Peninsula Asteroid

I just like love lines, I just like twice

1. The author has really worked hard to review the information. The biggest advantage of this book is actually the natural feeling as if there is such a timeline and such a Chi Jingyuan. It is completely uninteresting when reading, and it does not have the literary youth syndrome of some authors (namely criticizing a certain actor surnamed Jin. This one is very charming, but the author's literary youth is really a bit serious). It is natural and difficult to create this sense of smoothness. I hope the author can persevere without interference. 2. The character of the protagonist is very good, with talent and background. The identity of the player is clearly expressed from the beginning. He is cynical but quite nostalgic, which makes him innocent or sentimental. He is well-founded and has a lot of room for emotional drama. I have to say that the author can create a "scumbag" that everyone likes. He is very capable. I think the most important thing is that although Sir Chi is not always consistent in his relationship, he is really good to his girlfriend and close friends. At least he does not humiliate others, is not full of jingye (namely criticizes a certain bulldozer Young Master An), and is generous with resources. The sense of immersion is so strong, I also want to be such an innocent scumbag hahaha. And aside from the emotional line, Ji Sir is also outstanding as an idol. You can really see the fans' support and support for idols, as well as the feedback that Ji Sir gives them. I absolutely loved the part about attending a fan's wedding and read it several times. This makes the character more three-dimensional and no longer just a love animal or song-writing machine. The author also matched the classic songs very well with the characters' experiences, words and deeds, such as Let It Be, Rooftop House, Loved, Fireworks, and Fake Love. The appearance of these songs corresponds to the emotional experience one by one, and there is no drama at all. This kind of copying is an advanced song copying, comparable to the №9 section in Light and Shadow. 3. Regarding the female characters, since I was not familiar with any of them at the beginning, I didn't have the feeling that some readers felt that one of the characters was not well developed, because I didn't know any of them, and they all seemed quite attractive. Baicai is a serious, sensitive, and self-reliant character, Mina is a sinister, charming, and devoted character, Tzuyu is a soft girl in the early stage and a nurturing sister to Xiaolang in the later stage, and Suzy is smart enough to compete with Ji Sir. The woman, the perfect lover, the good brother Eunji, Seulgi who looks naive but is actually shrewd, and Nayeon who looks like a fan but is actually a true love. These characters are really outstanding. I like every one of them, and every emotional scene is very relevant. If I really want to talk about the problem, I feel that the author made the male protagonist too passive in the later period. A player is a little weak in facing the changes of many female characters, and he seems to be less of a player (I can do it too). You may need to pay attention to this. Recently, the plot of Tzuyu has been very good. 4. Regarding the love line and career line, I read some comments from readers. In fact, I feel that it is difficult to agree on, and everyone has their own preferences. I can only say that the author writes according to his own plan. No matter how he arranges it, some people will criticize it. I think it is very interesting, but relatively speaking, I still hope that there will be more career lines. After all, love can be used as an adjustment, but not too much, otherwise it will be a bit boring. After all, the love line has been basically finalized by now (when did Ji Soo enter the track, this is really a stranger). Come on, author, I like this book and highly recommend it! PS: I have only read a few Korean entertainment novels, and I am not an experienced novelist. My personal preference ranking is as follows - T0, light and shadow (the emotional scenes with Eunji in the early stage were a bit too strong, but became more interesting after entering the Soyeon line, N brush), this book (good to read, like a spring breeze). T1, Best Actor (good-looking, hard-core, invincible in career, but I don't want to replay it, the dialogue in the later stage is too long-winded, and the author is a classic literary youth). T2, King of Heaven (it was so uncomfortable to read in the middle and later stages, and I personally feel that the biggest poisonous point is not the abuse of Taeyeon, but the fact that tmd actively stuffed TARA with trolls, what a disgusting operation). T3, wreaking havoc (the bulldozer style is really not my personal preference, and the various plays are even more embarrassing to read. To me, this novel is completely for someone to use). Purely subjective evaluation, I don't like light spraying. If you have any other recommendations, please feel free to add them, thank you~

