Tokyo's Most Affectionate

This is the most responsible male protagonist I have ever seen. If you want to have a harem, be open-minded. Just let yourself become a better person so that others don't leave you. It doesn't matter if you don't want to accept separation. The male protagonists in other novels are nothing but bitches and bitches. I don't have the ability to be a good heroine, so I try my best to be good. It's even funnier if you can't accept it. No matter where or in any dynasty, strong people have a lot of resources, regardless of gender. I will accept a lot of prestige when writing about strong women, as long as I don't write about women and don't abuse myself. Strong people regardless of gender

This book is not clumsy at all and can be called the best among urban novels. When reading other urban novels, there are always some outrageous plots or some poisonous points. This book really made me read it from beginning to end. Although there are still some shortcomings, such as some conflicts in the plot, it is really enjoyable to watch. It's the heroine's name that makes me think it's a little bit annoying, so I decided to give it 12345.

As an old bookworm who has been immersed in the book for many years, this book gave me a very good feeling. The plot is very rich in daily love novels, and the carving of the main characters can also achieve outstanding features. The description of hot girls and bad guys, and the narrative interweaving of Xiao Yuki's background story really made my eyes shine. The transition process is very smooth, and I personally feel more comfortable with the ability given by the system. There are too many system flows to obtain superpowers or rewards, which can be used at the next moment. Doesn't this really feel bloody? It is true that cool writing is popular now, but it is not bloody writing... Of course, the beginning of the early stage is not too perfect. I don't know if the author has an outline, but according to this plot, I personally feel that it will get stuck after 300 chapters at most, and it will be finished after 400 chapters. (I personally like this book very much and don't want it to be unfinished.) My personal suggestion is to push forward the progress. Young lovers are now more open-minded than the current light novels, and then the author can focus on imagining the Shura Field after it is overthrown. Add a few more protagonists and then the male protagonist dominates the story. This will last a lifetime. Just like the Three Kingdoms, if there weren't some idiots in the three-way stalemate, everyone would be afraid that the predecessors would plant trees for the shade, and the stalemate could last a lifetime. Lu Xun once said: There is no Shura field in love literature, just like there is no Jerusalem in the West! That's it! Come on, author, don't be a eunuch. 🙂

The author likes Taimei so much! ! Don't you think Ichinose's role is too much?

What can I say, this book gave me a good feeling when I first saw it on the shelves. It should be said that it is above the level of food and grass. It is limited by the subject matter and lacks good grass. There is absolutely nothing wrong with killing time to fill the book shortage. It can often make people smile. Later I will talk about some possible hidden dangers that I expected from this book. The problem is that the subsequent plot processing may be very tricky (I haven't seen it too far yet). First of all, based on the character of the protagonist (the heart is broken into many pieces, each one is sincere, and has a considerable degree of morality). Yuki, Ninomiya and Shifengin each have reasons why the protagonist cannot let go. In addition, if you let go, it will be equivalent to writing a harem story into four If it doesn't work, then we can only coexist, and coexistence to a certain extent is against the protagonist's personality (especially the imminent issue of marriage), because in modern harem novels, other people have to be nameless lovers if they want to get married, and they cannot coexist in a mutually restrictive state. In essence, it is also a kind of harm. I personally think it conflicts with the protagonist's personality to a certain extent. I personally feel that the emotional setting of the protagonist of this book is somewhat similar to that of an unknown lesbian, Asher Heath. Putting aside the other aspects of that book (such as the author's extremely ordinary bonding skills and related views), the emotional line is handled quite well, and the coexistence of the female protagonist is perfectly achieved in a reasonable and reasonable manner. , Without compromising the charm of the emotional line, you can even use the checks and balances between the heroines to advance the main plot. However, it is a fantasy novel, and compared to fantasy novels, modern novels will be more difficult to deal with in this regard. I hope the author can handle it carefully, otherwise it will not be easy for this book to maintain the current level of the same subject and write 1.5 Million words.

Yuki IchinoseSurge

Future's legs, heels and tongue are too high! ! ! It must be arranged, let's have some fun! !

I've wanted to complain for a long time, what kind of name is Heifeng? I can almost keep up with Zhuge Goudan and Murong Cuihua, can I change my name? ! !

Add some quality😄

It's too short. Four updates a day is the same as two updates for others. Urgent, urgent, urgent, urgent, urgent, urgent, urgent. I am King Jiji.

