After Failing to Establish My Foundation, I Just Want to Grow My Family

The writing is pretty good so far, but the heroine must not be very strong. By the way, is it a single female protagonist or multiple female protagonists? Personally, I feel that multiple female protagonists are better, because each female protagonist will help the protagonist, and they all have connections and can improve themselves. The only bad thing is that there are none. But you must not write about the Shura field. What you are looking at is the family. It is more interesting to have more people and more strength.

The more I write, the more real it becomes, and it looks good. For example, it is really good to give birth to a child without spiritual roots. For another example, if you take a concubine, you can have multiple helpers. Actually, I feel that the author can write about marrying one from every profession, such as array master, weapon refiner, talisman master, etc.

According to the setting of this book, the origin of the golden elixir of human golden elixir monks can be absorbed and promoted by human monks. The golden elixir of human golden elixir monks has become an important resource. This will have at least two consequences. One is that those golden elixir monks who cannot advance will leave the golden elixir to the younger generations so that they can advance. Second, the big forces will hunt down the golden elixir monks of the small forces everywhere to collect resources. This kind of world of cultivating immortals is darker than cultivating immortals in the underworld. It is simply hell.

Let's commemorate it, a rare first place

Fortunately it's not Weibo, otherwise your plot about buying and selling female tribesmen wouldn't be washed away.

Let's finish the college entrance examination first and then write it in August or October next year. Sorry(இдஇ; )

Author, I feel that it would be better if there are more female protagonists. The family can expand and develop, and the clan can have more people.

Please forgive me if there are any typos or incorrect sentences, and I also ask everyone to help me correct them, thank you! The author is a newbie, and is learning writing skills, conceiving plots, and gradually making progress... Thank you again! 😁😁

The subject matter has a bit of a period feel! This requires writing and plot to attract readers.

This update is too slow. The writing is pretty good. I'll wait until next year to read it.