It has been more than three years since the protagonist's debut, and the book has reached over 1.6 Million words. However, none of the heroines on the character cards have made any progress. They either debuted not long ago or are just preparing to debut (of course there is also a heroine who has not yet become a heroine and has to wait a year). It has been mentioned in the previous article that the male protagonist will go to the 2016 Olympic Games. If we don't write down the emotional line now, how will we write it at the Olympic Games? Is it interesting to write a single game without adding emotional aspects? Isn't it bad to pinch it? Moreover, at the end of 2016, there will be a collaborative dance by the fourth generation groups such as Rabbit and Mao. To write these things beautifully, there must be some foreshadowing in the early stages. How do relationships usually work out? In the past 15 years, I have written a lot about my career, but the big stick has not returned yet. No matter how much I write about my career, it won't work. It's more exciting to hit it head-on, isn't it?

I like the character of the male protagonist. Idols are all about pursuing a career~ I hope that the main storyline of career and love can be discussed, but the overall story should not revolve around the female character, and she will be tangled in love and cry to death. After searching some Korean entertainment, I found that most of them are about fulfilling love fantasies with a few female celebrities I like, and I can't stand it. There are too many entertainments that bring the male protagonist into dating countless female stars. I really want to bring the perspective of fans to pursue the two-dimensional male stars who are not in trouble. The author greatly appreciates it.

Protagonist solo V. S. Reasonableness of group formation I have wanted to write this analysis/reminder post for a long time. When I started the article, I was attracted by the setting of the protagonist joining a group as a male idol and not quitting the group in the short term. Now I can fully understand the comments about the protagonist being solo. I would like to share some insights in the article before EXO explodes again. I hope the author can make up for some possible flaws before the plot explodes. The first reason why everyone wants the protagonist to play solo is that the abilities and charm of his teammates are not reflected. The protagonist is alone and cannot see the rationality of forming a group. Before this year, I was dismissive of groups such as boy bands and girl groups, and I followed European and American singers with all my heart. But after I accidentally discovered the charm of the groups, I couldn't help myself. I feel that each has its own characteristics and charm. That is the [diversity] and [complementarity] that members present together. To put it simply, diversity is like EXO having different types of handsome guys, including gentle, approachable, cool and cool guys, there is always one that suits you and attracts you; [diversity] and [complementarity] in terms of professional ability, some people have a wide vocal range but a thin voice, some have a narrow vocal range but a strong quality, and there will be unexpected beauty and harmony when harmonizing; some have a big dance frame and some have flexibility and strength at the same time, and they still have their own style when dancing together. This kind of [diversity] and [complementarity] in performances and visions is what makes solos so charming and attractive, and every group is unique because of its diversity. But what about EXO where the protagonist is? In addition to the main character Yan Hao who has strong singing ability and Chanyeol Sehun who is very handsome, after reading so many chapters, have you left any impression on the other members' professional abilities? Who sings well, has a nice bass, and loud treble? Who dances well, has smooth and eye-catching movements? Anyway, I have no impression at all. Personally, I think this is where the author failed in his description. Of course, I also thought about whether the person who should run has not finished yet, so the author wants to describe it in detail after everything has settled. The second and very important point is that the plot of the novel does not reflect the close relationship between the protagonist and other members. In other words, it does not reflect the [Group Soul]. I just joined a boy band this year, and the first group I fell in love with was because of the group spirit. The soul of the group is the daily lively activities of shopping for groceries and cooking, having fun together, eating and going out barefoot, and also the sweating in the practice room to support each other for a better performance and share the parts reasonably instead of everyone trying to grab the part. In several boy bands I like, the members are all willing to give appropriate parts to their teammates in order to make the overall performance more perfect, rather than taking the lead themselves. Switching back to the protagonist and his teammates, how much daily interaction does he have with the members? Who has such a good relationship with him that it breaks through the relationship between ordinary colleagues and teammates and elevates it to a brotherhood, giving readers a feeling that they can't bear to see him after leaving the group? None. A team reaching the summit will fall apart the moment it reaches the summit, because everyone wants to be solo and have greater interests. And I believe that after seeing the height of bulletproof reality, the author's ambition goes beyond that, so the writing method will quietly change. I really appreciate the personality and charm of the protagonist, and I also like his performance in a group with a group spirit. I hope he and EXO in the article will get better and better. By the way, let's take a look at how much Bulletproof's performance has broken the upper limit of Korean entertainment. It can be said that it has created a new way of writing Korean entertainment: there are five or six MVs that have exceeded 1.5 Billion views, and I think there are more than a dozen or even dozens that have exceeded 1 billion; they have won three or four Grammys; they have appeared on several major American talk shows, on the cover of Time magazine, etc.; Anyway, the albums and traffic are very good, and fans know better that I am too lazy to check. The Western media has hailed it as a music group comparable to the Beatles (if you don't know who the Beatles are... Just search on Baidu). Oh, by the way, member Jungkook sang the theme song at the opening ceremony of this year's World Cup. He is the only Asian to achieve this achievement in so many years. I liked that their songs were simply good at the beginning. Later, when I watched their live performance video, I was completely shocked: the difficulty of dancing is visible to the naked eye, and they dance and sing with the strength to break their bones. Their love and hard work for the stage, and their determination to present a visual feast to all audiences can be seen in their dance, eyes, movements, and breathlessness. He deserves to be famous. If the internal entertainment group can do this, I am willing to pay for it. If the protagonist wants to lead a group to the top, they should at least work very, very hard, so as not to make people feel that they are not qualified.

