You Call This Proper Alchemy?

Author, please try to reduce Yao Qiang's screen time, otherwise the main characters will soon become Yao Qiang's mother and the one cleaning up his messes.

The beginning of this book was alright, but the author started to go completely off-track after the Qi Refining 7th level character defeated the Foundation Establishment stage character. Later on, even late-stage Foundation Establishment level monsters were single-handedly killed by the protagonist.

The strange pills, after the initial smoke, flashes, and thunderstorm, are nothing special. They're just some ordinary, practical pills. The title is unconventional, but the actual content is just a repetitive story of alchemy, selling pills, cultivation, and monster-fighting—a mere skin for leveling up.

Um, the title of this book is completely different from "Pig's Trotter." It's about alchemy, why does it have to include learning flying swords? And after learning flying swords, it has to train the body and learn to control zombies? If you just made the pills mentioned in the synopsis and sold them to cause trouble, you could have made a lot of money. It's a pity, you've gone astray.

The protagonist isn't exactly a positive character; they could actually write him as a demonic cultivator, which would explain his actions in Chapter 63. Otherwise, I don't understand why a modern person who transmigrates to a fantasy world and discovers they've been targeted with a tracking device would immediately think of putting the tracking device on someone else.

This suppression of cultivation is a bit too severe. Even ordinary pills require such a long grind, and failures are a form of experience; seeing that statistic every time is frustrating. It's like playing a game—if leveling up is this difficult in the early stages, the game becomes unplayable later.

What a waste of money! I wanted to see the romance between the character and their master. But the entire story revolves around the protagonist from beginning to end. There's absolutely no description of the master's appearance. It's all about how the protagonist levels up.

Having read sixty or seventy chapters, the other pills are alright, but isn't this Transformation Pill a bit too overpowered? If the system directly bestowed it, that would be one thing, but it's actually made from a pill formula, so everyone else can make it too. A few drops of blood can completely transform one into another species, and even inherit innate abilities—what kind of concept is that?

Some people like seeing gender-swapped stories, some don't. Since the author chooses to target a specific audience, there's not much I can do about it.

I came to watch alchemy, but ended up with a bunch of random stuff. Goodbye.