The chapters about relying on archery to pursue the eldest lady before it was released were of a very low standard. It feels very disconnected from the previous one, and I hope it can improve even more after it is released.

Faster, faster, more, who can see this little thing👀

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Dongda's No. 1 Affectionate (✘) Dongda's No. 1 Sea King (✔)

Female protagonist 12345🙂

It looks good, it will be more oily soon, the author is great! Brothers are really good looking

A full order has been made, and the batch will be issued. There are not many good books in the light novel system about scumbag men, and this one is barely among them. Advantages: The author's writing is very good, and he has collected all the basic knowledge related to the profession; the refreshing feeling of upgrading and crushing the system flow is also well reflected; the basic character design of the heroine is also clear. One of the few works in this series to survive subscription. Disadvantages: I feel that the author has limited experience and limited knowledge of how to deal with emotions. Basically, all the favorability comes from Mu Qiang and Fenyan, and all problems are solved by locking the favorability. These two questions triggered a series of questions in the author's subsequent emotional drama. The author's initial design of the heroine is quite clear, just 12345 plus half a 6. No. 1: Taimei + was bullied + clean and tidy, personality: strong dependence, which is more consistent with the setting experience, and is the only one who has not collapsed so far. No. 2: Teacher, this problem has arisen. For a character who can withstand the pressure of her parents and choose a career she likes, and resolutely resigns for what she loves, it is normal for a heroine to not accept sharing, but to not accept sharing makes her miserable. It is abnormal to be unable to let go. It is unreal for a strong and independent woman to not be able to lick a wound clean. It is even said that she just can't let go of the male protagonist. Then her way of handling it seems too weak and incompetent, and it is seriously inconsistent with the experience setting. No. 3: Figure skating genius + world champion. The most basic thing for a person to be a world champion is to refuse to admit defeat and have strong initiative. The proactive pursuit of the male protagonist in the front is very consistent with this setting. He boldly pursues bold love, but what about behind? He is also a self-pitying love brain, and his active pursuit turns into active concession. He cannot understand how such a character can strive to be the best in the world. No. 4: The daughter of a chaebol + a bird in a cage + a big woman. There are not many scenes. Being able to accept the position of a big woman is consistent with the setting of a chaebol woman. It is okay for the kendo gym to take the initiative to declare status, but it is not a brainer to accept that the male protagonist kisses other female protagonists immediately after declaring his status. It belongs to him and he allows the male protagonist to slap her in the face just after setting up the score. The previous scenes are all in vain. The bird in the cage is the reason why the male protagonist can abduct No. 4. The story of the bird in the cage is written, but the character of the bird in the cage is not written. In the entire No. 4, The temperament, skills, and aura that a chaebol's daughter + a caged sparrow + a big woman should have are completely gone, leaving only a noble love brain. No. 5: Agent + Best Friend No. 2, Well, theoretically she should be the female character who is purely attracted by the protagonist's talent. However, every heroine has played this trick to death, so she has become a supplement, and can only serve as a female best friend to No. 2 And herself. Ji Tiandu came to get the role, and the emotional line has not been fully developed. I can only say that the Japanese entertainment industry is so clean, and there is still the existence of the White Lotus agent. In fact, the author can expand on the complexity of the agent circle, and it feels that it can better reflect No. 5'S ability and love for the male protagonist. No. 6: Just appeared on the scene, bitch+tea positioning, just plan to go to the male protagonist's office to break the big defense. The male protagonist's popularity is not his own popularity. The resources of a large agency are incomparable with those of a small agency. Making money in the agency does not mean that he can develop well in the past. If he plans to borrow the light, will he not be afraid of being shone in the shadow? I suggest the author reconsider this part of the plot. At least the transfer of No. 6 To the agency must be seen more reasonably. Summary: Locking the favorability factor is used to simplify emotional dramas. It does not require a process, only results, and is used as a prerequisite. When writing other plots, you need to unfold the emotional drama, and then write the detailed twists and turns. However, once you unfold the favorability factor, it is still locked. How do you write your twists and turns? It is completely impossible to deduce the character and experience of the protagonist, and can only distort the basic character design and write a bunch of love brains, love brains, and love brains. Suggestion: Re-divide the favorability improvement value of each strategy and implement the strategies in stages. It is difficult to achieve the full value and lock it in at the beginning. It is not easy to spoil the plot. The subsequent plot can only be realized by creating a new female protagonist. It is easy for the female protagonist to be homogenized + multiple conflicts are difficult to control. Redefine the needs of each female character, No. 1 Is dependence, No. 2 Is motherhood, No. 3 Is heartbeat, No. 4 Is freedom, No. 5 Is appreciation, and No. 6 Is greed. Let the male protagonist provide different emotional values ​​​​to the female protagonists to achieve the diversity of characters. Reorganize the male protagonist's character, set the main tone, and add the hardships in life, add weaknesses to the male protagonist, add real-life value to each female protagonist, support each other, overcome difficulties, and let the male protagonist save some blood and tears to complete the final strategy. One inch of harem means one inch of blood, one foot of white silk and one foot of heart. Why open a harem without exchanging lives? I guess this book is in need of an overhaul. I look forward to the author's next book.