It feels like it would take ten million words to finish writing like this! But this is the best, a rare Korean entertainment article! The author's emotional descriptions are quite delicate, not cookie-cutter! Come on... Keep going, no eunuchs!

The writing is a bit unexpected, and it suits my taste. You can take a look. This book is written with a lot of brains. It is not a self-interested article, it is not literary, and it is not pretentious.

If the word count continues like this, the audience will run away

It's really water after taking it. You should drink more water.

The way Jung Soo-jung describes it... How should I put it, I really want to hate her. There are so many female characters, whether they are friends, girlfriends, or kidney transplants, but Jung Soo-jung is so annoying and so difficult that I, a woman, find it annoying to watch her. I had to endure it when she was in the spotlight.

There is a saying that the author's name is quite personal.

🙂Please give me more

No more water, brother

Open for support, when will I have a solo, a big boss will call me, I will withdraw first.

Rise up! Give me a boost!

You kid really knows how to stop suddenly! 😡

^_^

After browsing Bilibili, I discovered that BTS is an insult, but they still have a lot of domestic fans, and they don't seem to care at all. It really makes people sigh that the cultural invasion is really terrible, what's so big about the forest...

Nowadays, in Korean entertainment, there are few serious articles about male protagonists' debut as idols. Things are rare and valuable, and the writing is not bad. Come on 👍

At present, compared to other female characters, 🐧 is not very likable. I think there are several reasons: 1. The way to ascend. There is no problem with 🐧's superiority from a rational point of view. After 🍠 broke up with 🥬, the seamless connection was just a source of scum. But the problem is that there are more readers who like 🥬 and 🐟, which leads to those who like 🥬 feel that this is a cold war between young lovers and you have stepped in, and those who like 🐟 think that I am a unique cultivation system and you just go up without saying anything. Why? These lead to some likes 🥬 and 🐟 hates 🐧 2. Thief. In terms of portrayal, although the author strives to strengthen the side of 🐧 that dares to love, hate, and pursue decisively, but in terms of perception, it feels more like 🐧 is stealing, and the feeling of stealing is relatively heavy. The positive teaching material is Suzy. Although she is now starting to scheming to rise to the top, she does not have this problem because she is positioned as a bad woman and a queen of the sea. Watching and interacting with her is a kind of fun of fighting each other. No matter who wins, it is fun 3. The popularity of the character's characteristics. If we sum it up in a relatively simple and crude way, 🥬 is a gentle, awkward and pretty young lady, 🐟 is a little doormat sister who has a dark side, Suzy is a close confidante who gradually becomes more sincere as we go back and forth with each other, sana is a passionate and coquettish puppy, Tuya is a childish and contrasting "black fan" who loves to be her enemy, and 🐧 is a sultry, scheming and sexy dream girl. Among these characters, 🐧 is not as popular with readers as 🥬 who is a model heroine in Korean entertainment fandom and 🐟 who is the most beautiful person in the world. In terms of the characteristics shown in the article, they are not lovable because of the sense of stealing and licking dogs In summary, some readers including me don't like 🐧 very much, or they would rather let other female characters take the lead, which would be more interesting.

