Beast Taming: I Can Enter the Cultivation World

The dual theme of cultivation and beast taming is indeed quite novel and might attract many readers. Both worlds have well-developed settings, and hopefully the author can blend them well and polish the plot and writing style to retain readers. It's still unclear which world will be the main storyline. 🤔

Later on, you could set up the scenario where the tamed beasts travel to a cultivation world to learn martial arts or cultivation techniques. After all, in a cultivation world, tamed beasts would be considered spirit beasts or monsters. Humanoid beasts could even be set up to learn martial arts skills.

Not skilled in beast taming, a pseudo-cultivator wearing beast taming skin—it's somewhat disappointing.

Pet Level and Combat Power Comparison Table

The author's writing about the City Lord's Mansion was a major flaw. Although I only read a few chapters, the people in the City Lord's Mansion were clearly using the protagonist. I think it's better for the protagonist in a cultivation world to establish their own faction.

I feel that a female lead-less protagonist is better. Male leads with overpowered abilities basically have no female lead to help them; it's too much of a waste for them to rely solely on the male lead to carry them. After all, only the author and the male lead can truly understand the emotions involved; readers can't feel any of that.

The idea is very fresh; it's the first time I've ever seen something like this. Keep up the good work, author!

I suggest the author upload the text to check the characters' dialogue, looking for grammatical errors, inappropriate speech patterns, or excessive rambling... I've marked these in this chapter. A good subject matter needs to be combined with good writing to attract readers.

The primitive baby is beaten with its own flesh, while the clever pet controls a Gundam.

The writing is decent, but it's a little lacking? Excellent. In short, I would give it a score of 64 to 66 out of 100.