Can you lift me up?

Koyuki

Wife

I chased the book all the way without vomiting or feeling unhappy.        ，， But what happens next? Author, go and take a look for yourself, what have you written?                                                 From the time Ichinose became famous for his photos to the time when Ichinose participated in the beauty pageant, how long have you been involved in it?                                                                                       all all all all are all in the family of si fengyuan, but how much can be written about this branch line? Have you ever written?        ，，""        ，，？ Now the protagonist feels like a frog in a well, who can only hang around a few women. Other authors are also good at it, but in the development of the plot, you are developing the plot in water.        ，，，

I haven't watched it for a long time. I watched the Kyudo Tournament and stayed with it until now, and then I just finished the rest of it. After watching it for a while, it became more and more strange. I think the portrayal of the female protagonists is basically okay, except for Ninomiya, which I can't understand. I just felt that the plot of her pulling Igarashi for the male protagonist was a bit tough. Now the biggest problem for me is the male protagonist. I thought it was good before because of the continuity of good memories, taking the heroine to various places. Now that we have brought the heroine together, it is either the Shura field or embarrassing. The most important thing is that I feel that the image of the male protagonist is a bit broken. I feel like a very responsible adult before, but now I feel very uncomfortable. I feel like I am useless except for the system, and I feel like I am just pursuing beauty. The persistence and hard work I put into getting into Tokyo University, and my clear understanding of life, feel like I have been completely buried. Didn't I say it before, this is a tool to create beautiful memories between two people. It can only be said that it is a pity that the peak ends at the Kyudo Conference.

I don't feel as affectionate as Ikebukuro Daiichi

I haven't watched much since I got to the competition. It's a bit boring and not interesting. I don't know why.

I feel that the recent plot can be said to be that the author has played a good hand to pieces. The most attractive dating tasks and emotional lines at the beginning have basically disappeared, replaced by endless office career development, and it does not promote the emotional development of the protagonist and Runa Chizuru (at least it is too slow, I feel like there is nothing). In order to make up for the lack of emotional scenes, the author desperately added Ichinose's scenes. What are the consequences of doing this? Everyday life is endless, and too much description will inevitably lead to too much repetition, making readers gradually get tired of, or even disgusted with, the image of Ichinose. I feel that the author has completely failed to understand what readers want to read, or what the advantages of his book are. What readers want to see is the active interaction between the protagonist and different heroines, which leads to a series of developments in different fields and different daily lives, rather than catching Ichinose to death as a sheep or the piano office. This is not entertainment! At least we didn't write this book to this point because of this. If you really don't know how to write it, then please honestly finish the emotional lines of the existing heroines. Even if it is a bit reluctant in the end, we can accept it. It is better than the current procrastination and unfinished situation.

After watching half of it, what should I say... Why do you want to make a piano debut? You already have top-notch bow and arrow skills, so you have to add some entertainment into it. It's very nondescript 😐 Even if you come out as a singing archery master, you don't act like this. He is a civilized and martial artist 😥 I doubt whether he is schizophrenic.

Ninomiya

To be honest, even if the protagonist does not have a system, he is still a very good person. Without a system, he will most likely agree to jk pretending to be a couple. Even if it is not so perfect, being an outstanding student at Dongda University, ranking seventh in the country, and having a part-time job with an hourly salary of 20,000 are enough to make him stand out from the crowd and give jk enough face. It was the same with the teacher, but the system gave him a push, and everything else except playing the piano was based on his own abilities. (Don't talk about carrying the teacher, even if your physical fitness is poor, the feeling of never leaving you behind even if I am not strong enough is not bad.)

The heroine's name is one, two, three, four and five

It collapsed during the archery competition