Sister Pei Saigao

The heroine is here

Let me talk about my own situation first. I don't watch Korean entertainment originally. Before reading the book, the four female protagonists had only heard of 🥬 and Bae🐇, but I had never heard of the group Twice. I read this book after reading Hong Kong entertainment articles and reading other people's entertainment articles and book recommendations. I think I can evaluate this book from a more objective perspective, rather than discussing it through the filter of a fan of the heroine. First of all, let's talk about the career line of this book. I think one of the highlights of this book is the successful creation of the protagonist's career line. Most other Korean entertainment articles do not describe the protagonist's career, but mainly focus on the protagonist's romance with various actresses. In this article, it can be seen that the author has carefully researched a lot of information. Various singing programs and song creations are described very naturally. After reading it, you will feel that this is the career development of Korean idols, instead of just using the name of a Korean actress and changing the name to a domestic entertainment star like other Korean entertainment articles. There is no sense of violation in the story. This book is very real and has the flavor of Korean entertainment. But after talking about the advantages, we must also talk about the disadvantages. Since breaking up with 🥬, the author has become obsessed with 🐧's fans. I feel that all my energy is focused on enjoying myself with 🐧, and I don't pay much attention to my career line. The author wrote from June 22 to January 24, and the time in the book is from the beginning of 2012 to July 2016. The protagonist's career has also gone from the debut of the street to the roaring sky, to the head-on confrontation with BigBang, and then to the domination of the world in the third album; the acting career has also developed greatly, and the emotional line has also been steadily advancing. The content written in this stage is informative and interesting. But after dating 🐧, the author wrote from January 24 to now. The time is the same as the first half. However, the time in the book only develops from August 2016 to August 2017. The time in the book is slower than the real time. And the career is not about anything big, just a ghost, a solo, and some fireworks. Originally, there was not much written about the career line, but the author was still pessimistic and could ramble on for a long time about one thing, which took away all the fun. Like a breakup with 🐧, starting from Taiyi Ping, the breakup happened throughout February. The readers were exhausted and unhappy at all. Coupled with the "late, please, and trouble" from time to time, it was really painful for those who read it. Secondly, the author also likes to write some chapters about the reactions of passers-by and fans, the plots of various supporting characters (helping SNSD to release and disband the album) and other copies. This does not mean that you cannot write these. Having these can make the novel more interesting and realistic, but the author writes many chapters at once, which seems to be indifferent to priority. Crazy writing of dungeons when the main plot is weak will make people feel that it is watery. The novel still needs to be detailed and appropriate. The next step is to talk about the emotional line of this book. So far, my favorability towards the four female protagonists is 🐟＞🥬=🐇＞🐧. (Although the order of appearance in my mind is 🥬＞🐟＞🐇＞🐧) 1🥬, 🥬From the disgust of the protagonist at the beginning, to the touching feeling of giving a hat to comfort on the bridge, to the ambiguity of Yin Yin CP, and finally realizing the formal relationship in the heart. The author has been laying the groundwork for this stage for a long time, so the rise of 🥬 seems very natural. During this period, 🥬's pride, self-esteem, gentleness and other characteristics are also well described, making her look like a gentle young lady. But the breakup seemed a bit abrupt and hasty. It broke up at the speed of light in just a few chapters, which was not at all in line with the relationship between 🍠 and 🥬 who had been ambiguous and passionately in love for nearly 2 years. It makes people look confused, and then connects quickly🐧. I understand the author's original intention of writing this book🐧, but at least there should be a few more foreshadowings, otherwise it will not be smooth at all, and readers who liked it in the early stage will be disgusted🐧. 2🐇,🐇The author's setting is very interesting, the King of the Sea versus the Queen of the Sea. From the initial hookup, the purely physical relationship, to the sincerity. During this period, 🐇's charms of intelligence, scheming, sense of propriety, and fun were all revealed. At the same time, due to their long-term relationship, 🍠 and 🐇 get along very naturally and easily, and it is also very relaxing and interesting for readers to watch the two fighting each other. (But I feel that it is difficult for 🐇 to rise to the top. There is a lack of a passionate love period between 🐇 and 🍠, and the two are more like relatives now) 3🐧 and 🐧 are the author's original intentions, and they are also the ones that spend the most pen and ink. Her emotional chapters account for almost half of the whole text. But the amazing thing is that after watching it, I changed from being a passerby at the beginning to hating it🐧. ①First of all, 🐧 has a serious sense of stealing. Unlike 🐇's blatant lover who is a "real villain", 🐧 is portrayed as a "hypocrite" thief. It may be that the author is eager to let 🐧 take the lead and does not provide enough preparation. 