters after the sacrifice. After waking up, she was kidnapped by the demon. She finally entered the Qingning Sword Sect and inherited a legacy that had been cut off for thousands of years. If the sect undergoes a major change, she will have to send her relatives into reincarnation. What a great heroine! ! !

I'm glad that there are such traditional fairy tale novels, but in terms of quality, I can only say that almost every plot in Chapter 9 is too childish. The protagonist's teacher uses secret techniques to spy on the fate of immortality and is killed by the backlash. As a result, another disciple of the protagonist's teacher feels that it must be the protagonist who killed him. Then he became a demon and took refuge in the hands of some evil "empress". When he was suddenly attacked, he was persuaded by his fellow apprentices. The protagonist and the so-called old monster Xuan were also inexplicable. They only wanted to take over the dojo but inexplicably wanted to hurt the protagonist. After being stopped by the protagonist's teacher who had a back-up plan, he actually went to the protagonist's parents to treat his injuries. The protagonist's parents said they wanted to give him a good-looking one, but in the end they didn't write it down in detail and instead inexplicably ended up splitting the dojo between two families. I really couldn't figure it out.

If we really want to write about the protagonist's "slowly" growth, this concept is actually quite difficult. I have seen so many books on Immortal Path Quest.

There is a problem with this book. It starts well, but as it goes on it becomes more mysterious, regretful and difficult to understand. It is not down to earth at all. Could it be closer to the lives of ordinary people? Otherwise this book would be like

Sword training is the second most important thing. One force can defeat all kinds of magic, and the one force it refers to is great magic power.

There is a strong smell of Tahoe

Well written, a rare good book about Xianxia.

Swallowing stars and enjoying the moon for fun sounds good. It must be refreshing to practice to this level.

After reading Chapter 28, I decisively gave up the book.

Yes, it is rare to find such pure fairy tales!

Cut again? Waste of my subscription money