🐧 Was playing ambiguous games with 🍠 when 🍠 and 🥬 were in love, (some people may say that 🐧 didn't know that 🍠 and Baicai were in love at that time, but at that time she had already seen the intimate relationship between 🐇 and 🍠 in the nightclub, so Even if you don't know 🥬 and 🍠, you should also know 🐇 and 🍠) knowing 🐟's feelings for 🍠, but hiding the relationship between 🐟 and 🍠... All these things may be the author wants to express that 🐧 dares to love, hate, and pursue love bravely. But I dare to love because I saw it. After the breakup, the author spent a lot of pen and ink on the painful entanglement. I didn't dare to hate it at all. On the contrary, it made people feel that I was trapped in a cocoon and suffered on my own behalf. At the same time, this kind of description of stealing has offended readers who like 🥬 and 🐟. One thinks 🐧 is a third party, and the other thinks 🐧 is a thief. ②Secondly, the author's preference for 🐧 caused the collapse of 🍠's character. 🍠 Was originally an emotional prodigal, but ended up inexplicably getting together with 🐧 during a fireworks display. Many readers scolded me for this, which is not in line with 🍠's rank at all. The author wants 🐧 to be understandable, but there should also be more foreshadowing and more experiences of both parties to deepen the emotional foundation. Originally 🍠 and 🥬 were separated because of 🐇 and quickly connected 🐧, which is in line with 🍠's scumbag character. But after getting together with 🐧, 🍠 turned into an affectionate boyfriend inexplicably. He was still entangled in all kinds of difficulties after the breakup. He asked Taeyeon, asked favors, and asked Sasha. After the breakup, he still said that he was not suitable for a long-term relationship. It was really disgusting. Since you are so affectionate, why didn't you have any sad chapters when you broke up with 🥬? Why did you go to see fireworks and fall in love with 🐧 just after breaking up a few chapters ago? Co-authoring is only affectionate for 🐧? Then remove the 🥬 female protagonist card and just say 🐧 there is only one female protagonist, and the rest are female supporting characters, just foot-washing maids. Moreover, I wrote about the breakup in March, and now I still have to add drama to 🐧, and write a few chapters from time to time to describe the sadness and pain of 🐧. Understand the author's preference, but you must also pay attention to individuality and not affect the overall harmony of the article. Just like parents can favor a certain child, but it would not be appropriate if the family is separated because of favoritism. Everything should be done in moderation. ③🐧The charm is not described. The author keeps describing 🐧love🍠, tolerance🍠, like Yamato Nadeshiko. But unlike other heroines who each have their own charms, here 🐧 can only see her own burning love, but not her own charm. Reading through the entire article, 🐧's descriptions of charm focus on having a good figure and crying beautifully. It's okay if these are fans of 🐧. They have already obtained these points through various materials, and they will smile knowingly with the author. But as a passer-by, I am at a loss, just like the author assumes that readers are all fans of 🐧. He directly gives the conclusion instead of expressing these charming points through the plot. ④Readers are angry🐧. In the later period of this article, the author Meng Nan had a mental attack and described 🐧 in great detail. At the same time, the progress of the career line and the emotional line were weak. Coupled with various hydrology, the readers' dissatisfaction reached its peak, and they naturally turned their anger on 🐧. More than one reader responded 🐧The author is tired of writing, and the readers are even more tired of chasing. As a result, after breaking up with 🐧, many readers lamented that "we finally broke up." I felt the same way. Although I had some sympathy for 🐧's pain and depression after the breakup, I still couldn't like 🐧. To sum up, I think it is very funny. Obviously the author likes 🐧 the most and spends the most pen and ink, but the result is that the writing is the least pleasing. 🥬 And 🐟 have the highest fan value of 🐧. I hope the author will pay attention next. 4🐟, 🐟Although there is not much ink, they are indeed the most touching. First of all, the time of companionship is long enough. From 13 years to now, I have been by my side all the time, and the emotional bond is deep. This makes the development of 🐟's plot very natural. From the initial feeling of being a frustrated doormat to the proactive attack 🐟 after learning that 🐧🍠's relationship was broken, the plot foreshadowing is very reasonable, unlike 🐧 which is more blunt. At the same time, because they have been together for a long time and have deep feelings, 🐟 can be a sister to 🍠, and 🍠 can be arrogant and coquettish and ask for 🍠's attention without having to worry about losing a cold war boyfriend like 🥬; It can be a lover who stays with 🍠 after 🍠 breaks up. When 🍠 doubts 🐟's motives, through years of understanding, he can know 🍠's intentions and duplicity, and in turn, he can forgive 🍠 or even persuade 🍠🐧. The most exciting thing is that the heroine in this article has the most touching words. Like "When I pass by, I always feel that your car will be parked there", "I will keep pestering you", "Without you, Zhou Tzuyu would not be Zhou Tzuyu"... These large emotional scenes enrich 🐟's character and make 🐟's brave, emotional, romantic, strong and sensible characteristics and charm come to life on the page. I am not yet a fan of 🐟 in real life, nor do I pay attention to 🐟's information, but I am already a fan of 🐟 in the book. In comparison, even 🥬 lacks some emotional analysis and description. To sum up, I think this book will give 90 points for the fairy grass before breaking up with 🥬 and 60 points for the food after breaking up. Of course, this is just a family opinion, and everyone can discuss it rationally.

The fish lurks behind the dog and the rabbit's teeth break into pieces, The well water no longer invades the pool water. After the sea went out, the food also disappeared, leaving Emperor Yuan drunk day and night.

I didn't feel anything about the breakup before, but this breakup feels like the protagonist is a little broken. The scumbag has been hurt before, so he has to let others feel the hurt. The 🐧 is written so well, and the result is such a way to play it. And the most disgusting thing is that after you cheated on your girlfriend, all your friends and colleagues at the company knew about it, and then they broke up, causing problems in your career and relationship. Can't we just talk in private?

Sister Pei on the stage

Let's be promoted to heroine😁

I feel like Bae Suzy can be promoted to a heroine

I am just a stranger, and this is the first time I read a book about Hy. All the heroines and supporting characters in this book combined are not as good as Tzuyu! In short, except for Zhou Tzuyu, no one can fight! Without the character of Zhou Tzuyu, this book would not have achieved the results it has now. I hope the author understands the general outline and takes Zhou Ziyu as the center to control the harem. In this way, the author will be able to climb from the level of a great writer to the peak of a platinum writer!

This is Zhou Ziyu in this book. Although he is not a real relative, I really don't like this kind of character who acts recklessly based on the male protagonist's preference. In the comment area, I also saw people saying that Mina had a strong sense of superiority. I can only say that Mina's counterattack was very good: "Does the male protagonist know that he belongs to you?"